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phantom vs e-dubz
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crew battle: phantom (LRI) vs e-dubz (class sic) 10-16 lines No Crew/hate or d/r Votes No Recycling No Biting No feeding Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 08-26-04 at 11:57 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 11:34 PM.
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you a local-ist.......... so imma blaze my nine at yo whole crew mans
cuz combined yo couldnt hit punch-lines if yo caught k-o’s at lemon-aid stands so lower yo own possibility of a win when taste-less lines exit bitter lips touch my flows? nah nigga........ not even if i pissed on yo finger tips this my home now yall as welcome as Manson was with Roman Pilanski’s wife i got it out for yo, like black people do for MJ since hes tryin to pass fo white but i dont know why im wasting time on you, you couldn't put up half a fight dollar bills could have King Arthur on em, you wouldn't be worth half a (k)night yo whole family’s probably trash, and i ain’t even tryin to be mean but fuck a win….... cuz shit is the only streak in yo genes(jeans) cant stay up on beat...... always outta breath like asthmatics this nigga always gettin laid down, time to call yo a Craftmatic any personals you write......... are your own lies misplaced if CSI checks yo verses for talent....... they won't find a trace dawg, whenever you spit........ and i have hunches you know that like payed off boxers.......... you sacrifice punches for flow |
Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 03:31 AM.
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evacuate yo buildin with explosives set to be flown fool...
im a low ryder, your 'dubz'...no fuckin wonder i own you... you're a noob basher/wannabe vet, with no apparent skills... ya crew rushin to 'clean up' like you was caught in a oil spill... i'd claim you get d/r votes but you're barely known to exist... you're like a manual on manure, just chokked full of "bullshit"... why name yourself that? not even your bike has 20' spokes... ill be 'smashing' til your 'bloody', make you a good british joke... this rapper/masturbatin virgin buys trojans to 'cum' with 'heat'... someone told him to 'elevate' so he put womens shoes on his feet... homos have their gay 'issues', but for you thats not the right depiction... your 'issues' come in all the time, shit you have a 'lifetime subscription'... come on nigga,you dont 'bring the noise' like a nonexistant riot.. plus your 'shit' dont feel right, like rosanne on the 'atkins diet'... i know this one is played, but "your title states you're an herb"... i just 'popped' this 'dub' and set my left over 'rubber' on da curb... |
This was feedback posted for e-dubz
yomkid oyu came hard thru the whole flow...good shit kid......just try to work on oyur structure alil.......but good flow i think you got this......nice punches and coo meta4s......and your ending was hella nice.......good shit....
8/10 line 2: im a low ryder, your 'dubz'...no fuckin wonder i own you..................^^^^ that was coo but you killed it in the end of that line but good thinking ...kid you got real potiential...good shit......you was coming with heat till you started spitten those played rhymes but good shit.....the CUMN meta4s and shit are fgettin played...that british shit was aight.......not really any good shit..i can tell you guys both tried your best...this is gonna be a even battle....8/10 |
uppin this shit..
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Voted For: Phantom
im givin props to both of ya...........good luck.. Removed |
oh shyt....i actually clicked fucken vote instead of feed back shyt..i'll tell strobe to change dis shyt
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nigga that shit dont count...heeeellll nah.....pm strobe and dq that vote.......
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Voted For: e-dubz
Damn this was a close battle a real close battle, you both had hard hitting punches, good wordplay and real nice flow. E Dubz your second bar was butter, real nice punch, Phantom you countered it with your opener it was real nice as well. Phantom you would of had this battle had the last 25% of your battle not fallen off, it was good don't get me wrong but I wasn't feel'n the whole rosanne punch as well as your finisher. E dubz takes this one cause you were consistant all the way through even though Phantom you had probably the hardest hitting punches in the battle there just wasn't enough of them. Good battle you guy's should battle again. |
iight uppin fo votes
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Voted For: e-dubz
this was a damn close battle... aight e dubz gets the vote from me he killed it with that csi line lol....gud shit...ur flow was gud and i liked ur wordplay....overall id say 8.5/10 gud shit pahntom gud verse but i wasnt really feelin it it seemed to ordinary....but otherwise u had gud flow gud srtucture overall id say 8/10 gud battle homies stay up |
This was feedback posted for Phantom
nice battle..........its close in my opinion can't vote pantoms in my crew..........
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This was feedback posted for Phantom
just feedback i want to see the poll
ya mean i hope we winnin aight |
vote fo my man
Phantom aight yall we need ya'll support aight |
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Voted For: e-dubz
Phantom evacuate yo buildin with explosives set to be flown fool... im a low ryder, your 'dubz'...no fuckin wonder i own you... nice personal to open this ish....7/10 you're a noob basher/wannabe vet, with no apparent skills... ya crew rushin to 'clean up' like you was caught in a oil spill... fell off a bit 6/10 i'd claim you get d/r votes but you're barely known to exist... you're like a manual on manure, just chokked full of "bullshit"... nothing special flow was there but the punch didn't really connect well enough 5/10 why name yourself that? not even your bike has 20' spokes... ill be 'smashing' til your 'bloody', make you a good british joke... blah...its okay pretty basic tho 5/10 this rapper/masturbatin virgin buys trojans to 'cum' with 'heat'... someone told him to 'elevate' so he put womens shoes on his feet... lol funny but unoriginal 6/10 homos have their gay 'issues', but for you thats not the right depiction... your 'issues' come in all the time, shit you have a 'lifetime subscription'... dope 7/10 come on nigga,you dont 'bring the noise' like a nonexistant riot.. plus your 'shit' dont feel right, like rosanne on the 'atkins diet'... straight 5/10 i know this one is played, but "your title states you're an herb"... i just 'popped' this 'dub' and set my left over 'rubber' on da curb... personal again 6/10 OVERALL: 47/80 E-Dubz you a local-ist.......... so imma blaze my nine at yo whole crew mans cuz combined yo couldnt hit punch-lines if yo caught k-o’s at lemon-aid stands aight punch basic and in a way played 6/10 so lower yo own possibility of a win when taste-less lines exit bitter lips touch my flows? nah nigga........ not even if i pissed on yo finger tips played a bit but still nice 6.5/10 this my home now yall as welcome as Manson was with Roman Pilanski’s wife i got it out for yo, like black people do for MJ since hes tryin to pass fo white lol funny shit I like it 7/10 but i dont know why im wasting time on you, you couldn't put up half a fight dollar bills could have King Arthur on em, you wouldn't be worth half a (k)night straight again 6.5/10 yo whole family’s probably trash, and i ain’t even tryin to be mean but fuck a win….... cuz shit is the only streak in yo genes(jeans) LMAO shit solid punch 8/10 cant stay up on beat...... always outta breath like asthmatics this nigga always gettin laid down, time to call yo a Craftmatic aight punch connected 6.5/10 any personals you write......... are your own lies misplaced if CSI checks yo verses for talent....... they won't find a trace played again 6/10 dawg, whenever you spit........ and i have hunches you know that like payed off boxers.......... you sacrifice punches for flow aight 6/10 OVERALL: 52.5/80 pretty close vote: E-Dubz |
why is it that everytime its "close" i end up getting no votes regardless? lol its all good tho. uppin.
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This was feedback posted for e-dubz
just checkin this out........................luck to ya dubz
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tight job dubs.... :thumbup:
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This was feedback posted for Phantom
wow those verses were good nice stuff good job,,,,
checking tha poll |
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Voted For: e-dubz
yo man e-dubz has it cuz he had hard punches both of you had hard punches but e-dubz had good personals i think i saw one but anywayz you both had god punch lines ... my vote go's to e-dubz... |
uppin for votes....just need one more vote...e dubz
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class sic..we are that much better
uppin for votes....just need one more vote...e dubz......class sic is taking over
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Voted For: Phantom
ok e ggod drop good vocab and disses were decent good wordplay on this also good ender true personal but punches do win battles 6/10 phantom flow kinda off but ok vocab nice disses ok but punches hit hard as fuck here and thats where you shined and got this vote for a good battle 8/10 |
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you see now?he had more consitent harder punches a honest vote no hate |
word thanks empire even tho we always talkin shit to each other.lol. uppin.
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Voted For: Phantom
Cool battles some good points and bad point Phantom: damn bro you really elevated the last tim i saw you, you elevated allot yyour verse was very good and it kinda made me luagh you had good punches and good personals also ya flow was good and so was ya structure nice overall verse and it was strong but i felt you needed rewording on 1 of ya lines Edubz: um yuo were very good you had some strong punches and [ok personals but ya structure and flow ya out and yours wasnt as hard Vote Phantom Please vote here http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144365 |
JUst to add i love this lines from e dubz
dawg, whenever you spit........ and i have hunches you know that like payed off boxers.......... you sacrifice punches for flow |
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