meki vs J DOT
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

spit same time

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-26-04 at 09:17 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 08:48 PM.

meki has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 08:57 PM.

just like yo sig, everythings bigger than you
"New era of femcees", your first on my merk menu
your real funny with yo he say, she say lines
She cant get in-touch with rhymes cause she work like a mime
You tryna make it to the top, better find a different route
This is a one-sided battle, Look, just knock yo self out
The crooks been let out, and Im murderin Rhymes
You shouldve just did like ice pick did, you shouldve declined
Your not straight, i got proof you wanna be a DYKE
Unscramble yo name...you wanna be called MIKE(meki is her name)
But i gotta go now, ruff_tuff wants a beaten
I think ya'll both girls...which one gunna start eaten...lol


holla bac

HeHe,

[FONT=tahoma]Your Just Dick, When You Vote On A Battle The Verse Erects.
Cant Read Up To Level. Only Mad Cause Hes Been Born With Birth Affects.
You' Terfs Been Stepped, Like Culo's Beat By Lil John.
Filler Verse Will Drill This Filman Nurse, Even With The Middle Gone.
Spits Wack Round The Clock, Even Dribbles Wrong. Been Merked n Smashed With Fonts.
You Seem To Trash A Thread n Purpose, Well Whats The Point Of A Trash Response?
Im Tired Of These Hypocrits, As If Rapverse Made Bots.(robots)
If It Was This Easy To Toss This Garbage, I Would'v Eagerly SucceededTo Connect J's Dots.
You Maybe From The Land, But Like Egypt You Cant Fit In.
And Again, Your Fam Dont Exist...Like Santa's Kin.
A Mere Man Of Sin, A Can Villian. Your Crimes Cope Months.
The Kinda Cat That Changes His Sig. So Opponents Rhymes Dont Punch.
WroteLines Dope Once, Meaning..Have Occurred Rarely.
Hasnt Reached Vet Awareness, N Just Above Herb Barelly.

you put that shit bout i dont like pac, so pac nut riders can vote for you, wut a asshole

Voted For: meki

woh, woh...

this fem slaughterd JDOT. no beef, just i think JDOT was expecting her newbness to show out in her verse, but she keyed some decent stuff...idk if thats your best or what, but JDOT you should have tried your usual effort.

meki:

strongest personal-
Spits Wack Round The Clock, Even Dribbles Wrong. Been Merked n Smashed With Fonts.
You Seem To Trash A Thread n Purpose, Well Whats The Point Of A Trash Response?

strongest punch-
A Mere Man Of Sin, A Can Villian. Your Crimes Cope Months.
The Kinda Cat That Changes His Sig. So Opponents Rhymes Dont Punch.

strongest wordplay-
You' Terfs Been Stepped, Like Culo's Beat By Lil John.
Filler Verse Will Drill This Filman Nurse, Even With The Middle Gone.

weakest line-
You Maybe From The Land, But Like Egypt You Cant Fit In.
And Again, Your Fam Dont Exist...Like Santa's Kin.

overall:
not bad for your first verse, in my opinion you murdered JODT's half ass attempt. i say JDOT (if he loses) calls a rematch...and actually tries.

vote: meki

return the favor, in my sig... vs. curelean, honestly...

yea she dropped a nice verse...thats just one...i was worried bout ruff tuff...so you right, i shouldve came harder, this is the weakest from me, BUT...thanx for the HONEST vote, i'll return a HONEST favor, you know i do

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Voted For: meki

This Was A Hella Close Battle.....
Nice Punches n Nice Vocab From You Both....
Meki Had Btter Structure n The Verse Was Humouress...Humour In Rhymes Always Does It 4 Me....

I Cant Sit n Fault Any Of Ya Verse Cause I Liked Em Both...
But MEKI Got My Vote

Keep Spittin Them DOPE Rhymes Ya'll...
Good Lookin!!

Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles
!!1!!

Voted For: meki

wow i think you got this...i was gonna vote for j dot but damn them lst 3 lines killed him....that was crazy..you should have just tried and spit like that the whole time....that sig line was clean...and its true.....lol...and your ending was clean.....6/10

jdot...weak herbish type of flow...wow i actually thought about battlin you...cant believe it myself...but you got mad potiential kid just keep battling and you will be pretty good....
5/10

vote=meki

Voted For: J DOT

meki good punches and vocab and wordplay but disses were lacking here as well as personals also they aint hit right good flow kinda streched though still nice a 6/10
j-dot good opener personal good wordplay and vocab was ok also alot of nice links basically i think you won cuz you had more personals and disses and it was interresting to read7/10
meki had a good verse but it aint have enugh slick shit and got kinda boring

Voted For: J DOT

dot took this by a thread
meki had good vocab and a good flow but connct j dots line is supaplayed, that lil jon line was wack and so was that santas kin line.j verse was simple but i like the laast 6 lines especially that MIKE one, j needed harder punches though....
had better struc was easier to read too.no real metas in this and j personals were better...j wins, good shit meki



why u aint post ya verse fa our battle meki i hate dq wins plus my verse was aiight for u,i saw u online too. anyway ill rematch u but itll take a minute cuz i got a few people i want to battle 1st.......i just wanted u to read my verse though...
matter fact ill post it to u so it doesnt get wasted and people can decide if it was good, but u better than i thought....
j dot u too, keep elevating ya

Voted For: J DOT

neither of ya'll had many punches, wit wordplay and personals but j dot had one, so he wins this shit. wit......
Your not straight, i got proof you wanna be a DYKE
Unscramble yo name...you wanna be called MIKE(meki is her name)

both ya'll need some more wordplay and shit, elevate, and j dot stop that selfglorifying bowl shit, i hate that shit. but nice single punch right there.

meki i was ganna give u this battle before i reread that one punch. yours was more directed towards him, u didn't have those selfglorifying lines which i liked, but u lacked stand out punclines like that one by j dot. u almost had one wit that connect the dots one, but u worded it wrong.

this was a close battle.

return wit a vote, i explained this shit clearly and deserve a honest vote back from both ya'll.
links in my sig. ya'll can vote on that marv one, but u need 5 wins for that e-dubz one. but get me a vote in at least one of 'em, shit been open forever. thanks one

thanx for the honest votes people, i'll return favors to EVERYONE who dropped a vote in here, no matter who it was for...uppn this shit

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Voted For: J DOT

v/ meki

Well J DOT took structure and flow...but meki had better punches that hit and sum nice concepts...J DOT u need to work on ur concepts and delivery...meki you need to work on better flow and metas...keep elevatin yall...:)

oops ill get that fixed...

Switched

hell yea...good lookn...up up up...1 and away for this

upnnnnnnnn this shittttttttt

This was feedback posted for meki
 

Tight battle both of ya.

too many slept on battles on this damn site.... lets get some votes in here !!!

Voted For: J DOT

nice shit you boys lol:) but ya i give thisa good battlerating
jdot gets the metas for the match and vocab the other cat and jdot gets another vote and wins for flow peace yall

DROP VOTES ON THIS BATTLE PEOPLE...upppn this

upppnnnnn battle

:cussing: ...im gettn pissed, aint no body voting on fuckn battles...people just waist there time spittn these rhymes....

ugh, i rhymed too, how you like that :laugh: ...naw, lets get some votes in here

just uppn this shit

Voted For: meki

i thought that meki was funny and the flow better. nicxe punches and personals to both but meki was harder.
best line:Im Tired Of These Hypocrits, As If Rapverse Made Bots.(robots)
If It Was This Easy To Toss This Garbage, I Would'v Eagerly SucceededTo Connect J's Dots.