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3rd-Shift 08-23-04 01:13 PM

mic-wrecker vs ruffridah187
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


since im ohio finest till im usurped u spit 1st
king shit nigga u gotta love it

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-04 at 01:13 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 08-23-04 01:14 PM

mic-wrecker has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 01:14 PM.

System 08-23-04 01:26 PM

Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 01:26 PM.

3rd-Shift 08-23-04 01:26 PM

now lets go ohio's finest.......title is on the line
~touchin mics~ lets go

Detrimental 08-23-04 05:17 PM

Ok i'm a grab the 'mic' so prepare to get 'wrecked'
I aint gotta put up a fight cuz i already put you in check
Ohio is what i rep and 'Ohio's Finest' is my title
You couldn't rap even if you came from American Idol
I don't take no shit and from ya sig i can see ya hungry for dick
The only way you'll ever retain that champ-ion-ship is if you dickride bitch
With the critical damages i inflict leave you no choice but to give
I penetrate and infiltrate into you with my rhymes, there's no way you can live
After this you will be obliged to me and be all over my dick
But just untill i murder you, this is just what i call a 186


just a quickie cuz i am busy.....wanted to get it over with

Detrimental 08-23-04 05:19 PM

explanation
 
hey and the 186......means right before i murder him.....just to let ya know

3rd-Shift 08-23-04 07:43 PM

da verse did not show up nigga.........................

Detrimental 08-23-04 09:07 PM

you gotta DROP AND THEN YOU WILL SEE IT!
 
you gotta drop then it will show up....i can see you aint used to this ne battle system are you?????

3rd-Shift 08-24-04 08:52 AM

ok................................................ ........

3rd-Shift 08-24-04 05:39 PM

nigga my flow shines like untarnished gold up outta treasure chest//
in laymens terms i manifest midwest hip-hop at its best//
aint no argument homeboy i aint even gotta let chu have it//
how u claim to be ohio's finest when ya battle record aint even average???//
nigga u just able to rhyme in ELEVATED by the skin of ya teeth//
an the town u rep aint even big enough to stretch my legs out when i sleep//
u live in a trash hole dirtbag plus ya style i just dont care for//
visit 4wat? ya city's lone lanemark is a fukin LEBRON billboard//
~get a grip on ya braggin get some wins b4 u talk shit//
u str8 puss u like angelina jolie caz all u iz is lips//
go ride somebody else stay off the shaft of my dicc//
caz u culd eat a burnin pussy an still not b able to spit sicc//~
"aint no future in ya frontin" nigga dis whole site no//
that my punches cut yo ass like blind barbers givin soupbowls//
u jus talk shit like vocal toilets expectin me 2 cower in fear//
wen u aint really beat nobody credible on here//
if u want it take my crown i dont condone it but go ahead//
caz it'll get u a lump on ya dome bigger than jason kidds son's forehead//
only thing u ruff ridin is cock an still cant get a dick ride vote//
like jada i only gotta cough to heat ya stale flow to earn a 5-0 KO//



where's ya resume

3rd-Shift 08-24-04 06:32 PM

uppin #1 for dem votes.............................

3rd-Shift 08-26-04 10:52 AM

uppin #2 come on ppl lets go w/ da votes..........

3rd-Shift 08-30-04 02:14 PM

uppin #3 letts get these votez in ppl now!!!!
im ready

Detrimental 08-30-04 07:44 PM

Damn!!!
 
VOTE PEOPLE DAMN.....You see this up on the thing so vote and i or Mic-Wrecker will return the favor

3rd-Shift 08-30-04 08:52 PM

hahaha u like my avatar!!!!
king of the mutha fuckin buckeye state nigga
come take my crown bitch

3rd-Shift 09-03-04 12:09 PM

damn still no votes on dis shit....
lets go ppl I need voters w/ honest votes

Detrimental 09-07-04 07:21 PM

*!#% man this $^!T IS IRRITATIN ME
 
Uppin This Shit People Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!

G_$peed 09-08-04 08:41 PM

Voted For: mic-wrecker

mic wrecker got it for a way better verse and better punches and flow...punchlines hmm 8.5/10
ruff you came hard but had hardly any wordplay and punches werent that strong...7.1/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

3rd-Shift 09-08-04 09:03 PM

oh my fuckin god is that a vote.......
yes it is........hoor-ray!!!!!!!!
now lets keep these mutha fuckaz comin

3rd-Shift 09-09-04 12:12 PM

figures........come on lets get some x-plained votes in here plz

Sik Wit It 09-11-04 11:42 PM

Voted For: mic-wrecker

Im Votin For Mic, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Mic Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho...

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~Luciano~ 09-11-04 11:54 PM

Voted For: mic-wrecker



Ok i'm a grab the 'mic' so prepare to get 'wrecked'
I aint gotta put up a fight cuz i already put you in check
Ohio is what i rep and 'Ohio's Finest' is my title
You couldn't rap even if you came from American Idol
4/10
I don't take no shit and from ya sig i can see ya hungry for dick
The only way you'll ever retain that champ-ion-ship is if you dickride bitch
With the critical damages i inflict leave you no choice but to give
I penetrate and infiltrate into you with my rhymes, there's no way you can live
3/10
After this you will be obliged to me and be all over my dick
But just untill i murder you, this is just what i call a 186
2/10


nigga my flow shines like untarnished gold up outta treasure chest//
in laymens terms i manifest midwest hip-hop at its best//
aint no argument homeboy i aint even gotta let chu have it//
how u claim to be ohio's finest when ya battle record aint even average???//
4/10
nigga u just able to rhyme in ELEVATED by the skin of ya teeth//
an the town u rep aint even big enough to stretch my legs out when i sleep//
3/10
u live in a trash hole dirtbag plus ya style i just dont care for//
visit 4wat? ya city's lone lanemark is a fukin LEBRON billboard//
~get a grip on ya braggin get some wins b4 u talk shit//
u str8 puss u like angelina jolie caz all u iz is lips//
go ride somebody else stay off the shaft of my dicc//
caz u culd eat a burnin pussy an still not b able to spit sicc//~
4/10
"aint no future in ya frontin" nigga dis whole site no//
that my punches cut yo ass like blind barbers givin soupbowls//
u jus talk shit like vocal toilets expectin me 2 cower in fear//
wen u aint really beat nobody credible on here//
if u want it take my crown i dont condone it but go ahead//
caz it'll get u a lump on ya dome bigger than jason kidds son's forehead//
4/10
only thing u ruff ridin is cock an still cant get a dick ride vote//
like jada i only gotta cough to heat ya stale flow to earn a 5-0 KO//
3/10

Mmk pretty much an ok battle it wasent the best and wasent the worst

Punches-Mic
Meta's-Mic
Open close-mic
Struc-187
complexity-mic


Overall mic came with the harder punches and jus layed down the harder verse

Eclipsik 09-16-04 10:29 PM

Voted For: mic-wrecker

mic wrecker takes it. He had funny ass wordplay and personals. Very good. Flow was consistent throughout. Ruff came weak with weak punches and weak lines talking about where you rep. If anything takes away from a battle verse that'd be it for me. And some of your stuff just didn't make sense at all, especially the American Idol line. Maybe it was just me but that line was so lame. everything you had was missing a step, a beat too many.

mic wrecker wins

OrEo da cookie 09-22-04 01:52 AM

oreo
 
i vot for mic wrecker cuz his shit was glorouis compaared to rr,
his srtucture was on piont and hos multis could have came better bu he still got them,
he had way better personals too,
rr, if you elavate then maybe you could get the title cuz if you actally win this battle then im giong to take that title

3rd-Shift 09-28-04 03:55 PM

uppin this verse and this thread it needs to be voted on ow

50Cal. 09-28-04 09:16 PM

Voted For: mic-wrecker

ok this was kinda weak ruff flow and structure was better then 3rd shift but punches and disses lacked vocab was about even here.3rd shift basiacally gets my vote with better opunches and disses that actually landed both self glorified alot but 3rd shift hit his oppenant more and harder

3rd-Shift 09-29-04 08:46 AM

uppin this shit right here its been up wayy too long

50Cal. 09-29-04 10:55 AM

return my fucking honest vote what the fuck its been a whole day dammit :cussing:

3rd-Shift 09-30-04 10:14 AM

lets go uppin for votes here ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

3rd-Shift 09-30-04 02:13 PM

uppin this right here yall its been up for too long

Parallel 10-05-04 02:23 PM

Voted For: mic-wrecker

3rd Shift:
k 3rd shift had better stucture n he had a aight vocab could been better but iunno he was jsut better with punches to i felt his verse better alot he had some attepts to wordplay also his verse coulda been better...6/10

ruffiadah:
k that was weak man no punches but attempts lol and wack wordplay and stucutre was off by far lol you need some vocab also man i wasent feelin yours at all could of been way better lol...3/10 elavate

VOTE: 3rd shift

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3rd-Shift 10-06-04 11:15 AM

does anybody vote anymore look at the date this was made!!!!! come on man uppin

King Solo 10-06-04 03:06 PM

Voted For: mic-wrecker

damn mic u ripped this kid...................

ruffridah.........man u came weak son. u need to hella elevate playa. ure flow was aight, as was structure. punches and personals were there but they were weak man. that shit about wreckin the mic been done so many times before. the american idol line was gay, cuz american idol was pop music, nuthin to do wit rap, so ure punch is fucked up there. u rhymin basic, need to get more complex shit, work on ure wordplay, get more creative and shit. overall 5/10..weak!!

mic-wrecker......as i expected u killed this kid. no need to really drop that much hott shit though. ure flow was tight, need to still wrok on structuring ure lines so they all near enough the same length. [unches and personals were gud, some hard, some average, nuthin too weak. u didnt rhyme too basic, some complex shit in there, wordplay was pretty gud. need to get more creative though, use links and shit, or quotes, make ure verse stand out. overall 7/10.....gud stuff.


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3rd-Shift 10-06-04 03:09 PM

uppin for the last mutha fuckin vote to KO this nigga

G Deuce 10-06-04 03:55 PM

Voted For: mic-wrecker

This battle was sorry to say, Hands down.
Creativity - 3rd Shift
Punchlines - 3rd Shift
Structure - Tied
Word Play - 3rd Shift
Sentence flow - 3rd Shift
Complexity - 3rd Shift

Conclusion:
Ruff Ridah, just keep on battling more, and you will elevate. It showed in this battle your status in the "battling arena". You simply need to elevate more, and that will come wit practice. 3rd Shift, not your best, but it was enough. You were tight at the beginning, but it seemed that you was searching for punchlines at certain spots. But it was enough.

Vote - 3rd Shift
Good battle Overall


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