DangerousMyndLunatic vs BostonLyricist
 

Battle Rules:

6- 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

no feedin off threads..ight ma show and prove

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-24-04 at 05:08 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DangerousMyndLunatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 05:12 PM.

BostonLyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 05:13 PM.

boston son holla back

i drop dat cristal ball on ya girl dancin go-go
your not beautifull,money and a sex change is the # 1 dream of a ho-mo..
dangerous as a dog wit no teeth or snake wit no fangs
your couch so warn out from prostitutin it just hangs
your like a parkin meter only works when money added
fuck you wit dat snikers bar till ya face is pink and hairs matted...(since you hungry)
you from da south so i'll bring it to your level
YEAH..stupid dumb bitch you just won the hoe of the year medal...
pop you wit a shinel stielltto,pull ya weave out since you think you ghetto...
lunatic not even close more of a groupie wit warts...
couldntb e in a rap game..if it was made from ea sports
i know ya prom date busted in ya eye,and video taped it
when you at scholl you see him cummin all the time and you hate it...
boston mami east coast not the south i show you crunk
bunmp some lil john,beat dat ass,do some off radin wit you in the trunk..
this verse isnt even metaphorically sound but i come wit a more dangerous mind...
them bumps in ya butt..dont mean its gettin bigger ma..thats a hemroids sign...

holla at cha boi ma..we can be friends later

Alright' I Got You .. I've Accepted The Challenge If There Is One.. I'm A Bit Rusty Been Off The Job For Quite Some Time... But Yet Another Froupie Bitch To Bring Up Into The Mix.. Can't Rap But 'Cums' To Forums And Starts Suckin Dick.. .

First and for most all my rhymes are authentic,
If i pissed in your mouth, impressive wouldn't be a contraceptive,
Notoriously my victims trying to find an easy exit,
I'm a cheater cause i killed ya? Don't be mad, just accept it,
I effaced the kid 'BostonLyricist' <is like a groupie?, hoe i ain't Ricky martin,
Easy off my clit, You cant finish what you startin?

Only time your hard, is when u like ur mom's compartment)

The supremacy took time, too view me like an epic,
My identity is "DangerousLunatic", bourne to reign on all skeptics,
Bostonlyricist give up the antics, u can't ball i'm a Cetltic

Ok What Happened.. That Like Cutt Off Half My Verse?

****Suppose To Read****

Alright' I Got You .. I've Accepted The Challenge If There Is One.. I'm A Bit Rusty Been Off The Job For Quite Some Time... But Yet Another Froupie Bitch To Bring Up Into The Mix.. Can't Rap But 'Cums' To Forums And Starts Suckin Dick.. .

First and for most all my rhymes are authentic,
If i pissed in your mouth, impressive wouldn't be a contraceptive,
Notoriously my victims trying to find an easy exit,
I'm a cheater cause i killed ya? Don't be mad, just accept it,
I effaced the kid 'BostonLyricist' <is like a groupie?, hoe i ain't Ricky martin,
Easy off my clit, You cant finish what you startin?

Only time your hard, is when u like ur mom's compartment)

The supremacy took time, too view me like an epic,
My identity is "DangerousLunatic", bourne to reign on all skeptics,

(Bostonlyricist give up the antics, u can't ball i'm a Cetltic)

Lyricist petitioned to encage, enraged and now he's famous,
Relish the fact, that u r graced, with our greatness,
Trying to be sly, Your performance is fucking rocky,
Dodgy, news flash kid, you hurt no fuckin body,
U've copied old insults and dropped sincerely sloppy,
Exulted, next time consult, before u act all cocky,
Absorbing abuse can't be your newfound hobby,
Cause u'll get slap shots, like bret hull playing hockey,!

Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

v/ DML

DML-ok verse no rela punches blah expected better got rusty.........vocab dont matter its punches, ok metafours......what happened to you?lol

BL-blah crappy verse.......shitty sturcute...no pnuches man elevate amd dont use PLAYEd [unches ala sex punches if you had 1 good one you ccouldve won

pz

Voted For: BostonLyricist

ok dangerous flow was off and punches aint hit disses were weak here too 2/10
boston dope verse here good hard ass punches and disses''ho of the year medal''lmao and ho-mo''lol yo your shit was dope sun good vocab flow was caught easy but slipped in a few places still good shit8/10

^^thats a fucking hater vote boston had no punches? :huh: thats why i have you blacklisted you dr vote no hate ma but boston smashed you here

Voted For: BostonLyricist

imma start this one off wit DML...flow was ight but not too handlin...some places were on there verge of not making since and some wouldve been coo if you put it in good wordplay, your wordplay was awful, and yo structure was poor...practice...you did come hard in that last bar, but a lil too late


BL-nice flow, nice structure...you had hard punches and more personals, but i wasnt feelin yo style too much. some bars were missing words and some bars had too many words...but all around flow was nice...

overall-this was a nice flow, but DL took it. like i said DML you tried to make a comebac too late and thats wut made you lose my vote...cause i think BL came more consistent from start to finish in this one

good battle tho

yea i feel the same as empire, BUT...its yo vote playa...cant nobody really say you a DR or Hater except you so.... :thumbup:

no okay all off BL punches were played....look at em.........DMLS were all sex but blah a little better...only good punch was hemroids but he worded it awkward...

Voted For: BostonLyricist

gotta give it here his ryhmes were nice as shyt his flow was way betta n his punchlines were iight but he knows he can do betta Holla

Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

(DML)
First and for most all my rhymes are authentic,
If i pissed in your mouth, impressive wouldn't be a contraceptive,
^nICE LINES WAY 2 HIT

(BOST)
you from da south so i'll bring it to your level
YEAH..stupid dumb bitch you just won the hoe of the year medal...
^^Line ruiner right there., It was...trash man UPPIN' Elevate

Return the favor.

Voted For: BostonLyricist

both of ya were iight i guess but i gotta give this to BL cos he had better stuuctre, flow punches and perosnals DML this want not ya best verse though ya had good wvocab but ya need ta try harder ya came more garder in other battles so i gotta give this to BL for a better veres

Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

Aight nothing too special in this battle,both were nearly above decent.
Boston,you had some OK personals and punches in your verse
and I feel like you couldve reworded some of the lines because they didnt flow smoothly.Your structure was so-so,but some of your stuff was too basic.Not too too bad of a verse.
Dangerousmynd,your verse was a lot shorter and more enjoyable to read although you had some crappy personals and punches in there but your verse was better because your punches hit a lil harder than bostons.If you both worked on your structures you'd be alot better.And also,reword some of your lines,some dont make too much sense (to both of you).

Keep elevating and goodwork.

V/ Dangerousmynd.

This was feedback posted for BostonLyricist
 

he think he a killa but we gonna pay him a visit/...put a potato on the barrell so nobody here it/...

Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

dan...-
punches-4/10
stuture-5/10
overall verse-4.5/10
OVERALL COUNT 13.5/30
boston-
puches-7/10
stuture-3/10
overall-5/10
overall count-15/30
winner-bos

Voted For: BostonLyricist

Aiight, Aight..

This Is Too Close To Judge lol..
But I'ma Have To Do It Anyway...

..........Dangerous, Ya Flow Was hella Nice, Ya Structure Lacked n Ya Humourless Punches We're A MAJOR FLAW, But Other Then That, Ya Had Decent Flow, Decent Vocab An Some KickAss Personals, Add Humour To Ya Punches, You'll Find It Gets You ALONG Way, (No Hate, Just Bein Honest)

Boston, Ya Flow Was Aight, Failed To Drop The Complex Vocab But Ya Punches n Metas Hit REAL Hard, n Ya Structure Was Decent, So U Got My Vote..

Return The Favor Ya'll..

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