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For$akeN vs G:Deuce
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10 Max Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting A.I Vs PSA (crew battle) Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-23-04 at 02:34 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
G:Deuce has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 10:35 AM.
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For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 11:56 AM.
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murder you casually there's no need to be formal
his rhyme's aren't "build" in "strength" their "ab"normal blah like black eyed peas lets get this shit started leave in fashion voice "eckos" because im the "target" this kid can flow...if he learns how to even pee give this fake a house so he can learn how to key Pot Smoker's alliance you think you really dope? you ain't meant for spotlight I cant see u with scope leave the site like Polifick, or get banned like Prolicx before you die you see the ring...you watched the olympics good luck deuce...quick key |
Ight lets do dis....
When I’m speaking combustible lines, untouchable rhymes that rape men Lyrically defined as who rip the mind of For$aken Atomic Reac –Tons of metaphors that rattle pores Odds are stacked; you won’t “survive this battle”, nor “win the war” Cause I will severely sever every gene that “claims”, but “utters deceit” He’s “Artificially” enhanced, but programmed not to spit, but utter defeat (A.I.) You’re a machine, but neither one of us is human, a lyrical fact (The Grim Reaper) Cause even machines made of metal can be turned to “piles of scrapes” The creator of death can’t be destroyed by lies or “inanimate” things So give it a rest, The Reaper just descended the rise of the machines |
coo drop, lets get the votes started...................................
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G dat shit was sic u got
diss battle under RAPS -[P-S-A]- WE RUNNIN DISS RAP SHIT |
Voted For: For$akeN
For$akeN-yo punches were hard & connected..good structure..nice flow..and nice vocab.. G:Deuce-yo punches were hard to..tha flow was ok..and u had a nice flow too Overall- my vote goes to For$akeN..just had a little harder punches than G:Deuce |
WTF? What kinda vote was that? I thought if we in elevated we will get past all the newb votes? Anywayz, uppin for votes................
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Voted For: G:Deuce
Reaper Wins By A Margian His Vocab was oustanding And Uplifting Forsaken You Chipped A Few Lines You tried To Force Things Occasionally And You My Name LoL Bestline-When I’m speaking combustible lines, untouchable rhymes that rape men Lyrically defined as who rip the mind of For$aken 9.2/10 Worsteline-You’re a machine, but neither one of us is human, a lyrical fact (The Grim Reaper) Cause even machines made of metal can be turned to “piles of scrapes” 8/10 kinda forcred Forsaken Bestline leave the site like Polifick, or get banned like Prolicx before you die you see the ring...you watched the olympics 8.7/10 Worstline- this kid can flow...if he learns how to even pee give this fake a house so he can learn how to key Forced Punch 8/10 Winner-G |
^hhahahaha thought you left mayn~!!????????!!! oh well I guess you came back LMAO that screwed my punch up :( |
Why wont no one tell me how to change the color of my title? Please someone........................Still uppin
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...highlight=codes ^theres the link to all the codes...^ but you have to buy a new user title to get it all to fit... you can thank me later:) |
Voted For: G:Deuce
[size=1] murder you casually there's no need to be formal his rhyme's aren't "build" in "strength" their "ab"normal 6/10 blah like black eyed peas lets get this shit started leave in fashion voice "eckos" because im the "target" 5/10 this kid can flow...if he learns how to even pee give this fake a house so he can learn how to key 5/10 Pot Smoker's alliance you think you really dope? you ain't meant for spotlight I cant see u with scope 4/10 leave the site like Polifick, or get banned like Prolicx before you die you see the ring...you watched the olympics 5/10 When I’m speaking combustible lines, untouchable rhymes that rape men Lyrically defined as who rip the mind of For$aken 6/10 Atomic Reac –Tons of metaphors that rattle pores Odds are stacked; you won’t “survive this battle”, nor “win the war” 6/10 Cause I will severely sever every gene that “claims”, but “utters deceit” He’s “Artificially” enhanced, but programmed not to spit, but utter defeat (A.I.) 6/10 You’re a machine, but neither one of us is human, a lyrical fact (The Grim Reaper) Cause even machines made of metal can be turned to “piles of scrapes” 5/20 The creator of death can’t be destroyed by lies or “inanimate” things So give it a rest, The Reaper just descended the rise of the machines 6/10 Came down 2 overall harder punches and better wordplay this was an ok battle but in my eyes Deuce had better wordplay and a better stucture more complexity and his punches werent forced seemed liked they came natural and had a nice string to them |
uppin for votes............................................. ........
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Voted For: For$akeN
yo dis goes to forsaken hands down man ey yo G duece man wat happned dawg?, yo heres how it went down, forsaken- u had struc n ur wordplay was way over matched dawg, u had punches n they hit hard n at really took it ova da top was da vocab, G duece- yo ur struc was iite n it all made sense tho rite but ur punches were ki nda weak dawg, but it was all good dawg jus keep elevetan that shit, yall return da favor NO HATE! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144742 |
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...for god sakes... get out of here no offense to Deuce tho... I don't see DV coming in here glorifying me dayum UPPIN....(3) |
Voted For: G:Deuce
im gonnahave to give htis toyou..this was a alrite crew battle when oyur in a crew battle you have to try your best..it seems as if youguys barely tried...but you just tried alil harder then the comp/...good shit |
This was feedback posted for For$akeN
forsaken won I think but I cant vote I was a AI and migght become one if DV lets me in but this is my feedback
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Voted For: G:Deuce
good battle close battle Forsaken: yourts was good and it had some good punches and personals but it didnt hit as hard your was a ili of and some lines wwerent good G duece: your shit was ok but your strucure was a lil messed but you had better punches Vote Gduece |
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still uppin............................................. ..................................
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uppity up up eh///////////////////////!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
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Voted For: G:Deuce
i think duece took this one with harder punches, and more and better personals..this was a good battle, defintely not one-sided...forsaken had a nice flow, with hard punches and shit duece, nice metas and multies... drop votes in the weeks shameful rappers poll people good flow ONLY HONEST PLEASE |
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