DrasticMeasureZ vs Demon Pyrokronix
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-04 at 03:46 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Demon Pyrokronix has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 07:12 AM.

Call me doctor Kron/ one and only lyrical surgeon,
I'll operate and diagnose you to be a H.O.S emergin (Hall of shamer),
Ya measures ain't workin/ might as well pack in and quit,
Dunno what drastik means but I bet young boys don't benefit,
No one's cares when you die/ we'll sing songs and rejoice,
I wanted to battle BANG/ accepting ya challenge was second choice, (see "Time to go out with a Bang... bang")
Burn you to fuck ,leave ya madevolls and externals charred,
You want beef? Then start, we'll make ya home the graveyard,
God's creation of you was a fuckin quirk that went too far,
Coz your chaces of merkin Demon are about as empty as your avatar.

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 10:50 AM.

Ya Rhymes' are shit movin' up in the game You runnin' back like Emmit Smith.../
You get bombed' back quick Leave A hole in your stomach like compact discs...
The True Fact Is I'll leave you covered in "shit" like a faggets mat-ress....../
Leave You flamess like broken mat-ches Rhymes dont fraise me dawg you need more prac-tice..../
Flow so intell-igent You couldnt get A 6 figure job if you was bill on "the apprentice"../
Spit godly flow but rap for the "hell"-of-it You can't get passed me like wired fences../
Rhymes'll knock you so high You could stick your tongue out at left-eye..../
I Spit drive-by's Ya rhymes is unsteady as if I put a bullet in your left-thigh..../
No need for you to check-in like a horny boy "you'll get beat in a second...../
Lines'll leave you with a "red neck" Log off quick 'cause a win is what i reckon'.../

usin different style mayne

This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
 

using diff style....style didn't really work for you man, the flow was way off, and the structure is just wack, you had some good punches and multis but man, loose that style aight, demon you had a good verse, good punches, wordplay and all and you had the better structure and flow, i think this battle will go to demon.......jus feedback

Aight I don't know who will get this win, uppin for votes............................................. ....

Yo U Said I Had Good Punches And Good Wordplay And Multi'z Dont Look At The Struture Look What I Wrote Damn!................. Uppin

Yo Upped Dis Shit Mayne At Least 1 Person Has To Vote On Dis Yo I'll Return Fava's Just Vote Damn It

Yo Yo Vote Vote Vote Vote

Uppin, leave a link and I'll return the favour like I did with all the other guys who voted.

Word True Same Here

C'mmon why the hell won't you vote on this battle?

BTW Drastik just out of interest how many battles have you got open? Because if I look down the front lines all I see is DrastikmeasureZ vs... lmao. You'll have a really good record soon if you keep having that many battles open and winning them.

Yea Mayne Yo Yo Yo Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Lol Cant Help It Mayne

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

didn't care 4 this style much, but it was still hard, u got my v cause
opener-DM
metas-DM
multis-DP
structure-DP
flow-DM
closer-DM
thats the breakdown so holla back -1-

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

this was a good battle but DM won cuz of personals and punches

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

decent battle...
Demon~you had some decent punches an some attempted personals but some of ur lines just threw it off...
Drastik~i think you came harder on this one in all aspects...flow punches personals but u could use a lil word on ur vocab

return the favor...
~all luv~

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Yo Danks Fo Da Vote Keep Ot Comin Yo Keep It Comin

~peace~

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Drastic Had Better Punches, Better Vocab An There Was Humour In His Rhymes....On The Other Hand Demon Was Off The Chain n The Line Call me ''doctor Kron/ one and only lyrical surgeon,
I'll operate and diagnose you to be a H.O.S emergin'' Made Me Take Note But You Need 2 Use The Usage Of Your Words A Lil Better, Drastic 6/10 An Demon 5/10...Sorry Demon, I Vote 4 Drastic

Yo Yo End Dis Shit End End End Damn Uppin

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

This battle was one sided and Drastic takes it with hardhittig punches and better wordplay.Demon,that was a pretty good verse but U need to make ur personals and punches more to the point.Tight battle both ways but Drastic takes this.

Uppin... and no herbish or unexplained votes... pleaze.

Sorry Drastik, I don't care if you win just tell your dickriders to EXPLAIN their votes so it won't lead me to the conclusion that you aren't a d/r.

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix


punches=de
metas=de
multis=de nuff said
/vv/=demon

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

i was realli feelin tha flow tha rhymes was tight n ya punchlines were ok tha vocab was iight to but needs a lil werk

This was feedback posted for Demon Pyrokronix
 

juss checking the score
I'd vote: tied

That was d/r, explain your votes you faggots, Drastik are you rolling in yet more dickriders?

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

it was a hard decision...but i gave it to DP...his wordplay was betta and he flowed more...his punches were about the same as DM's...but he had betta structure...

gave it to DP...

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WHOA HOW THE FUCKING HELL DID MY VOTE GET DQ'D FOR INADEQUATE FEEDBACK AND THIS LIL SON OF A BITCH DIDN'T? THIS IS AS D/R AS IT GETS!!! HE DIDN'T EVEN GIVE FEEDBACK TO BOTH OF US, HE JUST GAVE IT TO DM!!! HE DIDN'T EVEN COMMENT ON MY VERSE!!!

GET THIS BASTARD DQ'D NOW!!!

AND DRASTIK GET YOUR DICKRIDERS OUTA HERE NOW!!!

UPPIN

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

good battle...
here we go
DRASTIK WON!
not by much but he was way more creative wit good multis that were jus hittin wit dat flow...drastik got da opener...
emmit smith shit was cool no real good punches tho...and metas were sacrificed for tha flow, but somtimes thas how it is...
DEMON LOST!
it was good...demon got da closer...u gotta get some punches in there...cuz ur structure suggests punches but dont deliver...it was generic but coo'. closer was good
I WANNA REMATCH DEMON!
always a honest vote!
fuck demon...fuck drastic...im out
peace

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

this was preety easy to vote

flow d.m
punches d.m alot better hits
vocab d.m

IP:


Ya Rhymes' are shit movin' up in the game You runnin' back like Emmit Smith.../
You get bombed' back quick Leave A hole in your stomach like compact discs

that was nice plus u had a couple of more that is why u get my vote