Trooper vs WiNC
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

EXPLAINED VOTES OR NO VOTES

3-0 is Ko

Minimum posts to vote: 180

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 02:52 PM

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WiNC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 12:19 AM.

two days for 8 lines i just can't wait any longer so i'ma drop now...

In his callout said he was pissed got DQ'd twice and ain't won in a while...
Battle me bitch i ain't nice an i'll make yah ass "california smile"...

If you the "commander N chief" then i just "cheefed" your "command"...
up in "smoke" and dismantled like "P.Diddy" did to "Da Band"...

21-3 i would have considered you been elevated...
but i guess aftah 2 dq's you've been unlevitated...

I'ma have yah dome bent back like a contortionist...
and i'm take the life out of you like an abortionist...

*he's had 2 dq's 21-3 is his record
"cheefed"=smoked..."up in smoke"

Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 03:23 AM.

Who the Hell Disrespects "Thee?' Middleweight "Flawdee" 'Mc"
Whoms Thee Position Equal's Inconsistent you still cant "Win C"

Elimination Warning Believe me on this Statement Start ~Rages
Im Overbearing you Like Fastballs ova "Midgits" in Batting Cages

"Wins" Winning Percentage isnt Legit ~Skills arent Extravegant
You Play the role of a Virgin ~2 Skills you choose 2 B Abstinent

I Feel your Confidence Driftin? ~Win vs Troop Hm u Missed Em
Your Attempts Were Basically "Half assed Like Stroke Victims"

*FLAWDEE he's from florida look at his Info*
*Stroke victims mostly can only use one side of there body*

Voted For: WiNC

u win 4 no reason @ all

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: WiNC

trooper-
first bar: it was a personal but it was just blah. ive seen that against her a couple other times....5/10
second bar: better, good meta, thats what you're known for....7.5/10
third bar: ehh ok just didnt hit that hard....6/10
fourth bar: best line for you battle with lines like this consistently and you cant be beaten...8/10
Total=26.5/40

Winc-
first bar: blah, but pretty good personal....7/10
second bar: umm not that tight but its there and connected a lil....7/10
third bar: umm aight but you used the dq's already...7/10
fourth bar: aight best line for you, good closer...8/10
Total=29/40

aight dont call that a hate or whutever troop, i just honestly think she won. if your verse was really better in your opinion, everyone else will think so too, so you can just forget about my vote.

v//winc

This was feedback posted for WiNC
 

good shit i aint voting i just wanna see the dr that tropper said posted here

how was it a d/r i don't even know that kid at all??? ne way it's all good uppin fah votes...

Voted For: Trooper

Nice Verses Ya'll....
Ya Both Seem To Have Put Alot InTo It, Much Proppz...

WINC Had Better Structure n Some Nice Punches, 6/10 For The Wordplay But I've Seen Him Drop Alot Better, Still Nice Tho WINC, Good Lookin My Nigguh....

Trooper Hit Harder In My Opinnon, He Had Humouress Punches n Nice Multies, Structure Could Have Been Better I Suppose But I Rarely Had Trouble Understandin It

My Vote Goes Too TROOPER

Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles Ya'll

Voted For: Trooper

aye yo oyu killed this kd..oyu came with more heat then him but still came half ass...you reall yneed to work on oyur freeatyles...you got this win barely tho...just try harder next time.....5/10

wim: you need to take more time and think be4 you type...just work on oyur peersonals becuz these ones you used were hella stretched and shit...and also come with alot harder punches....3/10

vote=troop

Uppin~~

votes people let get em...

Voted For: Trooper

lol...wow you merked this cat troop

trooper
Who the Hell Disrespects "Thee?' Middleweight "Flawdee" 'Mc"
Whoms Thee Position Equal's Inconsistent you still cant "Win C"
Lol decent opener , nice OLD english you put in there lol
Elimination Warning Believe me on this Statement Start ~Rages
Im Overbearing you Like Fastballs ova "Midgits" in Batting Cages
decent line..nice punch
"Wins" Winning Percentage isnt Legit ~Skills arent Extravegant
You Play the role of a Virgin ~2 Skills you choose 2 B Abstinent
decent ,
I Feel your Confidence Driftin? ~Win vs Troop Hm u Missed Em
Your Attempts Were Basically "Half assed Like Stroke Victims"
lol nice closer
you easily took this one

Winc
In his callout said he was pissed got DQ'd twice and ain't won in a while...
Battle me bitch i ain't nice an i'll make yah ass "california smile"...
Wack opener first line was good but the second could have been better
If you the "commander N chief" then i just "cheefed" your "command"...
up in "smoke" and dismantled like "P.Diddy" did to "Da Band"...
decent line , could have been worded better
21-3 i would have considered you been elevated...
but i guess aftah 2 dq's you've been unlevitated...
naw not really feelin this
I'ma have yah dome bent back like a contortionist...
and i'm take the life out of you like an abortionist...
could have been worded alot better


overall this is what i thought , trooper just came harder more punchlines, and multies,overall vote-troop
keep it up winc you just need to elevate alittle

uppin fah votes

Voted For: Trooper

NICE SPIT FROM BOTH OF YALL

I GOTS TO GO WITH TROOPER WITH DIS ONE

TROOPER KILLED IT WITH DEM PUNCHES NICE MAYNE
HE WON ME OVA WORDPLAYS AND WITH DA MIDGET LINE NICE

WINC U HAD GOOD FLOW BUT YO PUNCHES TO ME WAS PLAIN AND SIMPLE BUT YO WORDPLAYS ARE GOOD

KEEP AT IT THOUGH UR GETTING BETTA

I GOT BIG PROPS BOTH OF YAL;

YO TROOP RETURN AN FAV DA LINK ITS IN DA SIG MAYNE

~PEACE~

Uppi9n

uppin tah get this closed aight thnks fah the battle troop ....

Uppin

Voted For: Trooper

Trooper winz this one...had harder punches than WiNC...a nice flow...pretty good structure and the wordplay was ok...