ILLegitimate vs MjGreEn
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-04 at 04:50 PM

Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in.

MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 04:20 PM.

ILLegitimate has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 04:21 PM.

Yo i'ma ignite the fire cuz i'm a livewire, i'm high but i got the desire to get higher,
Yo -name here- you know my shit is tight, dont start a fight because i'm white, i think i'ma just spit this shit in spite,
Dude your not even in my league so remove yourself from my way, try to fuck with me your in the wrong direction, and your going the wrong way,
In my last rap battle i lost inspiration, but in this one you'll get murked so bad you'll be on permanent vacation,
I'ma cut you so bad you'll need an operation, your girl gets wet cuz of my sexual sensation,
you cant win because i have the whole MJ nation and i got my dick planted in your girls plantation.

Dude you must be feeling soar, so i'll just let it go,
haha never man i'm just rip you even more yo,
Your rapping is poor and your moms a whore, i'ma beat you so bad you'll be on the hospital tour,
My rapping is perpetual, it lasts forever, my shit seems sexual, no matter the weather,
when you was born your asshole was too wide, thats because your destiny was to get fucked from your front then your side.

Your Dad wanted to give you away, so he started gambling and hey,
he even bet on your life that day, good thing he won otherwise you wouldn't be here today,
My skills are ominous, the fear its brings is poisonous, its ludicrous,
Bitch you couldn't ice with a vice, your bitch looks sexier when shes naughty, not when shes nice,
And the fact of the matter is when i saw your girl, i sprat her, then she continued to chatter as she layed out her platter.

It must hurt that you're losing this battle, your rhymes can't even test the rest once there dead and shot in the chest,
From my last battle my shit has evolved, when i kill you the case will remain unsolved, your world wont revolve,
if you think its over your wrong, i have got much more of my shit to come,
i see your mom, fucked her up bum as she tried to make me cum by beating it like it was motherfuckin' drum,
Now my cum on her lips looks like lip balm,
all come see this guy get diabloed, everyone knows you're gonna fucking overload, just like when i overloaded in your mums mouth, now she speaks like shes from the south,
i'll end this shit with a 'fuck you', and hey, you haven't won this rap battle and you wont win any other day, my skills are here to stay, fuck it, i'll let you live to lose another day.

-name here- means your so noobish that nobody knows your name, its a diss joke

here i am so lets do this thing

mjgreen what were you thinkin you wanted me against you
come on over here so i can verbally molest you

whats up with u bitch u wanna start a tag team my spit got u sweating like u had a fucking bad dream

i dont want no team with a god damn herb
"let me 'suck' your cock" is this guys number one verb

sorry man i didnt mean to let out your secret
but the way you talk is gay, i jsut had to fuckin peep it

aint no competition here, theres two for ILLegitmate
your rhymes will be better, once you mature a little bit

Voted For: ILLegitimate

ILL u took this like nothing... the other kids verse was wack he was telling... a gay story.. ILL ur verse was short and right to the punch.. better punches and structure.. just keep elevating and someday ur gonna be on my level bro.. but mj green u gotta work on ur structure boy i cant really understand ur verse.... so vote for ill

nah ur just hating................................

hating my fuckin ass.. ur verse is pre-written.. u try to do multi's but u cant.. ur flow was fucked and ur structure was horrible.. there is no way u can write a verse that long in 1 minute.. cause u accepted the battle at 4:20 and u dropped ur verse at 4:21 soo whats up now bitch.. do something with it

only been doing this 2 days dude, i probably already win you, and i always write out on notepad before i spit it so i have more screen space fool.

what are u talkin about bitch. thats called pre writing and thats not cool... and u will alreayd win me.. i would merk ur ass like nothing bitch

Voted For: MjGrEeN

BETTA PUNCHLINES
NICE FLOW
GOOD METAPHORS....

ILLEGITIMATE NOT BAD HAVE BETTA STRUCTURE N NEED WORK ON YA FLOW

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wow finally a guy who read my shit, appreciated it and didn't dismiss it cuz its quite long, thx bro

yeah too bad he didnt explain his votes so i reported it, he put three damn things down, that aint to god damn vote

uppin for votes here

i got this one here........

Voted For: ILLegitimate

Mj green was all talk and nothing really good i think the ill boy goot this shit even though it was shorter

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ok i've learnt my lesson, i'ma spit much shorter from now on

Voted For: MjGrEeN

Tight Battle.....
The Wordplay Was Nice In Both Verses..
MJGREEN Had More Humour An Better Punches...
ILLegitimate Ended His Verse Nicely n Propps Goes Too Him...
But ILL You Should ELEVATE Next Time...Go Harder n More Personal n Add Humour...

Its All About Wordplay n Makin People Take Note...An Until The End ILL You Didnt Really Make Me Take Note...
Where As MJGREEN Had Nice Wordplay n Dropped Lines That Made Me Take The Time Out n Appreciate...

Nice Battle, Keep Up The Good Work My Nigguhz

My Vote Goes Too MGREEN Tho..

Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles Ya'll

P E A C E !

Voted For: MjGrEeN

MjGrEeN took this one...(even tho his shit was longr) he had harder punches..tha flow was pretty good..tha structure was in place and not strecthed out..and tha vocab was pretty decent (Easy To Read)...

Voted For: MjGrEeN

ima go wit mj on dis 1 rha verse was longer n the rhymes were hot he had sum good punchlines in there 2, he needs jus a lil more flow tho but he def got dis
vote=mjgreen

Uppin 4 Votes.....................................

Voted For: ILLegitimate

yo i vote this nigga mayn he had more diss it then tha other nigga that other nigga was ight but i like this nigga better

Voted For: ILLegitimate

Yo i'ma ignite the fire cuz i'm a livewire, i'm high but i got the desire to get higher,
Yo -name here-<--wtf...if you are gonna prewrite and or bite at least dont make it this obvious...you lose you know my shit is tight, dont start a fight because i'm white, i think i'ma just spit this shit in spite,
Dude your not even in my league so remove yourself from my way, try to fuck with me your in the wrong direction, and your going the wrong way,
In my last rap battle i lost inspiration, but in this one you'll get murked so bad you'll be on permanent vacation,
I'ma cut you so bad you'll need an operation, your girl gets wet cuz of my sexual sensation,
you cant win because i have the whole MJ nation and i got my dick planted in your girls plantation.

v/ill for not pulling that stupid shit

Voted For: ILLegitimate

ill took this...he had betta punches...betta flow...betta structure...betta wordplay...betta everythang...
mj...wusnt feelin yo verse as much...it was akward in parts and didnt really flow...but thats just my opinion...
v/ ill

Voted For: ILLegitimate

vote/ILL

punches: ILL(that verb line was sick)

flow: ILL once again (didnt lose pace)
strcuture: yet another for ILL(Green's was streched)
wordplay: surprise! ILL: used it alot

ps:don't make battles unlimited anymore
that makes one person have alot less lines

~1~