~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ vs shake-spear
 

Battle Rules:

3-5 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-24-04 at 04:54 PM

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shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 03:59 PM.

~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 04:09 PM.

yo dawg just dont bite or no show that shit pisses me off ill be ready in 15........

i shake peers wit my shakespear so stay clear/
and spit bars that takes queers bout eight years/
jus to understand have ku$tum stretched out like a rubberband/
brothaman u wouldnt be sick if u was the son of sam/(he was sick in the head)
and u aint da fuckin man u fuckin men stay stuck in dem/
ussually stay wit 4-9s like san fran but now im tuckin ten/
u tuck ya nuts and cluck u lil butt-fuck/
u lack word ill smack u backwords now ku$tum, mut$uk/(must suck)
and u know im betta then u so u have-to-hate/
cause da only time u get pussy is when u masterbate/ pussy

one

yo i think i have ten bars but im new and dont know how yall count bars so im not sure i counted that as five but my fault if its too much.

yo check it this rookie is finished lets go.......

i ''terrorize'' watch as the ''barrel-rise''...| keep playin *superman* watch as ya ass get ''paralized''...| and yes ur still gay even though u only *fuck* ''steril-guys''...| 1

shake-spear is running outta of *gas* like after a hurricane at ''texaco''/ so in sig this kid is the ''next-ta-go''/ becuase u not passing *kustums* like we're in ''mexico''...| 2
[i put people i beat in my sig* [signature]]

i ''shake-spear''/ and leave no-one enjoying him like ''fake-beer''/ b/c ur not beatting me just to ''make-it-clear''/ b/c ya lines are longer and more *played* than ''shakespear''...|3

shake-spear's a herb and his verse is ''poor-an-so-whack''....| mah punches will leave ya ''sore-an-so-black''...|and ill put a *bullet* on ya jersey like a ''jordan-throwback''...| 4

to beat me u will need ''all-ya-game''/ but ya verse belongs on the ''wall-of-shame''/ so after i murk u *retire* and dont comeback like the ''hall-of-fame''...| 5

good battle shake-spear uppin for votes................

u nice son nice battle i like ya style uppin for votes

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

u got this 1 for the simple fact that u hard punches that were actually hittin, goor metaphors, wordplay, multis, AND ur opener & closer were hot too, so u got the v/ from me aight -1-

thanx for vote........1-0 still uppin................

1-0 keep em kummin .......... i will return favors

stop sleeping drop votes and i will hit up yalls battles [honestlly] 1-0 still uppin

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

good battle props to both. but here's the verdict.

shakes-you have flow and multi's down, but the problem is your content and phrases. They sound elementary.
"u tuck ya nuts and cluck, you lil buttfuck."
that sounds unbeleivably 5th grade, and this really takes away the intensity of your verse. You can't be on some childish shit when you battle son. You gotta put your game face on.

K.I.-good structure and presentation, and flow. but a true lack of hard punches on this one. but you come with an entertaining style though, which is key, and you came harder than your opponent did on this one so i'll give you the 'W'

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~



i shake peers wit my shakespear so stay clear/
and spit bars that takes queers bout eight years/
little multis 2ed line a filler....

jus to understand have ku$tum stretched out like a rubberband/
brothaman u wouldnt be sick if u was the son of sam/(he was sick in the head)
decent..

and u aint da fuckin man u fuckin men stay stuck in dem/
ussually stay wit 4-9s like san fran but now im tuckin ten/
decent

u tuck ya nuts and cluck u lil butt-fuck/
u lack word ill smack u backwords now ku$tum, mut$uk/(must suck)
ummm no i wasnt feeling this.....

and u know im betta then u so u have-to-hate/
cause da only time u get pussy is when u masterbate/ pussy
ending was preety weak....

u started decent but fell off.... 6.0

i ''terrorize'' watch as the ''barrel-rise''...| keep playin *superman* watch as ya ass get ''paralized''...| and yes ur still gay even though u only *fuck* ''steril-guys''...| 1
decent start...

shake-spear is running outta of *gas* like after a hurricane at ''texaco''/ so in sig this kid is the ''next-ta-go''/ becuase u not passing *kustums* like we're in ''mexico''...| 2
[i put people i beat in my sig* [signature]]
not bad preety good..

i ''shake-spear''/ and leave no-one enjoying him like ''fake-beer''/ b/c ur not beatting me just to ''make-it-clear''/ b/c ya lines are longer and more *played* than ''shakespear''...|3
preety good personal...

shake-spear's a herb and his verse is ''poor-an-so-whack''....| mah punches will leave ya ''sore-an-so-black''...|and ill put a *bullet* on ya jersey like a ''jordan-throwback''...| 4
haha nice feeling this.... *this alone won the battle*

to beat me u will need ''all-ya-game''/ but ya verse belongs on the ''wall-of-shame''/ so after i murk u *retire* and dont comeback like the ''hall-of-fame''...| 5
ha good ending....

nice verse good punches flow good creativeness was above average all around tight drop.... 8.0

still uppin 3-0.................................................

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

yo hahahah dis battle was good man yo man kustum's verse was funny as hell his opener set it off n durin da verse i cudnt help bnut start crakcin up man hahaha good verse, yo shakspear man u did iite dawg ur punchbes and da son of sam line was tite man but try gettin betta wordplay and vocab ,

iite 1 love yall return da favor man

This was feedback posted for ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
 

Pffffffttttttt Do I Have To Explain Shit Punches And Personals Nuttin More To It-just An Feedback

This was feedback posted for ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
 

yo thats my boy yo that was dope as fuck thats why i put you in the crew

than x yall 4-0 uppin 1 vote............................

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

Shake Spear, You Had Nice Word Play, Ya Verse Was Difficult To Read, But It Was Aight, Ya Had Punches Too, They Waznt The Best Of Punches But I Liked Ya Style, Good Lookin n Keep Doin Ya Thang, BUT..........
.......................Kustum Had Punches, Vocab, Multies, Metas, An He Tore It Up! ....Vote Has To Go Too KUSTUM, Wasnt That There Was Anythan' Wrong With Shakes Flow, It Was Juss Uhmm.....KUSTOMS Was Too Good!
5/10 For Shake Spear
8/10 For KUSTOM

*KUSTOM GOT MY VOTE*