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DrasticMeasureZ vs String9487
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15 bars No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 25 Check in by: 08-23-04 at 10:39 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 10:13 PM.
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ight dog lets get it poppin
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DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 10:17 PM.
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O Fo Sho Mayne Go Nigga U Go 1st There Aint No Feedin So U Go Mayne
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O I Gots To Post My Shit By 12:17 I Got Dat Mayne
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did u vote onmy battle wit ice pick? i voted on one of urs
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O Ok Hold On I'll Do It
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I'm an Animal Rabid-Whos-Lethal..Fuc Around A Stabbin'i'll-Greet-U//
A Savage'll-Eat-U..I'm Takin Ur "Depth" The Way Gravity-Needs-To// This string Kid Needs Life-Support-Or..I Can Hit him Wit A Knife-At-Border// Stuff U In Ur Wifes-Four-Door..And "Cut-U-Down" Like U Have A "Height-Disorder"// This Attack-Torment Im beatin This PreppyFag He Zach-Morris Wearin Amber-Crombie// My Mental-Duration..Have ur Girl In Sexual-Relations She Gives More "Brains-Than-A-Zombie"// LoL U've Been Managin-Wit-Fake-Shitt...ur A "BYTCH"..U Passed Out "Advantage-Of-U-Taken"// Tape Ur Mouf Shut Wit A Parental Advisory-Sticker Who'd Buy-U-The-Liquor "Come-On-Darlin-Ur-Grannies-At-The-Station"//...(haha string got raped) U Dont Want Me To Kill U? Okay Hybernation Let Me Calm Down And Find-The-Patience// Let Me Hide-This-Hatred..NOPE! fuck YOU! BOOM! Ur Live's-Been-Taken//(haha) I'm Clappin-By-Millions This Homo Is A "Happy-Civilian" But Im Killin U Wit "Bin-Laden's-Thirst"// Mentally-Confused This Q-boro Kid Was "Analy" Sexually-Abused Now When he Take A shitt Its Like "OH-GOD-IT-HURTS!//(lmao) Or is U A Girl? So Undeveloped Standin In The Mirror Mad Like "Jeez-DO-TITS-EXIST?!"//(haha) I'll Attack-In-Rages..Fuc This Mack-N-Gauge-Shitt..Ima Use Fists To Leave This Bastered-Faceless And Put His Lights-Out// A Fake Baller Witta Plastic-Pager This Kid's Computer Screen'll "Freeze" Thats The Only Way He "Iced-Out"// Drastic spits cold saliva wen it comes outa the mouth/ shits so cold they become hollow points like an ice pick/ one of da bullets hit yo vocal cords o use dat hole fo one of yo dicks home boi'z now thats what i call drill for oil// ~PEACE~ |
STRING IS IN THE BUILDING!!!!!!
yo..dog i'll spit fire at u, hopin u melt only time u get luv is when u vote for yaself prepare, n beware homie cuz the shooters there wit them things to leave u slumped ova ya computer chair i got a scope for aim, the tech scans ya flow is "slackin".. and i aint talk about dress pants my raps classics, catch em on yellow manuscripts while urs is all fake like a televangelist i take MC's out wit a few bold rips ima RAP Bentley and u... u just a Hugo bitch(ooooh) hand me the crown im the master of the flow n my melodic multies will more than likely massacere this hoe i cook mc's, man i shoulda cooked more u wouldnt have the "balls" to see me in a sporting goods store dis nigga give brain, n still look all lame when i spit he "first down" like a foot ball game i defecate, on w/e rhymes u try to elevate if u rapped for ya moms' u still couldnt sell a tape ya melon bake, when i spit u get heat stroke ya girl kinda "shallow" but she good at the deep throat u fake, most of ya raps is a pack of lies if i gave Drastick a "measure" he wouldnt b half my size what that implys, is that u betta keep 3 vests wit u Drastick get ripped easier than a kleenex tissue The tech leave u wet like a pond believe me dis nigga mo "shook" than James Bond's Martini Drastick, get ya ass kicked, u melt like plastic when i spit that fire that turn ya raps to ash-es im out for any rap medals, if its a trophy get it ima rape thos wack rhymes, ...n say kobe did it HAAAAA |
i had to change dat last bar my b
[QUOTE=DrasticMeasureZ]I'm an Animal Rabid-Whos-Lethal..Fuc Around A Stabbin'i'll-Greet-U//
A Savage'll-Eat-U..I'm Takin Ur "Depth" The Way Gravity-Needs-To// This string Kid Needs Life-Support-Or..I Can Hit him Wit A Knife-At-Border// Stuff U In Ur Wifes-Four-Door..And "Cut-U-Down" Like U Have A "Height-Disorder"// This Attack-Torment Im beatin This PreppyFag He Zach-Morris Wearin Amber-Crombie// My Mental-Duration..Have ur Girl In Sexual-Relations She Gives More "Brains-Than-A-Zombie"// LoL U've Been Managin-Wit-Fake-Shitt...ur A "BYTCH"..U Passed Out "Advantage-Of-U-Taken"// Tape Ur Mouf Shut Wit A Parental Advisory-Sticker Who'd Buy-U-The-Liquor "Come-On-Darlin-Ur-Grannies-At-The-Station"//...(haha string got raped) U Dont Want Me To Kill U? Okay Hybernation Let Me Calm Down And Find-The-Patience// Let Me Hide-This-Hatred..NOPE! fuck YOU! BOOM! Ur Live's-Been-Taken//(haha) I'm Clappin-By-Millions This Homo Is A "Happy-Civilian" But Im Killin U Wit "Bin-Laden's-Thirst"// Mentally-Confused This Q-boro Kid Was "Analy" Sexually-Abused Now When he Take A shitt Its Like "OH-GOD-IT-HURTS!//(lmao) Or is U A Girl? So Undeveloped Standin In The Mirror Mad Like "Jeez-DO-TITS-EXIST?!"//(haha) I'll Attack-In-Rages..Fuc This Mack-N-Gauge-Shitt..Ima Use Fists To Leave This Bastered-Faceless And Put His Lights-Out// A Fake Baller Witta Plastic-Pager This Kid's Computer Screen'll "Freeze" Thats The Only Way He "Iced-Out"// Drastic spits cold saliva wen it comes outa the mouth/ shits so cold they become hollow points like an ice pick/ one of the bullets hits yo vocal cord, rippin a hole for one of yo dicks,wen this shit pistons it spills like oil/ you bitch been touchin my dick/ ure grandma on urzz, that shit must be spoiled...haha ~PEACE~ |
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uppin for votes dont sleep on dis one yall
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uppin for votes dont sleep on dis one yall
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uppin holla at me if yall want an honest vote
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Voted For: String9487
Wordplay - Drastic: he had more multies that helped.. Structure - String had way more straight lines that looked coo Punches - Strings I think had more, some weren't punchlines, but clever disses and were in threw his whole verse.. Flow - Tie, couldn't see nothig wrong with either flow, was smooth.. Personals - none really, none stuck out so both don't get scored on it.. Vocab - drastic mayber, he had more wordy phrases and more verbiage in the least ammount of space.. Overall - String, you had better punches and structure which outwieghs the other stuff, you had a more entertaining verse this time, so you get the vote.. PLZ return the favor right here, thnz, i appreciate it.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411 |
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uppin for votes holla at me n i'll get back at u wit an honest opinion
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
drastic took this battle hands down....even though the structure was everywhere he had multies, punches, personals, and all of them were just hitting harder...the other cats had some good hits but just wasnt good enough...vote drastic |
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
yo it was a good battle...... my vote is for drastic.... b/c he came harder and i like his structure..... string u have nice stuff it just wasnt as good as DM in this battles punches: dm personals: didnt see much from either multis: hmmm.... lol dm metas: string structure: dm vote : dm nice battle no beef |
Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
drastic took this one punches=drastic flow=string beginnin=string end=drastic vocab=drastic vote= drasticmeasurez |
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Voted For: String9487
damn that was a really good battle. Im impressed. i would say that string won this tho simply cause of the fact that he had harder hits.Every line after line was a punch that got better and better, and thats wat i like to see. Big ups to both yall.. |
Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
OK THIS WAS CLOSE I READ BOTH VERSES TWICE BUT DRASTIC GOT THIS...., HIS VERSE WAS A NOTCH ABOVE STRING ON EVERY ASPECT, HE DUG DEEP ON THIS ONE THE MULTIS MADE ME PROUD GOOD BATTLE |
Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
Really close battle but Drastic had better flow and punchlines and personals it was crazy pulled it out real nice |
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