jewpride vs WORDPLAYA
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-04 at 07:57 PM

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WORDPLAYA has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 07:57 PM.

jewpride has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 01:55 AM.

this kids ridiculous you'll get your liver split when i deliver clips deminish limbs inflictin smithn's to finish him/ quit it kid/ i'll decapitate your skull then unfold it approachin with chrome six thrown in ya house when your home alone/ you preparin to spit darin to flip i dont care if some care for your shit im careless with this/ i'll handle that mac and pump shatter your back and clutch a magnum to detach your clap and duck out the back what this faggot actin tough like he's had it rough..i dont believe bastids with lack of touch and a damaged punch/ im nuts/ kids punches land like soft caresses actin hard when i no he be tryin on dresses/ nipple pierced confessions you have no power better off in the garden pickin your boyfriends flowers/ i gotcha open and your done/ ill take everything you have count back from whole to half to none...its over son

'Pride' of da 'Jew(s)' well shit must be da Holocaust
smoke 2 many 'rocks' 2 'ball'
so u must playin 'BASEsketball'
im smooth as 'silk' so i'll let u go int0 space wit a 'lighting' flow
cuz its 'No Limit' 2 how i 'Silk da Shock(er)' hoe
diss nigga bitch a hoe 4 'candy' n she gave up 'GoodnPlenty'
'J'erkin 'C'osta 'P'eppermint her meaning 4 JC Penny(s)
"punches" u aint got many n dats nota hunch
cuz every one u threw was weak "i drank those 4 lunch"
u punk

yo we uppin 4 sum votes
ya n sum honest ones at dat

Voted For: jewpride

punches: jew
personals: word
multis: jew
metas: word
vocab: jew
structure: word

close battle but my vote goes to jew just cuz his punches and everything rhymed cleanly....even though ur structure sucked

no beef \/\/ return favors.....

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Voted For: jewpride

yo that shit was ill but yo you can't beat me my ryhmes up and im ready so yo heres my feedback yo the reason jewpride won this one is because he had better flow, better punchs ,and whole nine yards and im only 13 but i know my shit yo WORDPLAYA you "DEFINITELY NEED TO ELEVATE"
i put it in big words just in case you didnt see it well
holla elevate

N.E.T,
holla back

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goin for the ko
 

come on lets get some votes...i wanna get this ko and no dickridin votes...you have to explain your shit and no crew votes

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

my vote goes to- WORD
They both iight but WORD had better word play and jus flowed a lil better

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Voted For: WORDPLAYA

ok jew good wordplay and vocab structure sucked no flow can be seen with those streched ass lines punches were ok no personals killed it for you alot of self glorification 4/10
wordplay i liked the holacaust line good personal once i caught the ender i saw that was dope real original there your structure also needs help but good flow once its caught your personals made this a good verse6/10

yesterday i was winning 2-0....then it was 2-2 and now its 1-0 wordplaya....hows that work?

yo we still uppin 4 sum
honest votes so cum
n vote

we still uppin 4 sum honest explained votes
so cum vote n explain it

yo ya we still uppin 4 sum
more honest votes so cum
vote

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

im goin wit u nice punches kid u really got em there

This was feedback posted for jewpride
 

dayum this battle was nice..

Jewpride just spitting fire after fire. Its not perfect but it was delivered good.

and wordplaya got those cold punches but they didn't connect..

so Jew got my vote.

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

close battle

flow-jew pride
personals-wordplaya
punches-wordplaya
multiz-wordplaya
structure-jew prise
metz/simz-jew pride

this was close put wordplaya got the more important cats..

vote....wordplaya

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thanx 4 ya votes will return da
favor still uppin 4 more honets
votes

yo ya we still uppin 4 sum honest
votes sum cum n vote ya

yo we still uppin 4 sum honest votes on diss
battle ya n vote on sum of my other battles 2 dey gettin slept on
we'll return da favor

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

this was a close battle both came hard and correct and i give much respect to both battlers......both verses rhymed well.....pride came with the multies and wordplay came with the wordplay sooo it pretty much came down to taste.........i preferably like wordplay more then multies cuz i think wordplay is a harder style of writing it involves complexity....so my vote goes to.....
WordPlay

Voted For: jewpride

a yo i vote for this guy , his shit had a betta flow and it made sense, it was tight

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

aiight wordplaya took this battle in all areaz.....
opener - word
closer - word
flow - word
punchez - word
v/ word, bad luck jew