tru ryda vs J DOT
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

blind spit(spit same time)

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-26-04 at 08:57 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

tru ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 08:27 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 08:27 PM.

Giving this Atlanta cat a lost to his record

Check it,

I'll 'stomp' this 'Atlanta' cat, he nothin more than a fake
I'll stop you dead in yo tracks, like you was pumpin yo brakes
My flows stand out in da game like da ass on serena williams
..You just a deadbeat, you spit 2 barz, Im killing em
Look Im 'da truth' like 'pharell', I'll send you straight to neptune
Im da shit and you can't be 'tight' cause there's not enough room
You aint a 'tru ryda' I hate the player and the game
theres no room on the map, thank you, and we're glad you came
you tryna come at me with yo rhymes, but i block shots like ben wallace
5-0, J DOT's done, winning this battle flawless
I'll put you on IR(Injured Reserved), for the rest of yo time(life)
Havent figured it out yet...i'll rest you rhymes
rest without peace


holla bac

yo

im battling a soon-to-be-vet and this shit is gonna get good/
but with this cat i-wont-break-a-sweat and chop yo ass up like splitting wood

with my tip top rhymes that make ya jaw drop to the flo,u take it in the gut but thats only the beginning of the show/
how many times i got to tell ya the cop wont shut this down now that im started and im winding up my pitch about ready to throw out this clown/
im about to explode on ya bitch and u cant stop this hip hop pro from bringing u down, u want some mo?/,bitch ill flip ya head up and down like frying burgers at burger king im the better emcee here/ so step off this before i drop the load, and drop u on the road busted up with a broken nose and paralyzed cuz ur two legs is twisted,ur arms are flimsy and u got two missing toes, and u and ur crew aint nothing bitches/
im done with this cat ill let him have the mic if he can grab without touching them stitches/

gl man

up.up.and away people

uppn this.....ishhhhhhhhhhhhhh...shittttttttttttttttttt tttt

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

If I was old enough to vote I'd be voting J Dot, and NOT because Tru Ryda is a talentless biting piece of crap whose one win so far was a 5-0 self-voted victory in a battle that he didn't even show up for or drop a single word in (spread the word). Nor would I vote J Dot because CockRyder ACTUALLY USED A PUNCHLINE FROM 8 MILE not so long ago. Nor would I J Dot because Tru Ryda tries and fails to bite my medical descriptives here...No, I'd vote J Dot becuase it flows, it makes sense and there's good verbal trickery and plenty of broad references - its faithful to the tradition but its evolved too and doesn't rely on well used couplets and clichés. Tru Ryda raps like Jenny from the block and clearly should stick to developing his skills at the BurgerKing hotplate cuz Hiphop stardom will always elude that manky cat. By the way CockRyda, you dodgin two call outs from me you fucking pussy. TWO FUCKIN CALL OUTS! Nice rhymin J Dot.

uppn

spoke eye ur just a bunch of horse shit uppn this shit

Voted For: J DOT

give it 2 JDOT his structure
was better so his flow was better
plus Tru u didn't have n e metas, wordplay
or real punches n JDOT had a few so he got
da battle good battle dough vote on da battles
in my sig i voted on ya battle

good lookn, upppn this people.....

need more votes on this shit people....upppppnnnnnn thissssss

uppppnnnnnnnn thisssssssss shittttttttt

uppin this hoe come on what the hell

upppn another slept on battle

uppnnn

Voted For: J DOT

tru fucked up flow and structure vocab ok wordplay punches and disses aint really exist you aint really battle him a 2/10 no hate but that was weak elevate a little before you battle
j-dot ok opener good structure and flow was good his was all fucked up good vocab but punches and disses amde your verse better then his i hate links so i aint use that punches can be better but they was way better then the few weak ones he had 4/10

upnnnnnnnnn thisssssssssssss shittttttttttttttttt

Voted For: J DOT

iight battle
Tru Rhyda: yours was iight but hell naw it did not flow wellya gotta gotta work on that also ya strucutre was wack but you had some good disses though some of yA lines were iight

J Dot: ya were iight you had some good flows and iight structure also you had some iight personals and funny punches
Vote J DOT

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Voted For: J DOT

man tru got his ass kick (no hate) but everything e lost in punches flow vocab metas everything
v/j dot

Voted For: J DOT

'nother kinda~wack battle...J DOT gets my vote...harder punches,nice flow,good structure