DangerousMyndLunatic vs creaTivitie
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 04:37 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

it ia a 15-10 lines.............................................

DangerousMyndLunatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 04:41 PM.

In shitness, you got the gold, from those dismal responses,
Now Your Untouchable? u were boned so stop the nonsense!,
You're a vile rapper who became a proud spokesman,
For The supremes, we locked your mouth, when u left it open,
Use Rapverse.com and search groups, with stand up comics,
You got 'creative material,' when we laugh it's fucking chronic,
My optics are drained when i cry, ur catastrophic,
Karaoke bestowed his pops with shame, and he can't stop it,
Your crap lines you proclaim make my lungs collapse,
When ever i'm down i just look at your format,

creaTivitie has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 05:52 PM.

Bitch you think your gonna merk me….lol you got shit twisted…bitch you got oyur panties in a bunch….hahaha damn this gonna be fun……..

realized that this was that femcee that started that wack crew full of bitches`
Damn….took a look at her record and I thuought my cpu had glitches`
Look if you flipped your record you would still be a wack emcee`
I was thinking bout fuckin you up………but I might catch a disease`
See I spit sic scriptures……..while you wisper sweet nothing in my ear`
Get votes for exchanging pictures………nah that wont happen here`
I CUMN with So much heat I hard boil the eggs in your in your ovaries`
Im a U.S killing machine……………..like our soldiers from overseas`
u’re the slut of RV… remember when you was passing out your number`
you spit that tired style….but im leaving you in n everlasting slumber


aight this is a lil something...hopefully i aint gonna get dqed....
aight no beef just a battle...

Damn..... Took You !!!.... To (5:02) .. Da Hell.. Lmfao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

15Min Drop Was Suppose To Be.. ! :p But Is All Good! lol

nice spit..you came with soem heat but i think my personals mite get you..but good shit....

nah i was thinking of it when we posting in bitch slapped so it really only took a lil while to type it...becuz i just freestyle the whole time while im on the cpu...it helps..

Thanks BabeBoi' lol

Voted For: creaTivitie

i like both the verses but i got to give this battle to creativity for the plain fact that his punchlines hit harder Dangerous u did ya thing too but punches wasnt as good.

vote:creativitie

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Voted For: creaTivitie

both of you were good but this batttles was kinda close
DML: your verse was iight yup you had some good lines and you had ok punches and iight personals but i felt that yours didnt hithard enuf you had some weak lines but your structure and flow is iight
Creativite: i was feeling your verse more you had better punches and ok personals and ya flow was iight
Vote Creativite for a lil better verse

I wanna battle you DML
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Voted For: creaTivitie

creativitie took this one with a better flow...he had harder punches and shit, and better punches...altho he had a weak ending but he still took it in my book

dml had a aight flow. but some lines were dumb.."when we laugh its fuckn chronic"...i dont know bout it..but you did have some aight lines, and a couple punches, but you lacked in personals..


godd flow tho

creativitie took my vote

holla bac

uppin for votes.............tryn to end this tonite

Voted For: creaTivitie

whoa creativitie you got this fo real....cos he had tight punches that hit hard...yeah dml had a gd verse but i went "huh?????" in some points....creativitie had tight worplays too....and he came up with good rhymes....both had a good structure and tight flows...but creativitie gets my vote for BOMBLIKE punches....

Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

Nice battle and very close.

DML- Flow was nice, structure was nice 2 and vocab was decent. Your punches all hit pretty hard but you could do with a little bit of wordplay thrown in. The chronic line was nice, made me laugh a lil lol. A few personals wouldnt have gone a miss either. Any way, nice verse, keep doin ya thing....

creaTivitie- Your lil intro thing put me off from the start, its kinda herbish. But your verse wasnt acctually bad. A few nice punches and a bit of nice wordplay with the ovaries line, that shit was nice. But vocab cud do with a bit of enhancment. All in all it was a good verse just lackin a bit of that killer quality. Nice shit tho

So my vote goes to DML, good battle though

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Voted For: creaTivitie

creativitie won this battle barely. bcuz his structure was kind of annoying n didnt flow real well but he had that one punch that one if for me about burnin tha ovaries lol that was the hottest bar in the battle
DML was doin ight wit structure and flow but i didnt really see any hard punches to knock creativitie down nor any personals so ima barely give this to creativitie
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