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DrasticMeasureZ vs lil wayne
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5-BARZ No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-24-04 at 05:26 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
lil wayne has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 05:29 PM.
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DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 05:31 PM.
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Ill "stab" you in "both of your kidneys, five times for each one, then tear them piece-for-piece"//
thats "ten knife puncture wounds", and instead of "liquid waste gettin exerted, your blood sould excrete"// dis nigga wants to be like lil.wayne i just put my sour dick in yo mouth den u will sound like wayne// Ill "chop your body in pieces" like a "jigsaw puzzle", then cremate your remains// Ill "disconnect your life", by "slittin your throat makin you choke on your own blood", and "rippin out your arteries and veins"// you "winnin this battle is insane" like "Charles Mansons thoughts and brain, jus ill minded"// Ill "turn you into eminem" by blastin you in the "dome wit peroxide", and leavin you wit "swelled head", and "idolized like stevie wonder" and "left temporarily blinded"// Ill put "24" in your "front and sides" like "nascar Jeff Gordons car and number"// (even tho my clip holod 16 haha) Ill "send a bullet to meet your spinal cord" and leave you "crippled paralyzed and unconscious" sleepin in a "dark slumber"// Ill "shove my rectum down your throat" and make you "eat my dookie" and you still couldnt "spit ill yuk mouth shit"// you can "stab me wit needles infected by AIDS in my bloodstream" and it still "couldnt transmit into me" you dumb bitch// (scared to get inside (1O LINES) |
IM drasticly diseased, ima kill this Bitch thats why im spittin ILL
i thought this bitch was a man but i figured out this bitch was takin abortion pills my temper Measurez my spits cuz I Spit Mad You can SEE what I Can Make Battlin ME? Callin me A Pussy? Ima kill this bitch, spittin is A RISK YOU CAN TAKE Bitch Please get the fuck off my balls stop callin me a pussy, challegin me was a mistake Knock THis Bitch Out, its like a boxing ring im k-o this bitch and actually knock his ass awake Better Watch-Out cuz when your spittin lookin at my verse, your lookin at your fate Better Surrender because your Al Queda and your gunna get bombed up like kuwait This Bitch Is Worried More About Me Beating Him More Then A Fat Kid Worryin About Cake MY verse will slither around your head, while you sleep, slithering more sickned then a snake |
Yoooooooooooooooooooooooooo Uppin Dis Shit
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Come On Dont Sleep On Dis One Mayne Uppin
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Voted For: lil wayne
I didnt really think either verse was that dope but heres my breakdown... lil wayne~you had some decent punches and then some wack ones, your flow was pretty good and ur vocab coulda been better~7.5/10 Drastic~Your punches were on an even level but ur lines were stretched out and thats wat ruined ur flow but u had da vocab on this one~7/10 |
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
drastic takes this on way better punches and personals...multies...good flow...structure was aight...the other cat had an aight verse...coulda been alot better...both need to elevate a lil bit more...vote drastic...was just harder |
I respect the vote but he didn't have nice structure... and structure doesnt matter in text so O well. Bump
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
good personals nice punchlines u merked this cat good flow but yall both talked about killin each otha |
This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
I cant vote yet but Drastics shit was dope.
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Aight Danx Fo Da Feedback Upppin Dont Sleep On Dis One
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y uppin plz vote vote i'll return fav'z
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Whoeva Again Close Dis Battle By End Of The Day I Will Return Favor'z Yo Just Vote
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
Drastic measures killed him with the (disses) not really punches... lines were stretched all to hell but the shyt he was coming up with was as Ill as the first part of my name... lil wayne... ya vocab gotta be more than spit, spittin', bitch, spit bitch and spittin'... that's pretty much all ya verse consisted of.. no punches thrown at all... real weak verse...structure was ok but ya did nothing with it... lmao... can't believe Dras said "dookie"...ctfu... what the fuck, chuck!lmao... funny shyt...no pun intended... ok battle v/dras |
Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
Lilwayne: Bullshit, that's all I can say. What the hell was with "Bitch bitch bitch?" No creativity man, I hate when people just do that. Oh "this bitch"... or "this nigga can't pull shit..." or "your a faggot, can't you just accept it, faggots are gay, you might as well not spit shit" or other shit like that. That is both boring and highly played, just like your verse. No beef intended though. Though serious, I've got lyricists block at the moment but I stillpulled a much better verse than you did gainst Drastik. Drastik: Better verse than against Blood4hOUND, BETTER PUNCHES AND FLOW, VOCAB ACTUALLY WORKED THIS TIME but you're still starting every bar with I'll. It ain't a good way of rappin man, not at all. Much better vers than Waynes though. V. DrastikmeasureZ |
Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
This Battle was Mostly Made Up Of Wordplay And Metas no Real Personals But Imma Give This One To Drastic Coz Of His Better Use Of Vocab..........His Sructure Was A lil Off In Places But Didn't Effect Tha Flow......Lil Waynes Last Line Was A lil Stretched And Messed Tha Flow A Bit....... Still Had Sum Nice Wordplay/Punches But Thought Drastics Vocab And Punches Were Better.....Drastic ,Thought This Was One Of Your Better Lines: you "winnin this battle is insane" like "Charles Mansons thoughts and brain, jus ill minded"// Ill "turn you into eminem" by blastin you in the "dome wit peroxide", and leavin you wit "swelled head", and "idolized like stevie wonder" and "left temporarily blinded"// |
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