Influence vs wordplaya
 

Battle Rules:

6 -10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feeding
no d/r votes

goos luck your spittin first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 02:01 PM

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WORDPLAYA has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 02:03 PM.

Influence has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 02:04 PM.

my rhymes set with fire, burn you into "ash",
Scoldered and burnt he's doing the "monster mash",
youve been beaten once its time for "round two",
now it's time for people to be shouting wordplaya "who",
i'm like a bad nightmare but i never seem to fade "away",
you rap like a baby, goo goo gah, i'm gay gay "gay"
i wish you'd just dissapeare off the face of the "earth"
your mum wishes when you were born you died at "birth"
your never getting respected, shit no one even likes "you"
like i said you were a baby you'd scream if i shouted "boo"

yo you spittin or what?? your close to gettin dqued.... hurr up

Just like in ya bio dawg I'll Merk U
under da Influence cuz its past ya curfew
n like da maxtrix moves ur punches in slow mo
n ya hype is like my ride dat shit is Low Low
diss ain't a boxing ring but u'll Fight for your life
kuz diss beef cant be cut wit a regular butter knife
wit 10 lines u'll might as well call me 'Big Ben'*
cuz when da 'clock' strike 12 ya 'ball(s) ima bash' in
den leave u ON Fire like Banks 4 not LETtin Me IN**
n like tappin 'ass' so let me get sum of ya 'chin'***

*Big Ben is a clock n its Ben Wallce's nick name
**ON Fire LLYOD Banks song Let M e IN Bucks song
***ass chin booty chin

yo i hate to say this wordplaya but your dqued cos of the check in time its over due buy nearly 5 mins

it shoulda closed den but it let
me post so dont trip on it

aight dat was a nice verse i dint think you were that good i shouldav tried harder blah!

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

wordplaya wins this battle bcuz his punches were stronger n structure was way bettter
influences flow was way too simple and ti didnt really attack the other person it was just......not together lol idk how to describe it. U need ot elevate n make ur rhymes more creative
so wordplaya takes this batttle
holla at me
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thanx 4 ya vote String can
we get sum more honest votes

we still uppin 4 ya votes so
cum out n vote on our battle

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

Influence you came aight this time but your wordplay was weak an lackin your verse wasn't bad nor great... wordplaya you lived up to yah name this time though you verse was full of goodword play your play off of buck and banks might of been slightly play'd but still aight punches where hard hittin and connected well both work on personals....
BOTH STAY UP STAY ACTIVE VOTE OFTEN

Voted For: Influence

i'm like a bad nightmare but i never seem to fade "away",
you rap like a baby, goo goo gah, i'm gay gay "gay"

and

your never getting respected, shit no one even likes "you"
like i said you were a baby you'd scream if i shouted "boo


lol those lines got me laughing....gd job...he had better personald and that gives him a plus as for me...and i liked his structure bettr than WORDPLAYA's...even thought both ha d gd 1...both verses were tight but those lines of Influence gives him a plus fo real as for me...props to both tho
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can we get sum honest vote ya
we still uppin 4 sum

yo we still uppin 4 sum
honest votes ya so cum
n vote

Voted For: Influence

i return all honest votes, therefore i think influence, influenced you not to battle him no more...lol...naw, i think he took this with better punches and wordplay, thats about it...not a too good battle, but yall came wit it, but i htink yall could do better than that...elevate yourselves...ummm, wordplaya, you had too many simple rhymes in yo flow, and you was losin me in some of yo lines...so i couldnt give this vote to you, but keep praticing, you gunna be sick


holla bac...drop votes...in sig people

thanx dawg now dats a honest vote
can wer please get more like dat

can we get sum more honest votes ya
we'll get bak at ya battles

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

aight this was an ok battle... heres my 2 cents

Influence~your structure was pretty good and you had some decent punches too but others were wack and the gay thing is played out... 6/10
Wordplaya~pretty good verse overall... you should do sumtin wit ur structure cuz its kinda plain... your punches were good and u had like 1 personal...7/10

Favorite line~
n like da maxtrix moves ur punches in slow mo
n ya hype is like my ride dat shit is Low Low

vote~wordplaya

thanx 4 ya vote can we
get sum more honest votes ya

cumon ya we still uppin 4 sum more
honest votes

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

Influence-you had some good vocab. but some of your punches were off.......and most of your lines were played out...you used just two rhymin words every two lines....your closer was terrible....but your opener was tight....Monster Mash lol....

WORDPLAYA-i liked ya word play on dis you didnt use just two rhymin words, ya opener was tight, and so was ya closer,
all around good verse.......and to me it was pretty one sided...
V/WORDPLAYA

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

yo man u had better personals structure and flow and punches yours went all the way through while influence really didn't have any hard punches had good flow though and structure but just didn't have enough to win this battle