Trooper vs Phantom
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 is K.o

dropz due 35 minz after check in

Minimum posts to vote: 230

Check in by: 08-25-04 at 10:26 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.


DQ.. recycled line: "U Provide Inconsistent Lines like Pigeon Toed Kids on Ice Skates" from http://community.rapverse.com/showp...202&postcount=5

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 10:29 PM.

What makes you think you can beat "Phantom"? you cant handle a ghost...*
Chubby nigga thats so dark i mistaked you for a fat, burnt piece of toast...**
Your sig and avi are ashamed of you, dont even wanna show their faces...***
i'm wonderin how got those J's when you cant even afford shoelaces...**
cant afford jewelry either, forced to rock some rubberbands...**
prayin to god that you can beat me, why else clasp your hands?...**
with the way im killin you, your verse really doesnt matter...
so be a smart lil "trooper" and "a-wol" this "battle"...****

*his loss is to "Ghost354"
** http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140358
***just look at his sig and avi
****i know "battle" and "matter" dont perfectly rhyme but if u say both a certain way, they will rhyme..

Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 10:43 PM.

So You Portray a Phantom,Just Stick to ya "Homophobic Rules"
Your in Over your head like "Dwarf's at Cedar Point Wave Pools"

Your Not A 9-3 "Hungry Mc" Winning is Eating~~ ~Stop "Fastin"
You Resemble A Down Syndrom Victim~U have no Verbal Actions

Your Precision doesnt Hit with Persistance~Me vs u=Nice Stakes
U Provide Inconsistent Lines like Pigeon Toed Kids on Ice Skates

Thats "Ludacris" Tellin Trooper 2 "Move Bitch Get Out the Way"
U winnin~ Thats like "Ellen Degenerous" Not Poutrayin Bein Gay

*Ellen digenerous is a Lesbian that came out to the media*
*Fastin is going without food*
*Ice skates produce lines on the ice*

Voted For: Trooper

ok phantom dope verse all personals with a little punch too but your flow and structure was hard to follow here but trooper spit hard as fuck here not personals but hard ass punches ''wins is eating stop fasting''''inconsitent lines like pigeon toed kids on ice skates''ender could have been better but still good here and phantom ''the rubberband line''and ''your sig and avy ashamed of you those was dope''both had good vocab and phantoms personals lined up to troopers punches so the only tie breaker is structure and flow trooper has that hands down here and gets the vote good battle

normally i would call that a hate vote but i can tell u were honest. thnx. nice drop troop.

This was feedback posted for Phantom
 

nice battle.......can't vote phantoms in my crew...

Voted For: Trooper

Trooper took tihs one. Hard punches and better metas. Nice even structure and flow too. Phantom had some alright punches, I just think that he didnt come as hard as trooper. Some personals in P's verse, but they werent too effective in my opinion. Trooper had good lines..ex: the ice skates one. Good battle, but Imma have ta give it to Trooper.

Vote-Trooper

Vote on this:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144250

Voted For: Trooper

ha yo dis goes to trooper man i only say honest votes man, No hate!!!!,

strcu definatly went to trooper man he had it down pack man shit was raw his punches wwere tite n Your Not A 9-3 "Hungry Mc" Winning is Eating~~ ~Stop "Fastin"
You Resemble A Down Syndrom Victim~U have no Verbal Actions YO DAT WAS TITE!!!!,

Phatnum man u cant put yo shit in paragraphg form man i duno how many times i tell ppl that yo man keep elevatin yo shit dawg, iite 1 love

v/trooper

yal return da favor on my battles NO HATE links r on da bottom!

K.o simply said



Good night

Voted For: Phantom

Punchlines - Honestly, i'm suprised, but phantom actualy had some coo material, troopers was kinda played in this verse, he was lacking..

Personals - phantom immediatley came out with a hard personal, i understand the personal also because iv'e seen his pic, so it hit.. you take personals..

Structure - tropper didn't have as many stretched lines and shit, so he gets that..

Wordplay - tie, no multies or nothing special..

Flow - Both verses flowed pretty evenly..

Overall - I gotta give it to phantom, i honestly didn't think that he would win, but he had better personals and disses, so he takes it..


return the favor with nothin but an honest vote in this thread, , 1..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144250

I guess every one else voted for trooper, but honestly, i didn't like any of his punchlines in this won, honestly..

Haaaaaaaaaaa ya vote dont count dude read the rulez
3-0 Ko
allready sent it in
good shit phantom but ya vote came 2 late





Nextttttttt

oh, my bad, good try tho phantom , i thought you had the slight edge, but you agreed to the rules..

aye troop you can still have ur ko (even tho i didnt really understand the rules) but can we just leave this open so i can see how many votes i get? ill even tell strobe myself that u got it but i just wanna see....iz that coo?