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Tuff Life Freestyle
Yeh this is a freestyle to all ma brothers that been dissed cuz they are black.
so wut the fuck is goin on in this country niggas on streets all bein treated like dirty loundry aight we used to bein pulled over cuz we all black but since when do we also get beat down for dat we got enouf trouble wit da war, brothers bein shiped every day but now when we see white cops, we gotta find detour way cuz they all disrespect a brother cuz they kids actin like us just cuz they kids dress all black, nobody likes us and since when a broither is a threat to society, DAMN they tryed to ruin our culture, and WE should give back to THEM? and why the fuck we the ones livin in crappiest neighbourhoods and we are the ones needin charity clothes and foods they close most the ways to society, and den blaim us for sellin dope so if u take dat a way might just give most of us a sope and a rope ya think we all athlets and shit, no son you wrong ya think all dem rappers can make it, shit keep singin that song yeah lets face it, yall dont wanna see a black man make it if u see some "punks" who do, u come and u try and take it well aint that the truth i aint takin this shit no more i think its time for all brothers to settle the score and yeah heres da link where i feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144989 |
yo man i read the whole thing wack drop man wackest shit ever and ever...
naw im just playin wit ya dope drop 9/10 flow good wordplay good |
Thnx man, main thing is dat u felt da theme, UPPIN
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^^^^^ uppin
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hey commonppl need tha feed back ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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nice man good drop...
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thnx man Uppin
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more feed is needed common uppin
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that was hott. even though im white, i still think it was hot. props.
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aight, thanks uppin some more, yall gotta feel this in my opinion cuz this is relavant
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yo nice drop enough said peace i like it man 6/10
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ya nice spit man
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7/10 man yer dope but not the best ive seen peace
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o sry about this but ya you need soem vocab tho thats all man
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^what thos dumb bitchs are say lol
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7/10 elavate vocab
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yeah i know ma vocab is weak, uppin some more
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ya dat shitz was nice cuz...you spelled laundry wrong tho
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who the fuck cares if he spelt laundry wrong damn......yall dident even feel that shit, man not every white persons racist n shit tho, and not every white boys got it made feel me? keep it pimpin dog.... that rymes from the heart 9/10
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yea im white but that shit dont matta that can touch ny 1 on sum kinda level nice drop mayne fuck da spellin i kno what cha said lmao
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yall people i just wanna say though i didnt mean the all them white people, but currently all i c are made whiteboyz who claim they hard, so yeah. I know white people who arent racist, but many times i get looked at wrong just cuz im from the hood. Thancks For The Feed Yall. UPPIN more
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still uppin gotta get us opinions
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ay nice drop that u put in
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dat is sum true shit man keep writin shit
like dat u gone get feedbak 4real shit was ill check my shit out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146200 |
Thanks Dawg UPPIN
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it was alright 4/10
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a yo that shit was tight keep it up
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aight uppin
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yo sun thats the best shit i ever heard you spit its got a cali flow too it pure fucking dope sun a 8/10 good job big homie :thumbup:
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still uppin on this toooo
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