MjGrEeN vs ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
 

Battle Rules:

18 - normal Lines only.
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 06:01 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 06:02 PM.

3 to 5 bars or 6 to 10 lines is that good???/.....

i dont have much time ima bout to be out/.........

18 line max u dont have to use all that................

~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 06:05 PM.

This kid is ''menstrual''...| mj green cant write his own shit he bites and *traces like ''stencils''...| in this battle u staying *#2* like ''pencils''...| 1

ya style is wrong, but i leave ya not being able to turn-right like ''race~cars''...| my punches bruise so ''take~scars''...| mj reminds k.i. of a *candy theif* the way he bites and ''takes~bars''...| 2

you gunna beat me with that? ''damn~thats~week''...| this kids not a gangsta , hes ya regular ''stand~up~geek''...| my punches leave green *screaming in tha background *like ''damn~dipset~beats''...| 3

i should be banned the way i ''blew~out~this~g''...|the only time i *take a L* is when i smoke and ''blew~out ~the~ weed ''...| ill treat mj like *finding nemo* the way cops will be searchin for his body ''through~out~the~sea''...| 4

beating mj is easier than a *lay-up'' coast 2 ''coast''...| your shits old and ''stale-man'' so dont even start to ''boast''...|after i murk u ill treat ya like the ''mail-man'' the way u will retire from ''post''...| 5 [karl malone]

mj green? yeah this ''melsters~gay''...| ill say fuck you, stuck up mah middle finger and let this ''jester~stay''...|and after i post mah verse i know ur not coming back like ''yester~day''...| 6

thats mine....uppin urs..... come back
if yall dont understand....dont vote

Yo, i'm an unknown mc with everything to prove,
Your unknown and a rookie, your in my way to fame, so move,
bitch i wrote a book to pass on my skills especially for you,
you took pre-menstrual pills and said you'd started puberty, how coo.

Today i thought i'd kill my victim slowly cause i'm feeling twisted,
but it was sadistic how you kissed it, caressed it then frisked it,
and when i say 'it 'of course i am meaning your mom,
incest runs in your family, its tatooed on your arm.

I am gonna have to show you the way, as your a freaking gay who likes touching children's boo-tay,
scum like you can't be found anywhere on earth,
2.5 millimeters is the size of your gurth.

Pencil penis, you have to lube your shit to stop the wood caving in,
i'm wav-ing the good doctors to come in to stop the gay bum-ming and to stop the fag cum-min,
i know your scared of my skills, fear is the first symptom of your fate,
but 6am is when ur girl came round to me, thats late,
usual time is 5:30am, yeh, please dont hate.

uppin for votes................................../

you seem to specialise in the shorter verses and i ran out of inspiration so i hope i can still pull it off, unlimited lines i shoulda made the rule

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

give it 2 K.I. kuz he had better
wordplay dat made his flow n punches
tight MJ urs wasn't bad but keep workin on it
vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

1-0 still uppin thanx for vote.....nice verse mj..

i could do better i stumpled trying to attempt 'multi's' but i hope those get me enuff points to win the battle

still uppin.....1-0

ya need votes for mj, remeber only vote if its for MjGrEeN ;)

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

iight alot of kustoms shit was played...but mj man....get sum multiz in ur verse...shits to plain...and kustom i just aint a fan of the fuckin paragraph bars homie

punches-kustom
multiz-kustom
flow-mj green
wordplay-kustom
structure-mj green
complexibility-kustom
personals-tie

vote-kustom


kustom....6/10
MjGreen...4/10


up ur ish.....good battle

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

yo i gots to give dis to kustum

kustum
punches-10/10
flow-9/10
wordplay-8/10
-27

mjfreen
punches-7/10
flow-9/10
wordplay-7/10 (be more creactive)
-24

nice spit from both of yall

but it camd down with punches & wordplays

yo kustum return an fav mayne da link its in da sig

thanx for vote 3-0 still uppim 4 more

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

pUNCHLINES AUTOMATICALLY GO TO kU$TUM, HE CAME HARD ON THAT AND A LITTLE MORE CREATIVE AND LESS PLAYED.. STRUCTURE WAS ALSO NICE ON BOTH SIDES.. WORDPLAY WAS PRETTY AVERAGE, COO RHYMES.. FLOW GOES TO KUz$TUM, I VIBED FROM HIS BETTER, OPENER AND CLOSER FROM KU$TUM WAS ALSO HARDER SO I HAVE TO GO WITH HIM..

vOTE = kU$TUM..

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be coo if sum1 would vote for me, wasn't one of my best but only been doing this one day and i got a whole lot more to offer, i choked a bit so.

its all good just alearning experience dawg u did good for first time...... i got u in the future ull be good.....4-0 uppin one vote

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

give it 2 K.I. cuz he had da better
flow his punches hitn he had a lil metas
MJ Green keep practicin i garuntee u get
better change ya structure n us metas n punches
u'll do good
v/K.I.