upfront vs proverse
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 08:56 PM

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upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 10:33 AM.

i gotta kid whose very sick and needs ta b treated/
i oughta spit a verse ta em ta sho that his ass will b defeated/
and wen BaM meets pSa u wont b nicely greeted/
insted ya wish ya was home takin shots while ya dreamin/

but fuck da shots in ya sleep this is real life nigga/
u come to our crew actin hard ya gunna get da trigga/
u sumthin like a fake ass thug livin off ya pops six figya/

dis bitch nigga, wit his name proverse/
tries ta act hard but wen i stomped em he said his toe hurt/(hah)
mayne ya name is is sumthin like an opposite it should b "noverse"/
cuz the only lines that u spit that make sense r the ones u rehearse/

faggot wheres ya crew i thought they had ya back/
now its u on our whole crew u startin ta have a heart attack/
u left hung ta dry lookin like a towel rack/
i aint george bush but this is lookin sumthin like iraq/

boi we takin ova diss site/
dont get scared the only shot u eva took was from a mesquito bite/(haha)

ya whole crew softa than a pillow fight/
plus yall cant touch us like ultraviolet light/
u think u packin heat nigga lemme ignite/

ill sho ya a heatwave jus open ya eyes/
now ya prayin and wishin y0o ass was baptized/
the heats too much now ya sayin ya las goodbyes/
and the blood has filled ya lungs thier startin ta capsize/////


its ova B A M nigga try ta touch us ~peace~

and wen BaM meets pSa u wont b nicely greeted/
PSA what was i thinkin i meant VIOLENT TYPE LOL

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 01:52 AM.

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no question-how you marked the game with your grade
written i red ink- simblizin failure and you neva fail too still link
words reveresed now- "upfront" ironictly "backdown"under pain
looked in the word mirror and thought of a idea for a name
don't run and take these hits so you won't be shamed-in fact
by lettin everybody know you go hit while you turnin your back

*thats my verse*

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explainations:
1.(words reveresed now- "upfront" ironictly "backdown"under pain
looked in the word mirror and thought of a idea for a name)
up-down
front-back (upfront- backdown) reversed because
his name of oppisite of what he really is-

2.(don't run and take these hits so you won't be shamed-in fact
by lettin everybody know you go hit while you turnin your back)

*he has jada in his sig
and jadakiss said its shameful to die with bulllets in your back
(which simbilises you were running)


yes explinations WERE neccery ppl keep sayin
i dont have personals-
and like i always say these arent prewrites
its this ne dude who votes on all my battles
and say they were prewrites its annoyin as fuck


~1~

This was feedback posted for upfront
 

ok good shit both of you i really think you should have spit more pro but both had good shit

Voted For: upfront

is proverse in our crew i dont thinks o its all good upfront came harder with dem punches and flow nice mayne and proverse why u didnt make more lines mayne u should cuz upfront ripped u

u could of made more lines with dem punches and personal but u didnt sorry mayne my votes goes to upfront

~peace~

This was feedback posted for ProVerse
 

okok it like dis

as much as i wanted to vote against upfront: i can't not only cause the post but al cause he was alround better.

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Voted For: ProVerse

Proverse Killed It
His Verse Was Short n Sweet...Nice Structure, Hit Hard With Some Okay Punches
7/10 For The Verse

Upfront, You Dropped Alot More Lines Than Proverse So In All Reality, You Should Have Killed It, Elevate Ya Vocab n Step Ya Punches Up With Some Humour n You'll Be A Force To Be Rekoned Wit'

Nice Flowin Ya'll, I Appreciate The Time n Effort n The Skill...

Return The Favor Yo n Vote On My Currently Open Battles

^ thanx for votin mayn ima return the favor


uppin

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puleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase vote

^^^^^^uppin mayne thanks fa da votes keep em comin

ill return da favor

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin mayne if ya vote ill return da favor

Voted For: upfront

upfront - nice drop man, solid structure and lots of lines to throw in some good multis, some sweet punches and personals, dope flow and just good drop overall....

proverse - short and sweet, with some good wordplay punches and personals, but upfront came a lot harder then you man, elevate and try to spit a bit more lines

v/upfront

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Voted For: upfront

ok thas y i dont do unlimiteds...
that sucks now i gotta give it to upfront cuz he wrote more n
proverse was lasy...anyway here it goes

proverse...
both verses were week...seriously week...proverse had betta flow n had a different style...which pro'ly won u tha battle but u fucked it up...ur flow was good, good structure but u shouldnt have felt so confident wit just dat upfront-backdown line tryin to hold shit down...it wasnt happenin...u must be fuck nasty postin 3 bars on an unlimited battle...u lost cuz u diddnt wanna win!

upfront...
upfront was extremely comercial...i coulda swore i heard dat pillow fight line but i dont know for sure so im not hatin...it was da best thing u said...i didnt like any of ur flow...maybe the iraq line but da flow was off...i think u won because persistance should b rewarded...oh! n all dat nigga, trigga, figya, shit...died a loooong time ago...

i'll kill da both of u!
FUCK UPFRONT...FUCK PROVERSE...IM OUT!
PEACE!

This was feedback posted for upfront
 

since i kant vote in this battle cuz im part of tha bam crew im tellin yall that both yall did it good but realli upfront was nicer n had a betta flow

thanksfa da feed c thug and all da votes mayne ill return da ffava jus pm me ny 1

^^^^^^^^^uppin mayne dont fall asleep on me yall lol naw jus give an honest vote no dick rydas jus b honest

good lookin ~peace~

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^where use at

~[]Deace~............................................ ........

Voted For: upfront

upfront takes this with way more lyrics its simple
if u got 6 lines thats aiight and he got 12 thats aiight he wins..
i liked proverse shit but it felt like movies that are too short.
good struc good flow but no real punches or personals
and ya downfall was too little lyrics...
upfront had a bunch a good shit like that mosquito line and the closure was aiight too. struc was decent
that noverse personal was funny too. but overal quantity wins it here.. return favor help me finish this one
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