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fuck wut u think(give feedback dont sleep)
i kno ya'll missed me well im back well neva left jus havent posted in open mic..2 busy battlin faggot's like intensify effect n shit:laugh:ya'll like my old shit than ya'll should love dis new ish holla back n leave feedback peace
Intro... if sum1 came up 2 me n asked wut would i think if i was a respected artist or if i wasnt.... id tell'em like eminem-"i dont give a fuck"n 2pac-"fuck the entire world"cuz "i dont give a fuck wut u think"-raw killa -hook- i took u in when ya time was hard/ u broke da trust n left me scars/ got me floatin in smoke n drownin in drinks/ tlk blasphemy but i dont give a fuck wut u think/ verse1 jus like u im livin life lookin 4 a break lookin 2 survive/ 2 niggaz 1 in da same/caught in da game jus tryin 2 stay alive/ do wut we can 2 stay out of bein behind bars struggle n strive/ since high school when been breakin rules concellin tools/ not those dat build but take n threatin lives fools/ keep walkin mind ya business b4 u end in ya own blood pool/ made a pack sort of like m.o.b but it was niggaz b4 bitches/ neva let a chick come between our dreams of countin riches/ if sum1 disrespected left'em sew'n up wit stiches/ young thugs sweatin hard in hells kitchens/ handlin snitches caught switchin fuck those snake bitches/ its me n my niggaz against da world fuck u all bitches/ causin a rukus smokin forties n drinkin blunts/ fuck i mean drinkin 40's n smokin blunts/ abusive 2 woman? naw we jus abused they cunts/ -hook- verse2 times change and we get older n as time goes by we grow apart/ da light dat once shined grows dark da bark became a bite/ shit switches n first comes da bite than da bark/ it went from havin my back 2 showin a spark lightin up da dark/ 2 minds who thought alike now corruption fills ya heart/ i took u in brought u in 2 a world goin from rags 2 riches/ u went from a virgin 2 livin lavish n fuckin bitches/ i took u from poverty 2 pullin da switches so we evade da po-po/ now u so-so tlkn shit behind my back n hangin wit snitches/ a dawg now grown into a snake fuck it throw ya childhood away/ aimin a gun 2 my temple/while i finish writin my mental way/ sittin on dis swing on da "grounds" we use 2 "play"/ look wit disgust at my back stabbin demon as i walk away/ damn nigga i neva meant for our lives 2 end up dis way/ but when u a snake in da jungle its da crime u pay/ u can love us/n luv us/or hate us/n cross us/ but fuck wut u think dats all i got 2 say/ |
I feel you all the way on this one right here...fuck tha hataz who say we wack homie...shit was dope...holla
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thanx nigga yo im still uppin dis shit do not sleep on dis hot shit leave feedback n no fuckin hataz wun luv
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THOUGHT IT WAS DECENT LIKED THE liked the 2nd verse more had better content n seemed ta flow well so issues with the rhyme scheme in verse 2...were they both written by you?...in audio i think ya might've been able ta pull off some of those rhymes but its harder in text...was this supposed ta be audio? overall i liked your idea's but you lacked a little on vocab....i honestly don't think it compares ta your stuff i've commented on b4....but still nice job..keep it up killa
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if i can evr get da right equipment i would like 2 do audio but now im jus stuck wit text.......n yes i wrote da whole thing.....i write my own shit all da time homie peace nigga uppin dis shit
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ayt rv im sick of u people sleepin do wut ya supposed 2 n leave feedback......i kno a quick 5 minutes of ur time cant hurt u....uppin for feedback.....as many fuckin peeps view a thread should equal how many replies it has naw ya'll 2 lazy..wake up n return da favor wun luv peace out holla back
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nice shit man...
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Nice, but damn man ur sucha douchebag, Ill battle you and murk you BITCH CHECK IT
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wtf is dis guy smokin?
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look homie u dont kno who u challengin.....y record may suck but there's reason 4 dat n they dont have 2 do wit me suckin.......cuz of hataz n dick ridaz u a newbie i show u fuckas respect so dont come on my thread tlkn shit n tlkn big i shoot ur small asses down....thanx 4 da repies holla back jus real replies no hatin bullshit....u wanna call me out post da thread in fuckin bitch slapped dummies |
i actully thought it was preety good....
honestly best i've ever seen from u word up and i actully give u props for it.... flow decent... vocab lackin, creativeness average but sorda deep, and it was da first verse or open mic i actully read all tyhe way through.... N thats being honest... 6.7 keep droping like this N u might start evelating.... open mic wise thou..... |
thanx 4 ur *kindness* but I.E. we kno i got i skillz already way elevated over u n open mics n battles
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ayt rv quit sleepin on me im always givin feedback for u people quit bein lazy n return da fuckin favor shit peace
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damn, this was dope as fuck, u wanna do a colab remix cause i feel the same way, HOT SHIT
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sure homie hit me up through pm if u wanna do a remix holla back nigga wun luv thanx 4 da feedback peace
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thats why u cant ever give a honest feed back cuz a neg hate line will come out sooner or later.... SON i said it was preety good cuz that is the best u ever drop in RV point-blank dont get it twisted EVERYONE IN RV knows im better..... if u so sure u better then me...... PINK SLIP BATTLE ME N KIDD YA SORRY ASS GOO-BYE OTHER THEN THAT SHUT YA FUCKING TRASH ASS UP WORD-UP....... i put my R.V contrac on the line that im better thats how confident i im are u??? HAHAHA |
I.E. da biggest bitch of rv lol
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look pussy aint no gonna say u better than me except ur dick riders.....probly even got love from sum of ur "rode dogs" cracker jack bitch u a fuckin child u 21 yrs old n still suckin ya motha nipples look bitch aint no contract wit dis bullshit website we dont get paid so u can shove dat offer up ur ass homo n btw im havin dat whack ass unexplained vote dq'd dont have muthafuckas vote 4 u cheater.....take our battle as a lose cuz i gurantee ur gonna lose it pussy point blank bottom line only reason why have u fuckin pussy like u hate on me cuz A. u wish u was me or B. u wish i was wit u now dats da truth hands done bear it n weap u whack pussy so stayu out my threads homo :laugh::shoot: |
^^^ if u so confident that u better nigga BATTLE ME FOR PINK SLIP........
PINK SLIP PINK SLIP DO U UNDER_STAND WHAT PINK SLIP IS BITCH!!!!!!1 U SCAR?ED MOTHER FUCKER STOP ACTING ALL FUCKING HARD ONLINE U WORTH-LESS PIECE OF SHIT THE DOC COULDNT ABORD IN-TIME BEFOR YA DUMB ASS FELL OUT YA MOMS DIRTY CLICK N HIT THE FLOOR N STILL LIVED TO BE A FUCKING RETARTED GEEK ONLINE WHO ACTS LIKE THE MAN HE CANT BE IN REAL LIFE!!!!! WHCIH IS STRAIGHT UP GANGSTA U STRAIGHT PUSSY........ \ EITHER U PINK SLIP BATTLE ME OR SHUT YA MOTHER FUCKING MOUTH FOR THE REST OF THE TIME U ON R.V POINT BLANK......... U'VE BEEN SONNED!!!!!!!!!!!! |
yo nice shit raw killa................ima stay out a dis beef yall got............but i liked tha flow............btw...........wut the fuck is pink slip?
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loser get bannd fromt he site 4-good ENOUGH SAID............ MAN-UP_BITCH!!!!! YA TIME TO GO IS NOW............... :cussing: :shoot: :help: |
yo, raw man...thas a pretty serious challenge dawg...i would seriously think hard about dat shit b4 actin'
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Man i felt the reailty in this you really put your heart in this man , peace.
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yo IE dawg aint no1 into that u fukin fagot dawg get off his dick u fukin fag
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