freestyle(multimadness) Fukin HOT!!!!
 

ite check this shit out man............................................... .......

yo...My Capital-Wars with Casual-Forms leaves their Clavicles-Torn when Quest and Xkwisite are Clappin-At-Whores dont make me put u in the Mandible-Claw until Half-Of-Ya-Cords are slightly hanging out the Back-of-Ya-Jaw/
make steaks outchu nukkaz so we stackin-the-raw i stay crackin-ya-paws yall Kats aint shit to us u contractually wack its apparant u lackin-the-clause u close to gettin shredded since u attracted-the-saws that will cut ya in pieces till police have to collect and package-you-all!!!
With Axes-and-Swords we'll slash at any Faction-with-Laws of Actual-Cause dismantling Casket-and-Corpse/You Advocates-Swore u faggots wouldnt Tattle-At-All but we'll drain a pint of blood when u get
leak it into a swimming pool and fracture-ya-jaws we capture-it-all and pin ur face as a trophy when we plaster-the-walls wanna battle we faster-wit-draws put the white fear back in ya like cracker-withdraws!!!
When we Clap-And-Applause its an Evident-Matter With Elegant-Grammar and Excellent-Stature the dude Quest will leave ya Melanin-Scattered ya Elements-Fractured to Sediment-Matter until ya whole fukkin Skeleton-Shatters/
When we Clap-And-Applause its an Evident-Matter With Elegant-Grammar and Excellent-Stature the dude Quest will leave ya Melanin-Scattered ya Elements-Fractured to Sediment-Matter until ya whole fukkin Skeleton-Shatters/
My Rapture-Is-Urgent Assassins-for-Service who'll Clap at any Average-Disturbance to leave their damn Bladder-Emerging and Cabbages-Bursting i've Traveled-to-Earth-At A Massive-Conversion to kidnap and Clap-at-ya-Workers and shackle them to Practice-as-Servants/
Crews can come together to Battle we Hack-the-convergance and back-the-divergance of body parts and stack-em-in-curtains u riot punches well i smack-the-disturbance cuz yall nukkaz See Less Flow than Cactus-Observants!!!!!!!

I had 2 copy n paste from another site where i dropped so dat y two bars repeated n quest n x part of my crew^^

sum feedback yo...

I'ma Give You Some Feedback.......................................
.........................THAT WAS HOT AS HELL!!

Nice Rhymin'....Multies Was Off The PAGE!
Thought The Words Was Gon' Jump Off My Damn Screen!

Respect n Proppz

Keep Up The Good Work

If You Ever Wanna Do A Callabo, Juss HOLLA

An YO!...Vote On My Battles With HONEST Votes Dogg

!!1!!

U got skillz..

So what do you know about the properties of melanin? ;)

true...shit was hot as hell...maybe even hotter...holla at me man...~1~

yo thx man... if ya got any pieces or battles dat need votes just holla at me ite.....more feedback n do ya think ma piece should get drop of da month???????????lol prolly not

yo thx man... if ya got any pieces or battles dat need votes just holla at me ite.....more feedback n do ya think ma piece should get drop of da month???????????lol prolly not

A decent spit but a bit of advice...shrink the word size to 1 because then it'll improve your stucture and your flow as it was a little hard to read but a nice piece...multi type battlers need to shrink their words as normally they have to stretch i have noticed

oh can ya vote honestly in this battle plz it's in my sig

pretty good boi need some better vocab tho but anyway 6/10

Peace

uppin feedback.......................................... ............................

Nice ass go get flow hommie,,,I can tell you were on the grind on this one
I give you 9-1o because you just put it down without a doult,,nice one hommie

Yo can i get some feed back on this one thanks

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147764

viser verser

multi's out the ass.. that was pretty sick... for a newb.. keep working..

I aint a newb man just had dis account like ages ago............................................... ............

yo wot holla back at dis piece any1???......................

yo sum feedback plz............................................... ..............

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hard rating
not hat good.. you need improvments in ya strucxutre and ya flow ya multis make it iight but it aint gonna be that good.. work on it a lil bit and each freestyle ya make give it a name

overall rating 4/10

I like you.

If you ever want to be Multi Master, I'll be around ready for ya challenge.

shit you gotta work on:
NOT vocab.
incorporating multis in a better way, to suit what you're writing about.
structure

^hmmm... after readin it again.. im kinda suspicious to whether u wrote it.. not that i doubt you or anything, but im kinda gettin deja vu, ya know?? like i seen it on another rap site somewhere..

cos u left for a while n before u left you werent that great.. now u come back n your that elevated..

correct me if im wrong though, i dont mean to spark any shit... just a feelin I got.

peace

how do u kno me man... u got n aka???

nah i remember you from a while back..

prolly just a hunch though... dont mind me..

o yea man i remember i battled u ages ago lol n was totally wack den, but im just takin it slow tryin ta improve gradually man. u got anyhtin u wanna vote on or for me to read???

shits nice
 

mad hype dude 10/10...liked the structure....very nice

thx man ..................................