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XxXtayve vs intensify effect
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6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-29-04 at 05:26 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. DQ'ed.. went over line limit |
XxXtayve has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 05:28 AM.
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check in.............................
gd luck |
Intensify Effect?..thats how u getting murcked by this oustanding VET..and I’m doing this with no REGRETS (1)
son take this Spit as a 1000 holes in ya CHEST + bloods all over ur VEST,next time think twice b4 ge’in on the NET... (2) 723 POSTS..no change..you still a JOKE,you'r lines remind me of a gay in a BLOW..you would be "booed" at if this was a SHOW (3) you aint in no CREW..nigga get a fucking CLUE..u suck and u SCREWED.cant u find somethingelse to DO? (4) (he aint in no crew and in his profile he didn’t put whats he does..no work …nothing) you puches r just like and old man MOUTH...how u xpeact to hurt me when u aint even got a teeth to brag ABOUT? (5) he dosend even know wherre the fuck he FROM...you battleing me is like putting a pole up ya tinny bum BUM..(6) (in his profile he didn’t put where he from) 8lines and im leaving peeps asking your wherre about...y'all gatta know he's right herre in the cats mouth.. (7) i done with BUSTING YOU..next time i bitch slap think twice 'cos i'd keep CRUSHING YOU..now lets see if this spit aint worth saying "I’M SONING YOU"? (8) the rhymes are in caps.... 1 |
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 07:03 PM.
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yo,
even if the bunner on my hip, ya nose still gonna "smell da Glock".. bro cuz like ya sister boyfrined, when i bust in ya crib ya sis i'll be like so? u gay herb i'll tan ya hide like leather in friction my gat'll split u stiff into "four-kast" like a weather prediction *ha* i'll drown ya face in-dirty-water, cuz ya nasty flow i'll leave u murked-mate plus the only thing mentaly "ill" about u, is that u stoled rhyme from the 3ed-grade i could read ya shit "Fifty" times, N it still wouldnt "Make-Sence" I Quake-Menz, the closest this cat got to "underground" was freestyling in hes basement personal 1st bar= read what it says under hes name, N where hes from.. |
upp'in.....
i know it was weak but i aint think i needed to try......... |
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Voted For: intensify effect
ok... nice battle very good IE: you had a nie verse all cool and shit nice lines nice overall you had ok strucutre nice flow ya personald were ight knd of and so were ya punchse youcould have done some rewording thoughbut nice shit some concept were playedf though Yvoone: nice verse too ya had messedup stuructre though but ya flow was igiht ok punches and perosnals VOte IE for a bettewr verse overall |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147094 |
uupin this mo fucker
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Voted For: XxXtayve
Aight, Tayve Went Over The LIMIT, But I'm Glad She Did, She Dropped Some Nice Punches n Metas, Structre Was Right On Point n I Was Really Feelin The Melody, Nice Drop Taayve.. Effect, Ya Rhyme Was Aight Too.. Need Elevation In Vocab An Structure, But Some Aight Punches... Lil Tip EFFECT, If U Battlin A Female, U Need To Use Tight Personals.... It'd Surely Get U A Win Nice Battle.. Proppz n Keep Em Comin Return The Favor P E A C E |
Yo, Dont Take Any Notice Of Paramiks Vote Either, Them 2 Kats Always Dick Ride Each Other, They Always Votin In Each Othesr Battles...
Still A Nice Verse From Both, REAL Tight Battle, Hell I'ma Try n Get Votes 4 Ya lol Uppppppin |
lol.......
uppin peeps.............uppin |
SHOTTABOY GET OFF MY NUTS....
i vote for who wins point blank, and all of a sudden i get a vote for paramilk we dick ryde each other??? fuck outta here cuz he dont always vote for me WTF u talking about... and i aint know i was battling a female..... stay in place dunny...... |
for fuck sake uppin this shit yp
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Voted For: XxXtayve
Im Votin For Yv, Cuz Her Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Lack..(dont space them out...), Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But Yv Came A Lil Harder With It Tho Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thanx
uppin |
Voted For: XxXtayve
Ok, both verses were aight. Effect came w/ some good punches, but in his whole drop he was talking about a man, even though he wasnn't battling one. Yvonne you came with some good multis and some nice wordplay, but Effect had you on structure. Your lines were a little stretched, but that's nothing a little practice won't fix. Overall I'm giving this to Yvonne 'cuz her drop was just more on point... Vote - Yvonne Return the favor to the link in my sig, honest votes only... |
yo i swear i dont be knowing if its a female or a male im battling....
this happen already N i lost cuz my hits was for a male N i aint know... WTF... I AINT TRYING TO BATTLE NO-ONE ELSE WITHOUT THEM STAT"ING THEY SEX.... |
lol shit happens yo..........
uppin |
Voted For: XxXtayve
Shit for real? Intensity effect your verse was wack you dissing yvonna as if she's a guy. your shit was realy weak no punches that hit at all. wat the fuck is stoled? did u mean stole. Yvonne you dropped nice girl for real ok punches that hit atleast flow was poor but multi's were decent. Pz. |
ya need to stop voting on weather or not i made a mistake and diss a girl and focus on what was said insted of ooo no that was weak since it was ment for a boy and u battle a girl cuz thats straight up hate.......
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^^nah dude chill....it aint a hate vote....errbody got their impressions on verses....
imagine u reading a verse wrongly directed to a guy....deep down u wouldnt feel the verse........nah mean? uupin this bitch peeps........uppin |
uppin this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppiun this muh fucker peeps.....................wdf
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Voted For: XxXtayve
even if the bunner on my hip, ya nose still gonna "smell da Glock".. bro cuz like ya sister boyfrined, when i bust in ya crib ya sis i'll be like so? 1/10 weak opener u gay herb i'll tan ya hide like leather in friction my gat'll split u stiff into "four-kast" like a weather prediction *ha* 1/10 i'll drown ya face in-dirty-water, cuz ya nasty flow i'll leave u murked-mate plus the only thing mentaly "ill" about u, is that u stoled rhyme from the 3ed-grade 2/10 i could read ya shit "Fifty" times, N it still wouldnt "Make-Sence" I Quake-Menz, the closest this cat got to "underground" was freestyling in hes basement 1/10 ya punches were weak ya wordplay wasent there and ya structure wasent that good but it was bout the best thing u had goin for you on this drop. You could really use some elevation before u answer 2 another battle Intensify Effect?..thats how u getting murcked by this oustanding VET..and I’m doing this with no REGRETS (1) 3.10 son take this Spit as a 1000 holes in ya CHEST + bloods all over ur VEST,next time think twice b4 ge’in on the NET... (2) 2/10 723 POSTS..no change..you still a JOKE,you'r lines remind me of a gay in a BLOW..you would be "booed" at if this was a SHOW (3) 4/10 you aint in no CREW..nigga get a fucking CLUE..u suck and u SCREWED.cant u find somethingelse to DO? (4) 2/10 (he aint in no crew and in his profile he didn’t put whats he does..no work …nothing) you puches r just like and old man MOUTH...how u xpeact to hurt me when u aint even got a teeth to brag ABOUT? (5) 3.10 he dosend even know wherre the fuck he FROM...you battleing me is like putting a pole up ya tinny bum BUM..(6) 2/10 (in his profile he didn’t put where he from) 8lines and im leaving peeps asking your wherre about...y'all gatta know he's right herre in the cats mouth.. (7) 2/10 i done with BUSTING YOU..next time i bitch slap think twice 'cos i'd keep CRUSHING YOU..now lets see if this spit aint worth saying "I’M SONING YOU"? 3/10 ya punches were all kinda played and simple and ya structure loses u points u need 2 even them out more try xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx not 2 stretched and not 2 short and um u can use some better vocab in wording your set up and then your punch it wasent the best from u but u get the win cuz your comp dropped more horrible Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^wdf the damn vote was well xplained.......duh
uppin this shit then its been open for like a month..........vote vote vote!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Voted For: XxXtayve
Aiight.. Both verses could use some work, but I think Yvonne took the battle for sure. She had better punches and the flow was definatly better. Intensity, you gotta work on making your rhymes flow better cuz I couldnt really pick it up at all on the verse. - Vote: Yvonne Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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damn peeps vote and get this shit closed once and for all!!!
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wdf...........are u hating cos peeps voting for me?!?!?!?!
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Voted For: intensify effect
Imma Have To Give This To I.E...... Yvonne: Ok, First Of All Ya structure Was A Lil poor...I Couldn't Really Tell Where Ya Lines End Or Begin. Also I Feel That Ya Punches Wern't As Creative As I.E. For Example Ya 6th Bar Was kinda Childlike... lol sorry.... Try to Improve Ya Wordplay and Metas..... I.E: Structure Was Ok, Some Lines Were Stretched. You Had Some Nice Wordplay In This. Ya Opener Was Set Up Well But I Feel That The Second Line Was Kinda Weak.....The Four-Kast Joint And The 50 Cent Thing lol. Nice Wordplay. Overall I Think Ya Had More Creative Punches, With Some Nice Wordplay. Vote: I.E...... |
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my gat will split u stiff into four-kast like a weather prediction come on now i even impress my-self with that line, N i started with a weak bar.... upp'in for votes |
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Voted For: XxXtayve
this was a weak battle but i have to say yvonee got it....... i.e.-aight u had an okay verse.......saw some multis.............your structure was insanely horrid........seriously......that needs some work.......you had okay punches.....ya personal was kinda weak....good attempt tho.......ya flow was good.....try puttin some more complex vocab in there............good job tho no hate yvonne-aight you came harder with the personals in this battle.........your structure was better if you look at where u lines eneded compared to his............you had stretched lines tho i didnt like that too much but it was good........your punches were good........your flow was better........had a lot of multi's..........coulda had better vocab in this tho......good verse v/yvonne reutrn the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=163144 honest and explained |
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