-EXPLICIT- vs Trooper
 

Battle Rules:

2 Lines - 1 Bar
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit
250+ Posts to vote

Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 08-22-04 at 09:19 PM

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Good Luck

Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 08:54 PM.

-EXPLICIT- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 08:56 PM.

Im the 1st 2 Stifle Ya "Percision",35 Posts dont get it u Not Gifted
If Jenna Jameson Squated on Ya tounge u still wouldnt spit Explicit


Jenna jameson is a xxx Porn Star

Kids like anorexics at the gym.. He only works with LIGHT-WEIGHTS
"Fuckin Men and getting paid" is the only way this "PIMP" gets rebates


Light-Weights = Check his battle stats.. he’s 15 – 1 off of herb battles.
“Fuckin men and getting paid” = Gay play on His User Title.. Fuck you.. Pay me
Pimp = His little avatar

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 

trooper got this. Your stuff had more rhym and was hott. I wanna battle u so either make one or what ever.

^^ WTF is that.. fuckin herb.. fuck outta here.. thats exactly why i set the posts to vote at 250..

Voted For: Trooper

this is a punch the other one jus seemed strecthed as hell this one gotta lauf outta me like a punchline shuld

ok ok ok the reason i voted the way i did was bcaz the other punchline to me sucked, i had to read way to much into it to understand it, an it didnt hit, a tru punchline dont need explanation......bottom line an i felt troopers was better holla

Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

I'm gonna have to go with explicit on this one......that bottom line was rather clever....i liked both lines though...decent punch battle

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 

u can rap shit, u may well just lick clits,
cause you is a bitch

^^ Fuck is this kid??? anyways 1 - 1

Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

both nice...but troop ya punch was kinda a played idea..still hit but ya lost on originality n lengthyness..fairly personal..7.5/10

i was feeling this punch overall jus a lil more,could've done without the explanation though,still nice decent punch..8/10

good battle it was close but i was jus feelin this 1 more..
vote/explicit

This was feedback posted for -EXPLICIT-
 

it was aight,,,but you didnt really give a good ended to really capture your vision,,,,to really know what your true intention where,,,I mean I know,,,but you didnt word well enough for me to really vote for you,,,but good punches any way

daum,,,this new voting system throwing for a loop,,,trooper you came with a more direct hits,,and your begaining matched the ending to really make your vision play a movie in my mind as i read yours,,,so I voted trooper,,,,but this daum thing want let me,,,,
I replied to the first one an it want let me go vote for trooper,,,so can you get at that for me,,,thanks
verdict] trooper

Yo,,,i Just Noticed The Rules,,,an I Dont Have 250 Post,,im Saying It Now,,,so Yall Want Think Im Cheating,,,my Mistake,,,sorry For The Mis Hap

^^ Yup.. don't count.. cause you dont have 250 posts.. 2 - 1 still... uppin it

Daum is there a ecko here,,,I just said that it didnt count,,calm down dude,,
I got this,,lol

Voted For: Trooper

aiight.

Punchline- Was feeling troopers more.. It was a good meta..
Flow- Trooper
Personals- Explicit killed trooper on personals.. No doubt. however for starters ive seen troop battle people that arnt newbs.. so that sort of killed that personal.
Multies- Neither..
Complexity- Explicit

Vote Trooper

^^ Name 5... better yet name 3 vets he's battled.. Flow dont count cause it wasnt a battle.. bout 90% of the people he battled r new or semi-new..


Anyways 2 - 2 uppin

Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

aight this was kinda a weak battle, i hate seein 1 bar battles, it dosent give much time for anything major... but im gonna go with EXPLICIT because of better punches and shit... i just wasnt feelin the jenna jameson line either it seemed kinda wack and played but like i said you cant really tell much from a 2 line battle...... aight so imma go with EXPLICIT with a better punch line and it was set up better... try battlin again with a longer line limit

VOTE- EXPLICIT

Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

explcit gets my vote cuz his punch was more personal way more
and troop jenna line was corny as a motherfucker
plus no need 4 bold print ex gets this in my opinion

Uppin for last vote here....

Voted For: Trooper

Trooper won this easliy
both punches were ight but troopers was very good and it hitt harder explicts was ok but it was played before

so final vote trooper

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Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

ok i know who jenna is but trooper your line just wasnt hard here it was kinda weak like a smack not a punchline at all while ex hit good with the light weight you do be battling madd light weights and the rebate line was a good diss he gets my vote here