Paramik vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:

6 -10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Links

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-24-04 at 07:23 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

oki pussy boi im going to take this win if i lose you get to insult me in lyricist ounge and if i win you'll put in your sig that you lost to me and if you win i'll put same shit in my sig

ok just accept the fucking battle cuz i spit aganist fiya and the lame bitch ducked me

only six lines ok cos i got no time you have to do six lines too since im doing six lines

accept pussy it says 6-10 lines if you too weak then only drop 6 im droping the max or whatever i can finish in the time limit now accept

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 07:20 PM.

Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 07:23 PM.

My patience worn with his lyrical whackness
So i'll ''GHOST'' his verse i consider this ''SPIRTUAL PRACTICE''
(1)
No punchlines no talent at all and you traying to HATE ME?
My verse will smash ya head on ya computer hard as ya ''AVY''
(2)
Nine and two lets do a recount on ya record
Battled BOOMER and Nate Dogg and expect me to respect u?
(3)

FINISHER-
When you poking ya gay lover only time you the hardest fag
Ya bum ass is dumb trash you should write on a ''GARBAGE BAG
(4)

1)a ghost is a spirt and im gonna ghost his verse so its only practice for me spirtually
2)his avy is a dude smashing his head on his computer
3)he never beat noone he battled boomer and nate dogg the 2 worst rappers on rv he has no respect for his wins
4)only time he can get hard is his dick when hes poking his boyfriend and hes so trash he should write on a garbage bag so he can throw it out easier

Claims he is the most active, so bitch obsessed with this site.
But Empires respect goes down rapid, like flying broken kites.
This guy ducks so much this bitch already known to “quack.”
And when this bitch steps up to battle, fag’s known to “lean back.”
Bitch, my fucking bars hit harder than a guy with an iron fist.
Got pride?, this guy must be pussy, I’ll just call him a lioness.
Cause Empire just lured me in with nothing but some kitten chow.
This dog wants to forfeit the game, but can’t say “meow” (“me out”)*


Swa one of his early posts and said he was a dog He can’t forfeit cos dog don’t say “meow” only “cat’s” do- for the fags who don’t understand shit

ROFL what fake personals lmao
may the best textcee win

Voted For: Paramik

hahahaah paramik u got my vote cuz ya lines was cleva and ya flo was nice u got em on punches and u brought back sum early battles which alot of ppl dont do u nice big ups

empire ya vocab great but this aint an english novel u gotta wrk on punches and step ya game up the fag shit thats old it played u gotta wrk em and his name u iight jus wrk on sum shit (no hate)

vote= paramik

Voted For: Paramik

ha ha merk-fest! i would vote but his bitch ass would call it a hate. fuckin faggot with bad punches...(empire)

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hey empire dont bitch,it was and accident, it'll get removed. but y use fake punches/personals?

phantom please reedit your vote cos you didnt put enuf iinfo

Voted For: Empire

both verse's was tight but i give it
2 Empire cuz his wordplay was a lil
better n made his punches better
Paramik's verse was good 2 but just not as
good vote on my battles in my sig i voted on
ya battle

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too bad you cant erase that phantom already admited to giving a hater vote ill get him banned for it so dont bother paramik

^^ not enuf info on telling how empire won give more details this either has to be removed or he has to vote agian but in a more detailed vote

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Upping this battles please vote and ill return the favor

Voted For: Paramik

Claims he is the most active, so bitch obsessed with this site.
But Empires respect goes down rapid, like flying broken kites.

sorry empire u didnt hav no lines dat beat dis one so ima vote for Paramik both had sum good sheit tho .......... gone

upping lease vote here and ill return the favor

Voted For: Empire

i vote empire sipmly because of his punchlins got me.

"When you poking ya gay lover only time you the hardest fag
Ya bum ass is dumb trash you should write on a ''GARBAGE BAG" now that was funny that took it for me

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IIIGht upping please vote in this and ill return the favor

Voted For: Paramik

you get my vote here.....

ya punches made a difference in this battle....your personals was good too.....even tho ya punches were betta then his you coulda made them betta...ya opener was ok...second line of ya opener was weak....ya closer needs improvement too...wordplay was ok .. but still good verse....

Empire....ya verse needs some help dog...ya verse just seemed so simple to me...personals were aight coulda made them come betta by usin betta wordplay wit them...and ya third bar...i couldnt seem to rhyme that i might just be illiterate....ya opener coulda been way betta....as well as ya closer....ya punchlines were just weak....elevate....

Voted For: Empire

PARAMIK: WHY DO PEOPLE ON THIS BOARD NOT USE MULTIS......USE MULTIS...duck meta..WACK + PLAYED..thats a double negative..but this aint math, that shit dont equal a posotive (unless your the opponent)...me out line was the only good one and it was forced like rape...verse was so-so...and when your postin blind or first...you CANT afford to spit so-so

EMPIRE: nice link to ghost and spiritual...YAY!!! SUMONE FINALLY USED A MULTI....i cant see his avy so the punch was meaningless untill i post this vote...i dont even know who them 2 are but the punch still made me laugh....trash and garbage connections are played and ya multis are kinda basic but your the only one i see usin em *shrugs*

*cough*... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144426 ...*cough* (1 vote in like a week and a half....and its not even like its a hard decision)

um...i just noticed that paramik is in my crew so you might have ta not count that vote


^^shows i vote fairly at ALL times

Voted For: Paramik

close battle

flow-empire
punches-paramik
multiz-paramik
wordplay-paramik
metz/simz-empire
opener-empire
closer-paramik

vote paramik

props to both

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now go vote on my battles in my signiture!!!!!!!!!!thanks

Voted For: Paramik

para's verse had alot more content n was flowing really well with nice structure that helped alot average punches for the most part your rhyme scheme was more prodominant in this battle...empire your punches were alright but ya had one that did'nt rhyme at all ta me(3) structure could be better but i liked you opener but the syllable count was'nt very equal..nice rhyme scheme on that one though...overall i gotta give this ta para jus cause of more consistent punches that were deliverd with good flow.....good battle..keepin it honest..

Voted For: Paramik

Ok a lil 1 sided on this Paramik came good in this verse nice rhymes decent punches came personal and overall was makin me laugh i liked the structure of ur verse too and it flowed well

Fav Line;
This guy ducks so much this bitch already known to “quack.”
And when this bitch steps up to battle, fag’s known to “lean back.”

Empire i was a lil dissapointed in ur verse the punches weren't as hard and in one line u never rhymed...

Nine and two lets do a recount on ya record
Battled BOOMER and Nate Dogg and expect me to respect u?

/\ ya lost it there to be honest sorry thats the way it goes

RTF on ma sig \/