Flooze vs Eyvon
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-24-04 at 08:17 PM

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Flooze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 09:57 PM.

Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 02:55 PM.

So what, you know about a sweet femcee, in the 313
You don't know shit so when you see one flee
You can be Run-D, you'll never beat the femcee
I'll stop the alphabet at S and got it down to a T
I'm sure your bound to agree, a sweet femcee crashes the spot
I'll make the roof hot like I was Rock Master Scott
Your ass forgot, so just in case you don't remember me
I'll run your brain around the block to jog your fucking memory
It's either them or me man, kill or be killed
You will and be sealed your casket closed you still gonna be billed
My facilities filled with fans, packed to capacity
I'll send a rapper back with the crack of his ass shitty
If he's acting soft and he cowers
He better come cleaner then Jay Rue jacking off when he showers
You flowers got no clout with a thing
You could date a stick of dynamite and wouldn't go out with a bang
I showered the slang, simple as A,B,C's
Skip over the D's and rock the microphone with E's
Dethrone femcee's and I'ma max alone
Relax your dome like a solo from a saxophone
So facts are known, writers get treated with shocks
I rock a beat harder then you could beat it with rocks
I'm greeted with flocks, of fellow follower's singers
You couldn't make the fans throw up their hands if they swallowed their
fingers
But you can bring yours let's see what you got
But don't front and never try to be what you're not
Cause you can be quick, jump the candlestick, burn your back
And fuck Jill on a hill, but you still ain't Jack

lookin fo votes!!
vote Eyvon, tha fuckin greatest!

flooze betta show. motherfucker betta not b no no-show or ima beat his ass.
UPPIN!

Chizeck...

Aight I dont feel like battling so I'll just drop whatever.

U too ashamed to show in FL so U PM to have a text only confrontation...
Like the Chicago Bulls after Michael U aint competition...
Hottest femcee? Ha at least 3 others have claimed that title...
Ur shit is wack,0-1? U need mad rehearsal or at least 'flow' on Ur stationary cause Ur shit is 'Idle' (???)...
Don't forget what?? How fucking wack Ur shit is? Or just the easy victory I claim over U?
Bitch Ur so manly I could be called gay sticking sumuthing 'hard' up in U.

wack verse.Blah I dont care.Uppin 4 votes.

up.

cmon yall.....................UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

up.

UpPiN yALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
please, this shit is gittin BORING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin for votes....

Voted For: Flooze

yeah flooze it was whak, only hers was whacker. eyvon, i saw nothing but self glorification and wannabe punches in ur verse, elevate on that. flooze, droppin verses like THAT im forever gunna wonder how you made da council. but at least your had punches that swung at least. bad sructure. elevate homie.

v//flooze

uppin 4 votes...

Voted For: Eyvon

yo dis grl killed tha battle she nice as shyt her rhymes were nice as shyt her flow was killin it n her punchlines were great

that kinda sounds d/r or bull vote.^^.even with my weak punches I wooped her ass.She was self glorifying and having weak punches and shit.But w/e. uppin...

Voted For: Eyvon

eyvon took it...harder punches...betta flow...betta overall content...

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Fuck these are bullshit...uppin...

uppin. ha, im winning!
(Flooze, just admit, u lose!)

UPPIN YALL!!!

^lol Ur so wack. Read your shit. I dropped quarter-assed, if U havent noticed.

Voted For: Eyvon

Vote: envyon

Lyrics: e
Punches: e
Multies: e
Wordplay: e
OPening:f
ending: e

Overall: Envyon

I like da way flooze tries to validate his wack ass verse by sayin he aint inmood...joker..lol

lol. flooze, i could have 3 fuckin votes now but it was disqualified. just admit i won!

uppin. i need a win! (seriously, i need it bad...)

Voted For: Eyvon

Evyon -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Flooze -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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I dont even use this account so I couldnt care less wether I lose or win.

sure... u just tryin 2 save yo dignity that u losin 2 a female. well ITS-TOO-LAAATE!!! ha ha!

UPPIN!

This was feedback posted for Eyvon
 

checin it out

vote 4 me!
(...................NOW!!!!!...................)

uppin, i could have 4 but 2 got disqualified... (thanx a lot guys...)

Voted For: Eyvon

evyon more wordplay and way betterpunches...
personals blah were good...
flow was good...
so was structure...
i'd give evyon a 10/10
flooze needed more wordplay and harder punches...
flow was way off...
structure well at least i could read it...
i'd give urs a 5/10
so evyon wins this battle...

Voted For: Eyvon

oo tricky flow and nice as punches, i think that Eyvon prepared a lot more but that is ok it was cool to read, vote to evon

aight. uppin

This was feedback posted for Eyvon
 

lol...iight jusy dropping a feedback...

eyvon u got a gd vocab and gd punches...my only advice is to make ya lines of the same length so it flows better and ur verses will be hot...

flooze i felt ya verse big time..ur last line was funny yo....and nah-ah ur verse wasnt wack it was cool...

both were good...


peace

thanx so no hate on us right Yvonne?

Voted For: Eyvon

That was siiiiiiick

nice verse eyvon, real humouress punches...
I showered the slang, simple as A,B,C's
Skip over the D's and rock the microphone with E's
Dethrone femcee's and I'ma max alone
Relax your dome like a solo from a saxophone
So facts are known, writers get treated with shocks
I rock a beat harder then you could beat it with rocks
I'm greeted with flocks, of fellow follower's singers
You couldn't make the fans throw up their hands if they swallowed their
fingers
^^^^^^^^
The best part of the battle, humouress, witty, smart, hard hittin...

eyvon got this battle hands down