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MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-23-04 02:08 PM

Katastrophe Koncepts..........tryouts
 
im openin the tryouts 4 this crew............

who wanna be down?..drop links/or spit sumthin.
txt or topical..

i wanna Co-leader 2.sumone ill...........

drop em..........
if u drop n ur accepted i will pm u.........
dnt go hoppin on me if u seriously want in tho....

this crew gonna hve a big fam...
i need 7 hot peeps 4 starters,this crew gon b active...active peeps only.
this crews gon b run rite.....so get to tryin out...
peace

DrasticMeasureZ 08-23-04 02:47 PM

Yo Good Luck Wit Dis Crew Iam Seeing U Going To Have An Sick Crew With Yo Record

~peace~

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-23-04 02:48 PM

thanx........lets hope so.lol.....................

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-23-04 02:58 PM

ok. ive got my co-leader.......
which is DangerousMyndLunatic....

Leader-Manipulation.
Co-Leader-DML...

Uppin the tryouts for any peeps who wanna b under 2 gurls..lol.

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-23-04 03:02 PM

Aye Yo..... !!!


This Crew Is New And Improved..!!! No Need To Stress It....!! Because.. It Just Came Up...

Drop A Bar.. Or Paste A Link .. To A Verse Of Your's .. And We Will Get Back At You To Let You Know If Your Down Or Not' ..!!!!!!!


-Holla Back!!

MagiC 08-23-04 03:18 PM

Looking nice so far good luck gurls,,..

1~

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-23-04 03:20 PM

~Thanks~ ...

Paris Hilton666 08-23-04 03:58 PM

^^long time no see lol good luck wit the crew girlz

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-23-04 04:22 PM

uppin 4 them tryouts..................................

Nynth Degree 08-23-04 04:27 PM

Yo, good luck, I see you got a good foundation so far, but if it don't work out (knock on wood) y'all should holla at Lowryderz Inc...

DrasticMeasureZ 08-23-04 06:02 PM

Lol ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ But Anyway Dis Good Lookin Crew Now (sikkk) Well Well Look What We Have Da Queen Of Rv Done Deal No Need Fo Newbies In Hur

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-23-04 06:07 PM

^^^^not sure wot u mean.lol.
thanx i think.


UPPIN 4 THEM TRYOUTS........

Lickity-Spit 08-23-04 06:24 PM

yo manipulation... im new to this site but i have been battling for a while im not bad but i can definitely get better u can check my tryout in crhyme sindicate im pretty good soo tell me whats up

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-23-04 06:31 PM

chkd it.......ur struc looks ok,ur flows ok but drop a battle link or spit a diss...
diss me on woteva...jus drop sumthin hard...or a topical piece if u prefer.
holla back.

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-24-04 02:50 AM

uppin.........

flow2crazy 08-24-04 03:22 AM

wat up dml aint seen u in a while... good luck wit ur crew but if it dont work out holla at lowryderz inc...

Youngun 08-24-04 09:26 AM

yo you think i can join im good and im elevating all the time i got 1 battles out n im winning dat...

verse.

im influential, ive got fundamentles of this rap game,
my names unique im influencing you just by the name,
katastrophe koncepts or in other words k.k or k,
thats the ku klux klan, chop you up, blood sprayed,
no lines played, punches wide ranged now i say,
let me be in your crew i wont let you down,
ill be the best mc ever i can wear the crown,

ok what you think? holla back

DeHotBwoy 08-24-04 11:11 AM

Im a Desire i make u wanna hire me put me in da crew
Im gon show u some hot punchlines so u can tel influence is new
imma make u see it and sleep read it and weep got somthn 2 say'
My punches hit hard son not weak cuz ur reacton to it is u juzz gon Lay
sHit lemmie stop theese stretched ass lines now
U gon make this wow wit that son How
When i heard better punchlines from a mudda fukin Cow

DeHotBwoy 08-24-04 11:11 AM

that wa all weak and shit
lol

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-24-04 12:26 PM

erm spit a diss.or give a link....................

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-24-04 04:23 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Influence
yo you think i can join im good and im elevating all the time i got 1 battles out n im winning dat...

verse.

im influential, ive got fundamentles of this rap game,
my names unique im influencing you just by the name,
katastrophe koncepts or in other words k.k or k,
thats the ku klux klan, chop you up, blood sprayed,
no lines played, punches wide ranged now i say,
let me be in your crew i wont let you down,
ill be the best mc ever i can wear the crown,

ok what you think? holla back


Positive Feedback
-Good Structure
-Alright Word Play
- Nice Use Of Multies
- Straight Vocabulary

Positive Critisism
-Flow Was A Bit Shaggy
-Could Have Came With More Effort
-Evaluate And Bring Something To The Plate Next Time

I Say "No" To Being In The Crew:

Your Verse Didn't Do For Me.. It Was Weak.. Some Of Your Lines Were Played Out... Or Didn't Fit Where They Were Located..

Check Back!
-Good Luck!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-24-04 04:28 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Jerseyz Champ
Im a Desire i make u wanna hire me put me in da crew
Im gon show u some hot punchlines so u can tel influence is new
imma make u see it and sleep read it and weep got somthn 2 say'
My punches hit hard son not weak cuz ur reacton to it is u juzz gon Lay
sHit lemmie stop theese stretched ass lines now
U gon make this wow wit that son How
When i heard better punchlines from a mudda fukin Cow


-First Off I Think You Over-Done-Screw-Yourself! (lol)
^Nothing Personal!

-Second Off I Can't Read Half Of The Shit You Done Typed Out Because Of All The 'Spelling Errors' Perhaps? (Work On That)

-You Have Some What Of Word Play.. But Not Much!! (Work On That)

-My Punches Hit Hard Not Weak - Stick To The Facts.. Don't Lay Nothing Out there That Isnt 'True' lol Not When You Are Trying Out Anyways! (Work On That)

-And Your Ending Was Just Plain (Whack) .. But That Would Be Even An Understatement!!! .. Beyond Whack!!!!

I Say 'No' To Being In The Crew ...

PayCe!

-And Good Luck!

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-24-04 05:14 PM

^^^^^^^agree wit dml........
elevate....

uppin sum gud fem/emcees..........


WHERE U AT LADYFIYA?......CAN U B DOWN???/
get at me...
peace

Ill-Grammatix 08-24-04 09:11 PM

yo DML,

Manip said to post some shyt up in here for you to see... she wants me in but she wanna put it through you also....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142475

Ill-Grammatix 08-24-04 10:47 PM

I got more if ya need it.. just holla at the kid or you can just click on my name and check all my posts....

For$akeN 08-24-04 11:37 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by DangerousMyndLunatic
~Thanks~ ...


WELCOME BACK LIKE MASE!

Ill-Grammatix 08-25-04 02:49 AM

here's a joint I just dropped in poetic scriptures:

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...402&postcount=1

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-25-04 01:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ill-Grammatix
yo DML,

Manip said to post some shyt up in here for you to see... she wants me in but she wanna put it through you also....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142475



Dope Verse' ..

-Structure Was Way Off Though (Work On That) ...
-Stretched Lines (Aint Into That) .. - Work On That....

But Everything Else Was Straight..!!!!!!

I Like Your Style... Everything Except Your Structure & Stretched Lines..

But Fa Sho Will Give You 'Slack' ...!!!

(IN) ..

-Enough Said-

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-25-04 01:23 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by For$akeN


WELCOME BACK LIKE MASE!



Priciate It!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Thanks)

Youngun 08-25-04 01:42 PM

yo hit me up with this now what you think i used better vocabulary i posted it in cypher so imma post it here now...

as i sit here with a pen in my hand staring at the paper,
writing rhymes like your the bitch im the lyrical raper,
i'm the caped "crusader", mr lyrical "invader",
vote "degrader" due to childish "behaviour"
you can call me a "hater" a protest "debator"
or even a facial "masterbater"
cos quite frankley i could give two fucks,
now watch me pull out my 9 and make you cluck.

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-25-04 01:46 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Influence
yo hit me up with this now what you think i used better vocabulary i posted it in cypher so imma post it here now...

as i sit here with a pen in my hand staring at the paper,
writing rhymes like your the bitch im the lyrical raper,
i'm the caped "crusader", mr lyrical "invader",
vote "degrader" due to childish "behaviour"
you can call me a "hater" a protest "debator"
or even a facial "masterbater"
cos quite frankley i could give two fucks,
now watch me pull out my 9 and make you cluck.



Talkin About Yourself Aint Going.. To Kill Catts? lol... Yo BabyBoi..

Lets Do A Punchline Contest Right Quick.. Me & You...!!! If I Win Your Out.. If You Win Your In...!!!

Youngun 08-25-04 01:56 PM

hell no i know foe a fact your gnna beat me so theres no point in having a loos in my record to try n prove a point am avin a battles soon so ill post that up aight??

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-25-04 02:03 PM

new femcee on the roster ...FLUIDMOON...
she dnt need a tryout.she ill........

UPDATED ROSTER

MANIPULATION
DangerousMyndLunatic
Fluidmoon.......

all ladies so far..........
uppin.........

Influence u might as well battle her....
records dnt mean shit.....
n losing to a vet is nowt to hide.
u got a chance there.take it.
uppin.......................

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-25-04 02:05 PM

ooops
sorry
ill-grammatix is here 2


MANIPULATION
DML
ILL-GRAMMATIX
FLUIDMOON

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-25-04 02:43 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Influence
hell no i know foe a fact your gnna beat me so theres no point in having a loos in my record to try n prove a point am avin a battles soon so ill post that up aight??



^ Aint Nothing Wrong With Havin A (Loss) .. Still ...!!!!

Aint No Tellin That You Are Going To Lose? So W'Sup With That...!!!!!

Your Straight Doe...

-Will Be Looking Forward To It

-Good Luck!!!

Mask Murderous 08-25-04 02:45 PM

Quote:
-in-

^......

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-25-04 02:46 PM

no u join mine........................................ha

Mask Murderous 08-25-04 02:47 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mental Murderous
I-N


......

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-25-04 02:52 PM

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Mask Murderous 08-25-04 02:53 PM

Put me on the damn roster.....

.............!


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