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ProVerse vs Royal Flush
Battle Rules:
10 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-25-04 at 09:39 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 08:17 PM.
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Royal Flush has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 08:34 PM.
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Im Gonna Royally-Flush-you, urs lines gettin booed...
Your Loyality-Sucks-Fool, thats why you not in any crewz... The only thing pro about you is the p-r-o in ur name... Your flows blow, its like you rap from your ass instead of your brain... Ive seen your other battles, half of your words were misspelt... Good thing your goin back to school cause your grammar needs help... Its B.S. when you say your using slang and your knowledge is vast... You cant hide the facts cause we all know your really a dumbass... Why the fuck does your location say Rap City the Basement?... Your just a wannabe, Big Tig'* Hates you, so just face it... See dawg i flow like a vet, but its really my first time.. Im the one and only R.F. , not Apotheosis** in disguise.. * Host of Rap City ** Heavyweight Champ of RapVerse |
-stop bluffin- the only way you're a royal flush it seems-
-i you're named aftera swirlie from a queen- or a king- -flush away all of the shity lines-rhymes resemble a mishap- -even if you played your cards right- you still gone get craps- -in fact- play the game- with your game-face-still face_ -_the same fate even if you-reerange your plain games- -the system faces a better record-he didn't attempt his lines- -you extinguished your fire-tryin to swallow your rhymes- -sometimes some rhymes lead into a better one- -not you- you get slept on like patients takin there medicon ok dats my verse |
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Voted For: Royal Flush
u got the v/ cause u hard more punches and u were actually making sense in ur drop, where as PV was just running his bars together and tryin 2 make it LOOK like it had structure so heres the breakdown opener-neither were great flow-RF structure-RF metas-neither really, but u used more multis-RF closer-RF end result RF takes the v/ |
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Voted For: ProVerse
NICE MAYNE PROVERSE KILLED WITH THE WORDPLAYS AND THE PUNCHES ADN MULTI'Z NICE COMBO// ROYAL FLUSH U HAD GOOD ASS FLOW AND SOME PUNCHES BUT IT DIDNT EDGE U TO GET THE VOTE KEEP WORKIN ON DEM PUNCHES MAYNE// YO PROVERSE RETURN AN FAV DA LINK ITS IN MY SIG MAYNE Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: ProVerse
good shit pro good disses and punches alot of personals on his name was dope nice structure and flow good vocab6/10 royal good punches too disses kinda lacked here and your stuctures fucked up it kinda resmbeles a arrow 4/10 |
thanx 4 da votes urbody!!!!
hopin for more |
Voted For: ProVerse
proverse first: -stop bluffin- the only way you're a royal flush it seems- NICE OPENER -i you're named aftera swirlie from a queen- or a king- -flush away all of the shity lines-rhymes resemble a mishap- LOL NICE WAY YOU PLAYED THE WORDS -even if you played your cards right- you still gone get craps- LMAO NICE PUNCH -in fact- play the game- with your game-face-still face_ -_the same fate even if you-reerange your plain games- ALRIGHT WORD PLAY -the system faces a better record-he didn't attempt his lines- -you extinguished your fire-tryin to swallow your rhymes- LOL NICE PUNCH -sometimes some rhymes lead into a better one- -not you- you get slept on like patients takin there medicon THINK I HEARD IT BEFOR BUT GOOD CLOSER iight royal flush: Im Gonna Royally-Flush-you, urs lines gettin booed... ALRIGHT OPENER NICE WAY TO USE YOUR NAME Your Loyality-Sucks-Fool, thats why you not in any crewz... The only thing pro about you is the p-r-o in ur name... BAD PUNCH Your flows blow, its like you rap from your ass instead of your brain... HEARD IT BUT DECENT DISS Ive seen your other battles, half of your words were misspelt... Good thing your goin back to school cause your grammar needs help... NICE PERSONAL Its B.S. when you say your using slang and your knowledge is vast... You cant hide the facts cause we all know your really a dumbass... WEAK PUNCH Why the fuck does your location say Rap City the Basement?... Your just a wannabe, Big Tig'* Hates you, so just face it... I THINK THIS A PERSONAL SOUNDS DECENT See dawg i flow like a vet, but its really my first time.. Im the one and only R.F. , not Apotheosis** in disguise.. NICE CLOSER all and all this was a nice battle you both came hard but it comes down to how proverse had nothin really bad but royal flush had two so after saying that my vote is : vote: ProVerse |
thanx for votin
homeboy :) hopin to finish this 2day _______ win or not |
drop a link and i primise to return the favor
please vote honestly on this pleeeeaaaase |
ok next upp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: Royal Flush
Royal takes this one. Weak battle in my opinion. Royal flush had this with personals and punches in his verse. Pros verse was kinda ordinary and the punches werent connectin. Good structure and flow though. Keep it up. Royal Flush wins this with harder punches and more effective personals. Vote-Royal |
Voted For: ProVerse
I say pro has this one his flow was much better.... harder punches.... Royal... you had some good flwo but pro takes this one Crasher!!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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Voted For: Royal Flush
royal took this with ease the other guy had little structure Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ok need some NON DickRiding votes puleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaase
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Voted For: Royal Flush
PRO: definately not a pr quality verse....um...metas were not good and multis were no-existant...only nice line was the last one..and the system line was cleverish but it has to be played by now ROYAL: ok..opener...WACK..the FUCK you mean by "royally flush" someone...as a poker player i take offense to that...but you punches ended up being better and more clever so u win because of that...plus the nameplay gave you sum bonus points |
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Voted For: ProVerse
ha ha ha royal flush give it up you need elevation and you battlin some one that has beat a few vets like JPoll he has a total ravrse record 21-6 and hes good and you actullythought that you could beat proverse all i got to say is GIVE IT UP and thats why i think proverse won this so yall return the favor linkz in sig |
uppin ............. and wtf is up with u? did i say i was goin to beat PV? No. yeah he beat Jpoll thats why i give him props. As far as im concern, crazy u can go suck a d*ck.
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This was feedback posted for Royal Flush
Im Gonna Royally-Flush-you, urs lines gettin booed...
Your Loyality-Sucks-Fool, thats why you not in any crewz... That was good The only thing pro about you is the p-r-o in ur name... Your flows blow, its like you rap from your ass instead of your brain... ok Ive seen your other battles, half of your words were misspelt... Good thing your goin back to school cause your grammar needs help... That was hot Its B.S. when you say your using slang and your knowledge is vast... You cant hide the facts cause we all know your really a dumbass... okay Why the fuck does your location say Rap City the Basement?... Your just a wannabe, Big Tig'* Hates you, so just face it... not feelin it. See dawg i flow like a vet, but its really my first time.. Im the one and only R.F. , not Apotheosis** in disguise.. that was ok nice flow punches need improvement. |
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Voted For: ProVerse
ya flows is nice ya punchlines tight ya ryhmes is nice n u jus plan got dis vote so holla at my battle vs wreckage |
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uppin no hate votes
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Voted For: ProVerse
ProVerse has my vote...harder punches than Royal Flush..a nice structure...and a pretty good flow...Royal Flush..work on yo shit..yo punches weren't hard enuff to get my vote tho... |
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