shake-spear vs WiNC
 

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Check in by: 08-26-04 at 12:52 PM

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shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 12:30 PM.

WiNC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 12:35 PM.

i had to rush so might not be that good bhut fuck it
here ya go

iight listen up stupid ima smoke u like chris tucker/
u a "dumb-dumb" must mean ya mutha a "sucka"/
and she loves to "blow-pop" guess im ya father/
must be da "charm" cause she blow me like no other/
i lost my last battle dey said i aint have enough word-play/
now my words-slay make dis herb-stay in third-place/
im takin second and first how bout u/
ill fill u wit lead jus so u can say u number two/(#2 Pencil)
im runnin thru dis herb, he cant run-through-me/
might be da fact i swing hammers like judge-judy/
but fuck it im takin dis battle winc's no comp/
u betta off usin the excuse that u have no comp/(cpu)
dis dude like a racecar burn rubber when he be on da bend/ ( he gets fucked)
sorry but im takin ya name wit out da C on da end/( the win)

aight let's get this...

I don't text in "Old English" so it's not a "Shakespearean" verse...
Pack~n~Tack you in a box of wood "Mid Evil" style so you can experience first...

I spit "spears" at ay that you can't "shake" like "brittany"...
you soft like "brownie mix" with these words i "bake" thee...

you oldschool i'm sure so you a "man playin out as a female"...
even in your relationship now your role prolly the that aswell...

It's "THE END" of your carreer go get your record changed by "strobe"...
I had the same effect on the original "shakespear" when i arsonned the "GLOBE"

I only gottah spit 9 and leave three empty you was crazy comin to the battle thinkin' you'd merk me...

aight breakdown
SHAKESPEAR his theatre's name was the GLOBE and it got BURNT DOWN...His works are considered OLD ENGLISH..in his day MEN acted out all the roles even female parts...THE END AND STROBE OUR THE ADMIN HERE...everything else is obvious this stuff prolly was too...

eh yo yor last line was tight nevah thought of that clean drop mane..

ya shit was hot nice battle son hopefully we can do dis again somtime jus wait till i get a lil betta

yo mane don't knock yah shit yet wait for the votes you had a nice drop... but thnks...and i'm a Female son....lets get them votes in

Voted For: WiNC

My vote has to go to WiNc for the fact that he had punches that were hitting and shakespear tended to talk about himself a little more and lacked in the punch area...
also i just wasnt really feelin shake's verse all too much...

but props to both,yall stay up...

pz.

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Voted For: shake-spear

OK THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE BUT MY VOTE GOES TO SHAKESPEARE HIS PUNCHES WERE BETTER, WINC YOU RAN THE WHOLE VINTAGE SHAKESPEAREAN THING IN THE WHOLE I THINK YOU SHOULD'VE EXPANDED A LIL YA BRITTANY LINE WAS HOT THOUGH BUT ALL IN ALL SHAKES FLOW WAS BETTER PUNCHES HIT HARDERAND THA WORD PLAY TO THIRD PLACE LINE WAS RIDICULOUS


YO I VOTED ON YA'LLS SO VOTE ON MINE SO I CAN GET EM CLOSED THANKS

Voted For: WiNC

give it 2 WINC her
verse was better she had personals
metas n sum hard hittin punches
Shake u did have wordplay but don't
4get everything else ur punches hit just
not as hard as WIN's cuz u had no real metas
n personals in yo flow
v/WINC
give a honest vote 2 da battles in my sig

thnx for da vote son............. uppin for more votes

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Voted For: shake-spear

give diss battle 2 Shake da wordplay
was tight da punches hit n really WIN
da way ur structure worked it didn't go wit ur flow
but urs was good 2 wit personals overall good battle
can u vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

eh all favors have been returned except SKAAL i need links mane i couldn't find yah battle...

uppin for votes ..................................

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Voted For: WiNC

ill shit man u make shakespear look like a fuckin newb

thx for votin....com on poeple we still need more votes its almost over jus finish it

uppin for dem votes lets get some feedback...

Voted For: shake-spear

good battle yall but it was still close so here

flow shake
personials winc
punches shake
funny ness shake

so as you can see shake-spear won this

yo can yall hit up some votes in my battles please

Voted For: shake-spear

hmmm decent battle yall.

winc- you had nice wordplay and everything and da personals was on point but because of those things, ur verse suffered. it was real hard to follow and the punches were kinda weak buddy. it was witty tho.....6.5/10

Shake-spear-you had a verse that was actually something i wasnt expecting. some of the punches could have flowed better and you had bad structure but the punches were actually kinda............not played. that gets a lot of respect. you had a better verse but work on better structure. if you lookin for a crew, holla at low ryders inc..........7.5/10

good lookin on the vote son......... uppin for more votes

uppin uppin uppin uppin...........................

Voted For: shake-spear

shakespear you had weak punches to me but i think i saw some personals nice structure...
winc you had hard punches but i didnt see any personals or flow yopu needa elevate.....