Proverse vs JPoll
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines max and min
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-04 at 05:42 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 05:56 PM.

this is NOT prewritin
too many ppl say dat and its annoyin lol
remember no dickriders plz
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you spit garbage in plural,yo rhymes is trash
studdering your lyrics,couldnt make your wins mass
arived in RV i april,still words couldn't spring into action
couldn't understand your punches-stop battling with a accent
gargling flaming hots-only froze the chip
Jpoll hensed the name by what you're known to fix (cheat)

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JPoll has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 06:16 PM.

Yo heres some straight key biatches...

I’ll eat this kid up til he’s dismembered won’t find him totally till december…
its sad him getting ko’ed by me, is the only reason he’ll ever be remembered…
Already forgotten forever,but still trapt with a KO like being in the old soviet union...
It's like the ghosts of this site, well him ,spiky ,n gunit are having a 'Most wackest reunion'...
He gets walked on all day, like he was a dirty ass door mat...
he'll 'grab' zero votes max, too slow witted to pick this up like we were playing jax...


boom it's over straight keyed...if you don't get it get the fuck outta my post...

Voted For: JPoll


you spit garbage in plural,yo rhymes is trash
studdering your lyrics,couldnt make your wins mass
this was sorda a weak start....

arived in RV i april,still words couldn't spring into action
couldn't understand your punches-stop battling with a accent
1st line was nice, 2ed was aight...

gargling flaming hots-only froze the chip
Jpoll hensed the name by what you're known to fix (cheat)
ending was preety decent....

not a bad quick verse.... 7.0

I’ll eat this kid up til he’s dismembered won’t find him totally till december…
its sad him getting ko’ed by me, is the only reason he’ll ever be remembered…
this was a ok start...

Already forgotten forever,but still trapt with a KO like being in the old soviet union...
It's like the ghosts of this site, well him ,spiky ,n gunit are having a 'Most wackest reunion'...
1st line was preety good, 2ed was decent...

He gets walked on all day, like he was a dirty ass door mat...
he'll 'grab' zero votes max, too slow witted to pick this up like we were playing jax...
nice ending... hard hit at the end...

i thought ya was preety even till the end where jpoll had the best and harder hit but ya was preety even i would of voted a tie if it wasnt for J's last bar.....

vote Jpoll by a last min punch good battle fellas

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Voted For: JPoll

Jpoll wins and gets my vote
Pro: yours was weak try harder and elevate your verse was weak and didnt have any strong lines
J: yours was not as good as your othjer but yours was better enuf to beat proverse

vote jpoll

uppin ..././////////////////////////////////////////////

Voted For: ProVerse

only because he got a personal in there...naw, this was a hard desiscion and everything was tie except that...

yall was on each others level with punches...i like the "april...spring in to action" line...and i liked the "wont find him til december" line, and outta those two, proverse hit harder...this was a good battle tho

proverse also had better structure in his flow...

Voted For: ProVerse

YO GOOD BATTLE BUT I GOTS TO WITH PROVERSE HIS PUNCHES HIT AN LIL HARDER DA FLOW AND THE WORDPLAYS WAS FROM BOTH OF YALL NICE// I HAD TO RELY ON PUNCHES TO I CHOSE PROVERSE CAUSE HE HIT A LIL HARDER

YO PROVERSE RETURN AN FAV

DA LINK ITS IN MY SIG MAYNE

thanx for all the votes


uppin for more.......................

Voted For: JPoll

JPoll easily takes this. Proverses punches came kinda weak. I wasnt feelin the first line mayn. Dont say that trash is the plural of garbage. Theyre synonyms. That wasnt a really good setup neither. Jpoll had some ill lines in his verse. Good multis too. Came hard throughout the whole verse. And this bein only six lines. You GOTTA come hard all the way through. Jpoll gets it.

Vote-Jpoll

Voted For: ProVerse

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143415
return the vote or on my e-dubz battle in my sig.

ummm... ya'll should prewrite instead of lookin like newbs.

but w/e heres what i saw.

proverse-
one good punch.
arived in RV i april,still words couldn't spring into action

.... the rest of your verse i wasn't feelin at all

jpoll- after readin your verse i thought u'd lose for sure, but anyway heres what i DID like.......... um scratch that i just re read your verse and u dont have a single line to match proverse's one line i liked.

little tip.... dont "straight key your shit", wordplay punches win battles and u can't jus key those u gotta think 'em threw.

this some honest shit, return wit the same honesty please.

Voted For: JPoll

he takes this easily....he has the only strong lines...proverse wasn't very good...and no i dont' it was prewritten because it wasn't good...but anywho...jpoll came really wack for him too...what's with that stretched shit...i guess it was a key...how's pro getting votes...hmm dr's?...i ono anyways jp took on actually having not played punches

Voted For: ProVerse

im gonna have to give this to you...damn that accent line was the end of jpolll good flow ....are you sure that wasnt prewritten....j/k....nah but forreal you brought the het...jpolll just work on the streched lines and expand your vocab....goood battle tho

Voted For: ProVerse

Whoooa
give it 2 ProVerse dat shit was ill
kinda got me there wit dat not prewritten
but ill had wordplay ,metas n hard hittin punches
JPoll yo shit was good but not good enuff diss time
shoulda came a lil harder on punches n shit
but overall good battle vote on da battles
in my sig n honestly