G vs Empire
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Check in by: 08-22-04 at 01:14 AM

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G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 12:45 AM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 12:50 AM.

I slice this his fat out of his face, make his appearance droopy,
cuz “Empire”s verse ‘bombs’, and is pointless like Fat Joe’s movie*!
You “dickride and scream” whackness, just like a “scared slut”,
I “fade” this bitch with ease, like a professional hair-cut!
Crack him like an egg, flip him, and make him fry snappy,
Stab him, and piss on his corpse…so he can “die-nasty”.**


*”Empire”..a gayass movie that didn’t make much money featuring Fat Joe.
**Empire..Dynasty (Die-Nasty)…get it.

–Youll get it.

This real simple black and white like old ass movies(a
You couldnt stall on my verse if you was a broke ass hoopty(1
Yous a fan listen STAN yous a joke ass groupie
And ya shit will turn out burned out like a old ass lucy(2)
Uneffective punches couldnt hold weight if you write in a gym
Ya shit need too elevate you like a kite with no wind


a)black and white means its real simple to understand
1)metaphore he couldnt stall on my verse if he was a broke ass hoopty hooptys is always stalling
2)a lucys a cigareette thats what we call them in new york

Voted For: G

[size=1]G gets my vote..harder punches..structure & flow was good..6/10

Empire..yo verse was good too..nice structure & flow..punches could've been a lil'harder..then u would've got my vote..4/10

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This was feedback posted for Empire
 

:::;clap:::; to both

both kept me interested so i read each
verses twice, and i'm votin carefully

flow: empire
meta's: G ( you ARE the meta king)
punches: empire
(G 's meta's and punhes were one in the same, and you should ty to get credit for both)
structure:empire
overal vote: empire

**explained**

ok someone hit up my battle

they should be almost at the top in frontlines

~1~

Good shit, Good battle.

ProVerse: I didnt get that one comment about mah punches and metas.

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Voted For: G

this was a coo battle but i think g took it because of more and better punches, he line was a punch, and they made since...he came consistent from the beginning to the end, and he had nice personal

empire-had a nice vote but i think he came soft, his punches did hit, and his rhyming was the wackest i seen from himn yet...all around ok flo altho...keep elevating

overall- g took it with better wordplay and a all around better flow

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Voted For: Empire

This battle was pretty even, but Empire pulled it out with a good finisher. Overall both of you had good structure, wordplay and punches. I didn't really see any personals though, but it don't really matter since both of you came with some hard punches, good battle.
Vote - Empire

Return the favor, honest votes only:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...518716&posted=1

Voted For: Empire

u had the flow and the punchlines. u need to put in a few more punches that was hot though keep it up man

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Empire had better structure flow punchlines it was close but in the end Empire got this one because he was just a little better

Voted For: Empire

I say Empire has this one!.. his flow was way better.... alright wordplay and some good multis... so my vote goes to empire!

Crasher!!

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Voted For: G

Structure - Tie, both of the lines were even, nne stretched

Punchlines - I honestly liked G's a little more, more creative and he utilized words more, like the fade thing, plus he doesn't need to explain all of them..

personals - none really stuck out, they would of helped too..

Wordplay - both was nice, both sides had okay rhymes the sounded well, and both had nice flow..

Overall - it came down to who had the less played punches and it was G, you win this because of better and more entertaining content that made for a better verse.. no hate, i got a battle with him too, but this was honest as hell..

return the favor cuzo, with a drop in mines, thnx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411

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Voted For: G

I slice this his fat out of his face, make his appearance droopy,
cuz “Empire”s verse ‘bombs’, and is pointless like Fat Joe’s movie
8/10 good opener, and good personal maybe

This real simple black and white like old ass movies
You couldnt stall on my verse if you was a broke ass hoopty
hmmm kinda same rhyme scheme and i have no idea what a hoopty is 5/10

Crack him like an egg, flip him, and make him fry snappy,
Stab him, and piss on his corpse…so he can “die-nasty”.
this is a good closer with a decent personal on the last line 8/10

Uneffective punches couldnt hold weight if you write in a gym
Ya shit need too elevate you like a kite with no wind
not a good closer at all, the shit dont even rhyme unles you pronounce gym like gime, but yeh 4/10

overall G took this with better wordplay and makin me laugh a bit

Voted For: G

oh shit tht was mad funny.I am lovin this ni99as punches and his metas U took thsbattle justbecause of them.Thats my opinion.!!

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Voted For: G

v/G

G had the better flow better verse, better wordplay, used multis and had way better punches, empires verse was good but just not as hard