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Reckless vs DV8
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Reckless (class sic) VS DV8 (L.R.I) 6 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No d/r...blah..blah....ect Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 08-27-04 at 05:26 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
DV8 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 06:41 AM.
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ya confused? this is text thought you quit ya got alias’s (a-L.I-ass)U’ll jus get them 2 settle the score,
you really “wreck-less” n “wack-more” ya punches won’t sting even if you fucked a beehive whore, quick call spuls mom cause hes in ”class-sic” hard fakin n aint fly rock’n a feather sweater it’s the “class-sic” excuse, reck’s only ever “feeling ill” when he’s “under the weather”, like female sparks this battles a ‘miss match’ you’re the bitch n im causing the fire, set flames ta this ”clas-sic” queer, this gardener should’ve remained a herb suplyer, My hits swell ya punches don’t hit well,’ya don’t hit hard’ spul jus’buntswhen he bats’ ya like a ”fly-lumber-jack” da way ya keep frontin wack with“plane-herbish-ax”(acts) In dis battle im “cancerous” got spul gasp’ in for breath like I jus cut n removed his lung spul a vet?Hell no”bounce” outta site like‘tigga” get launderd tumbled pressed n hung I snap limbs n break ‘trees’, make gee’s “leave” swing with ease ta were reckless pee’s, Honestly! Bring’n ya dads pecker hair ta emerge is da only way ya get’n ta pub-E.R-t Dropping bombs.? nope ya all wrong kid, ya jus another wack emcee wannabe clone Its “reckless” get’n pissed on n neva see’n pussy like “toilet seats” in gay foster homes dis battles like “trashin new watches” cause its a waste of good time,no need-ta-taunt like elite ghost offspring, I “pro-ceed-ta-haunt” congrats homo ya jus got killed with font, alias's:spul aka reckless aka LI LI |
Reckless has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 07:05 PM.
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Pray to god at night, and he'll tell you that stretched lines won't get you far
I mean, yo fuckin' lines are more stretched than yo momma's bra I fuck yo girl, but when you walk in, I don't even try to hide her Cuz suckin' dudes dick.... is the only time you a Low Rider I mean, you're such a fag, prolly like it up the butt Cuz jus like Lance Armstrong... you cannot fuck You couldn't be hot, if you spat next to the sun Man, you suck... and yes, that is a pun Fuckin' wit me, herb, that ain't the way to go Like a guy after sex, bitch, you cannot flow If you try frontin', I'll beat you agin and agin Jus like Gunit101... you'll never get the win You'll never make it far, you'll always live in tents Yo verses, jus like yo name, don't make any sense You like dick up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy then you shove one in yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy Yea, haven't done this in a while, so quick keystyle. pc Uppin' for votes. |
Voted For: DV8
OMG i underestimated SPuL omfg he didnt try omg i thought he was gonna win but damn you suck ROFL i gotta give this to DV8 for a better verse with strong punches and personals with good structure and ya flow was great too vote is DV8 SPuL: shud have tried harder... i know you could have... y did you half ass??? Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
please vote in my battles: Black Plague vs. Paramik
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This was feedback posted for DV8
blah just want to see
whats going on aight |
This was feedback posted for DV8
ya confused? this is text thought you quit ya got alias’s (a-L.I-ass)U’ll jus get them 2 settle the score,
you really “wreck-less” n “wack-more” ya punches won’t sting even if you fucked a beehive whore, 3/10 stretched to fuck quick call spuls mom cause hes in ”class-sic” hard fakin n aint fly rock’n a feather sweater it’s the “class-sic” excuse, reck’s only ever “feeling ill” when he’s “under the weather”, 2/10 stretched and no need to use quotes cos that undermines my intellegence! like female sparks this battles a ‘miss match’ you’re the bitch n im causing the fire, set flames ta this ”clas-sic” queer, this gardener should’ve remained a herb suplyer, wack 3/10 My hits swell ya punches don’t hit well,’ya don’t hit hard’ spul jus’buntswhen he bats’ ya like a ”fly-lumber-jack” da way ya keep frontin wack with“plane-herbish-ax”(acts) shit 3/10 In dis battle im “cancerous” got spul gasp’ in for breath like I jus cut n removed his lung spul a vet?Hell no”bounce” outta site like‘tigga” get launderd tumbled pressed n hung 1/10 stop using fucking quotes u faggot I snap limbs n break ‘trees’, make gee’s “leave” swing with ease ta were reckless pee’s, Honestly! Bring’n ya dads pecker hair ta emerge is da only way ya get’n ta pub-E.R-t 1/10 fuckin quotes Dropping bombs.? nope ya all wrong kid, ya jus another wack emcee wannabe clone Its “reckless” get’n pissed on n neva see’n pussy like “toilet seats” in gay foster homes shit 2/10 dis battles like “trashin new watches” cause its a waste of good time,no need-ta-taunt like elite ghost offspring, I “pro-ceed-ta-haunt” congrats homo ya jus got killed with font, lol 4/10 |
Pray to god at night, and he'll tell you that stretched lines won't get you far
I mean, yo fuckin' lines are more stretched than yo momma's bra I fuck yo girl, but when you walk in, I don't even try to hide her Cuz suckin' dudes dick.... is the only time you a Low Rider I mean, you're such a fag, prolly like it up the butt Cuz jus like Lance Armstrong... you cannot fuck You couldn't be hot, if you spat next to the sun Man, you suck... and yes, that is a pun Fuckin' wit me, herb, that ain't the way to go Like a guy after sex, bitch, you cannot flow If you try frontin', I'll beat you agin and agin Jus like Gunit101... you'll never get the win You'll never make it far, you'll always live in tents Yo verses, jus like yo name, don't make any sense You like dick up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy then you shove one in yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy consistantly structured verse, neither where any good i hate text but my vote goes to spul |
Voted For: DV8
punches~reckless structure~reckless vocab~neither complexity~neither humor~reckless enjoyed~reckless you both diud good but reckless took this with betta punches Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
damn, people don't kno how to vote in this. but whatever, should be 2-1, or 1-1. [COLOR=Indigo]
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wtf someone fix this i voted for reckless i dont got time for this fuckin shit
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Voted For: Reckless
Wow....this was pretty horrible from both sides. SPuL/Reckless/El El.....what ever.....he was less wack. At least his lines weren't shrunk as small as possible and still didn't all fit on one line.....lol. Vote - Reckless......for less played punches and better structure...:thumbup: Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for DV8
hahahaha,goood verse
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This was feedback posted for Reckless
good battle both of u..jus checkin the polls
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Voted For: Reckless
ya confused? this is text thought you quit ya got alias’s (a-L.I-ass)U’ll jus get them 2 settle the score, you really “wreck-less” n “wack-more” ya punches won’t sting even if you fucked a beehive whore, not personal quick call spuls mom cause hes in ”class-sic” hard fakin n aint fly rock’n a feather sweater it’s the “class-sic” excuse, reck’s only ever “feeling ill” when he’s “under the weather”, decent but "" is gay like female sparks this battles a ‘miss match’ you’re the bitch n im causing the fire, set flames ta this ”clas-sic” queer, this gardener should’ve remained a herb suplyer, decent My hits swell ya punches don’t hit well,’ya don’t hit hard’ spul jus’buntswhen he bats’ ya like a ”fly-lumber-jack” da way ya keep frontin wack with“plane-herbish-ax”(acts) not personal In dis battle im “cancerous” got spul gasp’ in for breath like I jus cut n removed his lung spul a vet?Hell no”bounce” outta site like‘tigga” get launderd tumbled pressed n hung nice metas I snap limbs n break ‘trees’, make gee’s “leave” swing with ease ta were reckless pee’s, Honestly! Bring’n ya dads pecker hair ta emerge is da only way ya get’n ta pub-E.R-t decent Dropping bombs.? nope ya all wrong kid, ya jus another wack emcee wannabe clone Its “reckless” get’n pissed on n neva see’n pussy like “toilet seats” in gay foster homes not personal decent though dis battles like “trashin new watches” cause its a waste of good time,no need-ta-taunt like elite ghost offspring, I “pro-ceed-ta-haunt” congrats homo ya jus got killed with font, nice multies Pray to god at night, and he'll tell you that stretched lines won't get you far I mean, yo fuckin' lines are more stretched than yo momma's bra lol not personal though I fuck yo girl, but when you walk in, I don't even try to hide her Cuz suckin' dudes dick.... is the only time you a Low Rider decent I mean, you're such a fag, prolly like it up the butt Cuz jus like Lance Armstrong... you cannot fuck ............. You couldn't be hot, if you spat next to the sun Man, you suck... and yes, that is a pun lol nice Fuckin' wit me, herb, that ain't the way to go Like a guy after sex, bitch, you cannot flow decent If you try frontin', I'll beat you agin and agin Jus like Gunit101... you'll never get the win not personal You'll never make it far, you'll always live in tents Yo verses, jus like yo name, don't make any sense lol You like dick up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy then you shove one in yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy decent vote reck for a slightly better verse |
Voted For: DV8
ok reckless good flow you got that punches and disses loomed on homophobic too much gay disses that got played hard and vocab was lacking ok verse not anywheres near as good as i expected from you 4/10 dv8 fix your fucking stucture its annoying as fuck too streched kills the flow here but good punches great vocab alot of personals and nice disses you came hard here a solid verse7/10 reckless no hate you basically lost cuz you had no personals and way more puns then punches that fucked it up and dv8 came hard here while you seem to be slacking no hate just honest vote dv8 gets my vote |
lool @ you comin' and votin' here. HAte vote. nuff said.
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This was feedback posted for Reckless
yeah good flow...i liked both of oyu guys but reckless still murdered him....the other had bad structure but he had heat just not enuf......
uppin battle |
its crazy how spul is gettin all the VET votes and DV* is gettin all the herb votes lol
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Voted For: DV8
aight both verses was ok but i feel dv8 took it....better punches better everything......reckless did u even try to win?it didnt seem like it....but yea Dv8 gets my vote...... return the favor of an honest vote to my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
aint no hate vote^^^^^^lol
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^^agreeded no hate votes your shit was weak battle me next i need a easy win no wonder you was scared :nono:
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lol you're such a joke, man, you're jus provin' why your vote was a hate vote. And man, I did this shit in 10 mins, cuz text is seriously fuckin' wack. It ain't fun no more. And I might think about battlin' yo weak ass, believe me I seen yo battles, next week when I'm free.
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also LMFAO @ you gettin' like 3 straight losses. dumb herb :laugh: |
Voted For: DV8
Daym, While His Lines Were Streched As Fuck His Punches Came Across Harder To Me... Just Overall His Shit Seamed Like It Was Better... If I've Gotta Break It Down More Then Just Ask... But Ya... Vote: DV8 .One. |
Voted For: Reckless
sorry DV8 normally u come harder, and this time, it's ya structure that's killin' u... opener: i must say DV8 u took it playin' on his name and a-L.I. ass was very creative.. closer: You like dick up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy then you shove one in yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy ^Reckless- nice way to end ya verse, kinda funny too.. lol Structure-wise: DV8 ya need mad work here, ya lines shouldn't be so long that it runs into the next line.. so Reckless gets that.. Flow: Reckless, because the verse seemed simple but actually the words come off as an actual flow.. DV8 ur "flow" in general was lil' stretched too many syllables in only 1/2 a bar.. it makes it hard to follow even tho ur bars rhymed well.. Vocab: DV8 barely, cuz u had mo' complicated words.. some what.. Word Play: Dv8 took this category the creativity kicked in with the link in the first line, and his alias and break-dash segments.. Punches: i'd say Reckless, with focus on G Unit101 line and crew bashin' "low riders", nice lines for dissin'.. Personals: Even, tho, DV8 was tryna take that one, they don't come off as very effective, so no one takes that.. Multis: DV8.. a lil'.. Metas: i say Reckless, this shit's close... Overall: It's given to Reckless cuz his topics connected well with the verse and flowed well, DV8 i like ur creativity but u need to shorten ya lines a lil' then u str8, long lines make it harder for the reader to stay focused on ur verse and also makes it harder to get the flow correct.. nice battle, u too but that's my explanation, Reckless took this, but damn it was close... ~Lady Fiya~ |
thanks fire excellent feedback.....much appreciated........
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This was feedback posted for DV8
word up. nice verses for both but spul is rusty as fuck.
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nah, man, I jus didn't care. I don't do text no more, and I jus keyed this up. I mean this shit ain't as fun as it used to be. But still, nice battl dV8. but yea, text ain't fun for me. |
Voted For: DV8
DV8 got it cuz he had harder punches and had a few personals i like his structure and flow... reckless your flow threw me off i didnt like iit my eyes started to hurt.. you had weak punches... my opinion... vote/ DV8 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lol...like 3 outta 9 votes stay.....lol....uppin this shit.......lets see the second outcome
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aight uppin for votes.........we need good feedback......
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Voted For: Reckless
SHIT.. Reck took this Punches like MADDDD... Dope punches too DV8... your lines were WAY too stretched.. like really thats the smallest font... and there still stretched.. SpUL... or w/e your punches were dope.. structure was off but flow was there... PUNCHES & PERSONALS WIN BATTLES... NOT STRUCTURE... So im givin it to spul... for better punches n persoanals.. |
uppin 4 votes ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,
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uppin again ...damn i've voted like 20 times since this has been up..........
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Voted For: Reckless
Even tho this kat was bann'd ima still gonna give it up 2 Reckless cause he just had harder punches than DV8..tha structure was a little off..but tha flow was nice... |
if that count so should the others....lol.w/e...this cat prolly bit half this shit to
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ok hes dqed for biting and cheating this hould be giving to dv8 who in my opioin won anyways he obviously was giving vote for vote to win this and he probally bit go to strobe and get this win dv8 :thumbup:
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