-..Jono..- vs Phantom
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting, d/r, hate, bs

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Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 08-21-04 at 01:46 AM

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-..Jono..- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 10:47 PM.

Aint a thug Phantom, Your as 'Straight' as you are 'Handsome'
Mixin a 'Low' "Dick-Ryder" Anthem, Fake Bitches ride 'Tandem'
Quit thinkin' your 'Good', your thug 'Mentalilitys' a Mistake
Come to my 'Hood' nigga, get dropped like a Whoo kid mixtape

You Couldnt win this shit, If I got Kiss to Prewrite your script
With the Lox on Lock, even Dj Quik cant spin your Shit 'Mix
A tribal warrior, always come to his battle more than Equipped
Even if i choked n got hit, my 'Spit' alone would beat your shit

Aint seen a thug, come out Cali since Ez' came outta Compton
If your the next generation, The west has begun to soften
This aint a military camp faggat, wit every 'head' needin cockin
this assault im not stoppin, Doin Circles around em' as if I was C-walkin...

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 03:18 AM.

"Jono" (you know) this battle is useless, im destined to win...
fuck u how i did ur mom, how did u think u got kin?...
i kill u on every level: metas, structure, and personals...
piss on you bathroom style and slam your face into a urinal..
ill win this battle easily, its a walk in the park..
have this "kid" scared of "phantoms" like hes alone in the dark...
my "cool" flow rams up your ass, im "chaffin" with "ices"...
u try rappin but it blows up in your face like safety devices*...
theres many a word to describe you: biter, herb, jocker...
you in this "game" for "kicks" and u have nonexistant "punches", kid try soccer!...
your "flyweight" "flows" just foat away like "mist"**...
you aint shit, just a tally to my k.o. list...

* airbags blow up
**hes a flyweight

u had a nice drop. lets see what voters think.....

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aye the rules say no recycling yet u have used that "c-walkin circles" line before. w/e no dq this time...

uppin . . . . . . .

Voted For: -..Jono..-

wow dis shit was wun sided as fukk 4real....phantom ya first line was worst da shit aint flow or nothin lmaoooo let me break my vote down tho

opener-jo...phan shit was wack!
structure-jo shit was real neat..phan ya lines was ond a other side of da page
punchlines-jo...hands down phan had a couple but htey wasn't fukkin w/ his
multis-nun
personals-jo da 9th line
creativity-umm a tie
finisher-jo
enjoyed-jo ofcourse...phan first off ya ryhme scheme is like a lil kidds step dat up u cant flow cuzz da shit u be sayin is retarded n datz basically it..n who u battled da 9 wins?? lmaoo...jo just ya ryhme scheme alone was beta than his whole verse just step ya punchlines n up n u'll be good..

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

uppity . . . . . .

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

upptiy. . . . . .

Voted For: Phantom

phantom i think had a better verse.. structure was coo on both sides, so was the wordplay, nice job from both, but phantom came a little harder to me, his punches stood out more and his verse was more entertaining, no hate..

return favor right here cuz, thanx.. here the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411

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Voted For: -..Jono..-

aye yo you came hard with the multies....good structure nd coo personals....you need to work on your merta4s and shit like that....phantom you came with heat but you just wasnt there..next time come al lil harder....

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aye heres the link that you can voteon if oyu want
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143523

uppity . . . . . .

up . . . . .

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

Voted For: Phantom

u try rappin but it blows up in your face like safety devices*...
you in this "game" for "kicks" and u have nonexistant "punches", kid try soccer!...
^^^^hotnesses.
your "flyweight" "flows" just foat away like "mist"**...
you aint shit, just a tally to my k.o. list...
^^^gay shit, dont end wit self glorification.

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jono-
Quit thinkin' your 'Good', your thug 'Mentalilitys' a Mistake
Come to my 'Hood' nigga, get dropped like a Whoo kid mixtape
^^^decent meta, but not a punch.. sayin what u will do to sumeone isn't a punch.

Aint a thug Phantom, Your as 'Straight' as you are 'Handsome'
Mixin a 'Low' "Dick-Ryder" Anthem, Fake Bitches ride 'Tandem'\
^^^good punch if he's in low ryders inc. should specify that though in your battle cuz i dont know.

anyway thats all i liked of your so it goes to the other cat.

need more wordplay punches both of you.

return the shit. with a well explained vote like i did on yours.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143415
bunch of votes were dq'd so explain please.

Voted For: Phantom

phantom took it

alright battle

easier to read than jonos..
jonos never really had punches
jsut kinda rhyming...

easy to see who won..

RETURN the vote on the MC naughty boya battle .. links in my sig

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ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

iight uppin....what he said ^^^ lmfao.............

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uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...

uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...

Voted For: Phantom

"Jono" (you know) this battle is useless, im destined to win...
fuck u how i did ur mom, how did u think u got kin?...

not feelin this too much...the first line was tight but i didn't like what you used below it..

i kill u on every level: metas, structure, and personals...
piss on you bathroom style and slam your face into a urinal..

dope

ill win this battle easily, its a walk in the park..
have this "kid" scared of "phantoms" like hes alone in the dark...

clever way to hype your name

my "cool" flow rams up your ass, im "chaffin" with "ices"...
u try rappin but it blows up in your face like safety devices*...

good punch

theres many a word to describe you: biter, herb, jocker...
you in this "game" for "kicks" and u have nonexistant "punches", kid try soccer!...the kicks and soccer line I've heard a lot before....so this was just aiight

your "flyweight" "flows" just foat away like "mist"**...
you aint shit, just a tally to my k.o. list...

very dope closer...




your turn Jono


Aint a thug Phantom, Your as 'Straight' as you are 'Handsome'
Mixin a 'Low' "Dick-Ryder" Anthem, Fake Bitches ride 'Tandem'

Decent use of multis...pretty good opener

Quit thinkin' your 'Good', your thug 'Mentalilitys' a Mistake
Come to my 'Hood' nigga, get dropped like a Whoo kid mixtape

Didn't like this

You Couldnt win this shit, If I got Kiss to Prewrite your script
With the Lox on Lock, even Dj Quik cant spin your Shit 'Mix

This was ok...first line was a lot better than 2nd


A tribal warrior, always come to his battle more than Equipped
Even if i choked n got hit, my 'Spit' alone would beat your shit


It was good..and wasn't at the same time...just because it was clever in the sense spit comes out when you get hit...but it's your "spit" that is what your using against him anyways...

Aint seen a thug, come out Cali since Ez' came outta Compton
If your the next generation, The west has begun to soften

not good...this isn't about who's a bigger gangster

This aint a military camp faggat, wit every 'head' needin cockin
this assault im not stoppin, Doin Circles around em' as if I was C-walkin...

not a good closer....

over all...i didn't like your verse too much...you have talent I can tell....your decent with multis...but I was diggin Phantoms verse much more..no hate....much respect...please return the favor...


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Voted For: -..Jono..-

Elevatin real nice doin it up big man 7/10 on personals punchlines 6/10 and flow 6/10 real nice homie keep it up

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Voted For: -..Jono..-

yo jono got dis hands down

jono

punches-9/10

meta'z-8/10

multi'z 10/10 (fire)

flow-9/10
-36

phantom

punches-9/10

meta'z-8/10

wordplays-10/10

flow-9/10
-28

it came down to strong multi'z and hard punches

yo jono return an fav da link its in my sig mayne

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aye cuz........those are the same scores you dumb fuck. strobe, can you handle that...

Voted For: -..Jono..-

jono had some hard punches and some good personals jono had good flow and structure and wordplay was good and so was createivity...
phantom you were ill but you didnt have alot of good punches... good structure do...

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ight, uppin..post 'Adequete' feedback, this was closed n now its re-opened...vote right, peace

ight, uppin, lets get this voted on with 'Adequete' feedback, or else votes get DQ'd, uppin for some votes

word^ uppin.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.

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ight, uppin for votes..post 'Adequete' feedback, or else shti will be DQ'd..hollah

Voted For: Phantom

Ill do this by quotables:

Jono
Quit thinkin' your 'Good', your thug 'Mentalilitys' a Mistake
Come to my 'Hood' nigga, get dropped like a Whoo kid mixtape
You Couldnt win this shit, If I got Kiss to Prewrite your script
With the Lox on Lock, even Dj Quik cant spin your Shit 'Mix
Those were it, not even really quotables, jus your best lines...not really a strong verse...you had some lines that couldve been good punches...but u messed them up and they came out blah!

Phantom
theres many a word to describe you: biter, herb, jocker...
you in this "game" for "kicks" and u have nonexistant "punches", kid try soccer!...
ill win this battle easily, its a walk in the park..
have this "kid" scared of "phantoms" like hes alone in the dark...
your "flyweight" "flows" just foat away like "mist"**...
you aint shit, just a tally to my k.o. list...
Those were the lines that hit the hardest....I especially like the "Scared of Phantom" line...too bad this is the only time you can use it, lol...anyway...

v/phantom

This was feedback posted for Phantom
 

juss checkin