DrasticMeasureZ vs JadeStarr
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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JadeStarr has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 07:11 PM.

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 07:12 PM.

Rhymes Re Like A Stove Cause After I Warm Up Im Guaranteed Hottness-
Once I Get Started Its Gon Take Mo Den Brakes N stop signs to stop Dis-
I Spit "BanGaz" Kids Thinkin' My Shit Was Written By Da Gun-
Im A Ruff Ryder Like Yung One So Sick "Can't Stop" Like Yung Gunz-
Yall Katz Iz Garbage Ya Level is Way Belo Mine Ur Wacknes Is Undefined-
Spit Dat Sizzlin' Shit.. Hotter then da Devil N the Sun Combined-
Kids Gettin Raped Quick Like Michael Jackson at a 7 year olds BurfDay-
Droppin Missiles Spit Big Lines..Look Like Fuckin Eearthquakes-
Get Tackled And "Caught On Ya Own Side" LIke A Touchback-
U Rushin In My Yard like dat meat comercial U Quick To Get Rushed Back-

ONLY VOTE ON FLOW DAT MEANS

WORDPLAY

FLOW

AND CREATIVITY YA HEARD

Yo Mayne Where U At

i know i said i forfeited, but this is an easy win
you talk 2 much shit, make freestylin look like a sin

DM be payin for his votes, like his last battle
He as pointless as a rattle snake, witou the rattle

you couldnt merk me, even if ya took drastic measures
even if ya did beat me, ya still wouldnt give us pleasure

you talkin n talkin, like you was a pro battler
at the end i'll have ya sayin 'shit, i shouldnt have battled HER!'

lol sry ya'll, i ain't battled in a while!!! there iz finally there DM, dont get YA PANTIES in a bunch fucka

Lol Lol Lol

hey its my first battle in a yrs, what the fuck u gon expect?

O Sorry Its All Good Mayne

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

you couldnt merk me, even if ya took drastic measures
even if ya did beat me, ya still wouldnt give us pleasure
^^^^nah shit, u dont have fun losin, statin the obvious, aint a punch. i see how u tryin wordplay wit it, but its worded wrong and makes u sound dumb.

drastic-
wins wit better metaphors that were actually punches and made sense. even though micheal jackson/little boy lines are played out, u still more elevated than this jadestarr cat so, u win
drop a honest vote on this shit.http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143415
and or that dusty blunted battle, wit the link in my sig. one

Danks Mayne....................... Uppin

Yo Uppin Need Mo Votes In Dis Shit Mayne

Vote Vote Vote Will Return Fav'z Just Vote People

~peace~v

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Drastic won diss one wit tight wordplay
n dat made his punches hit Jade urs was
tight but it could use sum work u didn't
really have punches or n e wordplay so
it made ur flow basic
v/DRASTIC
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

better wordplay though both drops were pretty hot & damn close and ur flow was a little better, but ne way heres the breakdown
open-DM
structure-JS
metas-DM
multis-tie
flow-DM
closer-JS
punches shouldn't have been in there from what DM is talkin bout @ the end or it would have been a tie all around, but n e way the v/ goes 2 DM

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Jade starr u need to elevate...
jsut wok on complexity and wordplay... u will be alright with practice..

drastic merked it....

flow- DM
all catagorys

DRASTIC.... from RW?.... cough **TSA**... PM me

No I Dont Know U And Hell I Aint From Rw Get Yo Facts Right Kid// And If U Are From Rw Whats Yo Name//

u arent from the skilled assasins.... u aren't drastic measurez from rapworlds? ur style looks like his...

blah maybe ur not....

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Drastic wins this battle cuz his punches were better and his word play was more creative
jadestarr's flow was too simple. yes the structure was good but it wasnt creative at all so just elevate on ur wordplay
holla at me