Milk-E-Wae vs Fr3MiSoul
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

just come wit ur best dickhead!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-23-04 at 05:18 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Fr3MiSoul has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 05:19 PM.

ok listen up, i dont even have to rhyme to whip ur ass
ur wack, u cant fight either, so bring ur ass to my crib and i'll prove it to ya... thats it, this is all i gotz to drop motherfucker!

Milk-E-Wae has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 05:23 PM.

i pull this trigger, quicker, and throw splinters with rhymes/
have u pissed off, like cartman n a long lunch line/
u couldnt come back wit half the shit i express/
not fast enuff if even if u worked at fed ex/
and trust me, it wont take much 2 beat u/
i seen ur last battle, all u did wuz rap bout poop/
give it up, ur thru/ walk out the door/
its ok that ur now 0-4

dude... u suck.. but newayz.. uppin for votes.... ..

Voted For: Milk-E-Wae

ok, well Fr3MiSoul, u told me to vote honestly, but u really do suck man... my vote goes 2 milk, only cuz he actually rapped, and the cartman line wuz pretty funny 2

This was feedback posted for Fr3MiSoul
 

um???...im not votin but um....any of you two wanna battle???

This was feedback posted for Milk-E-Wae
 

both of yal mothafuckas suck why don't yal come holla at me

Someone get at me i wanna battle so eps if ya man enough then get at me

Voted For: Milk-E-Wae

Milk took this with just a better verse. You need work on structure, punches, wordplay, the whole deal. But that's quite understandable 'cuz you're new. Fr3MiSoul, if you want to win a battle, you have to put some effort into it. 2 lines won't get you a victory unless it's a punchline battle...No hate to either of you though, keep doin' ya thing...
Vote - Milk-E-Wae

Return the favor, honest votes only:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...518716&posted=1

Voted For: Milk-E-Wae

easy lol. Milk E Wae takes this hands down. Nice punches but does need a lil work. Fr3MiSoul, that was SHIT lmfao. erm, yeh u do need to rhyme and no, thats not all you "gotz to drop"

Easy vote: Milk-E-Wae

Please return the favour by voting fairly in my battle with Word Processor

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.... ight then, i'll return the favor .................

Voted For: Milk-E-Wae

word man this is'nt even worth battle a dick head like this cuzz he didn't rhyme he was to short dude i say milk-e-way had
puchlines
multies
everything thats my vote milk

Voted For: Milk-E-Wae

madly weak battle....... if thats what u wanna call it.

ok listen up, i dont even have to rhyme to whip ur ass
ur wack, u cant fight either, so bring ur ass to my crib and i'll prove it to ya... thats it, this is all i gotz to drop motherfucker!
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what what what, that didn't eve rhyme, wasn't a punch or personal and awful sturcture. it doesn't really get anyworse than that. at least u swore, if u didn't i woulda swore that u were 8 years old.

i pull this trigger, quicker, and throw splinters with rhymes/
have u pissed off, like cartman n a long lunch line/
^^^nice metaphor, but not a punch. so not good in a battle, but u win with your ability to compare two things, shows your more elevated than the other kid.

return wit a discriptive vote here.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143415
all the votes got dq'd for inadiquate feedback so if your ganna vote make it adiquate.

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