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intensify effect vs lil'drew
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Explain your votes well Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-29-04 at 09:16 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
LIL'DREW has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 10:02 PM.
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 10:47 PM.
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yo, serial killer/drug dealer/ here to murder u faster den u could BEAT IT
on thriller/ now das a fact, u and michael jackson kinda da same/ u both fuck lil boys and ya lyrics is both lame/ i aint tame/ i say wat i feel/ im like jesus a saint wit out da power to heal/ matta fact, yo ass, could call me da devil/ u front wit yo crew but then u claim u a rebel/ u say u tite/ u say u right/ but yo raps is still rags/ im just glad i aint gay and front a whole crew of fags/ |
yo where the fuck u at man??? A no show is a loss....pussy
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im here waiting till the last min to drop a weak verse agenist someone lame as u....
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this should be the end of ya fucking shit talking plus ya crew respect plus ya crew exsistence...
here comes the pain... lil'drew in B.A.M crew but that doesnt make u thug neither cuz i aint just Mop'in, i'll put u through the floor-board like a fucking drug-dealer my words can kill ya flithy-flow, N aint about soap put a "crack-in-ya-mouth" N u still couldnt spit "dope"... *get it* ya crew name B.A.M but never aimed a gun so dont compare us cuz i'll put so many red-dots on ya face u'll look embarrassed *ha* got all these fool from B.A.M scared when i drop N watch he's rank plumett got u looking like a "care-bear" when i leave ya heart in ya stomach So if u think u can end my streak, u must be trippin be Cuz tha last guy to take I.E out, wuz da doc that delivered me BITCH!!! BANG-BANG-EARLY MOTHER FUCKER!!!! |
man, i heard dem same lines used over again and again/ so it aint nutin i aint heard but if u win den u win/ but fo real dawg how u goin dis us and be right/ wit da same lines u used against da rest a da site/ ive heard it before.... crack in ya mouth....couldn't spit dope/ my words kill ya filthy flows.... blah blah it aint soap/
so yo shit aint really in contention wit me/ at least da shit i spit is original b/ so how da fuck u goin claim u a fuckin real m.c./ dawg even if u was f u couldnt sit next to a g/ so go ahead and yo shits tighter den wat i spew/ cause i aint here to start a second round (wink wink mutha fucka) dats just my review/ |
man, i heard dem same lines used over again and again/ so it aint nutin i aint heard but if u win den u win/ but fo real dawg how u goin dis us and be right/ wit da same lines u used against da rest a da site/ ive heard it before.... crack in ya mouth....couldn't spit dope/ my words kill ya filthy flows.... blah blah it aint soap/
so yo shit aint really in contention wit me/ at least da shit i spits fuckin' original b/ so how da fuck u goin claim u a fuckin real m.c./ dawg even if u was f u couldnt sit next to a fuckin g/ so go ahead and think yo shits tighter den wat i spew/ cause i aint here to start a second round (wink wink mutha fucka) dats just my review/ |
man, i heard dem same lines used over again and again/ so it aint nutin i aint heard but if u win den u win/ but fo real dawg how u goin dis us and be right/ wit da same lines u used against da rest a da site/ ive heard it before.... crack in ya mouth....couldn't spit dope/ my words kill ya filthy flows.... blah blah it aint soap/
so yo shit aint really in contention wit me/ at least da shit i spits fuckin' original b/ so how da fuck u goin claim u a fuckin real m.c./ dawg even if u was f u couldnt sit next to a fuckin g/ so go ahead and think yo shits tighter den wat i spew/ cause i aint here to start a second round (wink wink mutha fucka) dats just my review/ :shoot: |
read these I.E..... each one is a little different.......maybe after the third one it'll fuckin sink into yo brain.......fake ass muther fucker.........fuck u and yo crew wit
punk-bitch ass |
Voted For: intensify effect
drew- no paragraph structure ever again. bad structure, bad flow, bad punches bad everything. expand your mind, get excited bout battling and then you can elevate and compete....2/10 i.e.-blah. i dont like all the gunplay and shit so stop that. fucked structure in some places, ok flow, ehhh punches. just elevate also.....5/10 RTF...links in my sig |
upp'in............................................ .....
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upp'in....
drop link and i will return da favor of a vote... |
Voted For: LIL'DREW
shit...i know i saw that shit intensify spit b4...Drew came harder anyways...intensifys bars were kinda stretched... v/ LIL'DREW |
das cheatin u bitch..............tha only way u can win is to cheat and recycle shit...............ur a bitch
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fuck outta here with ya dick ryding vote's or AKA ALIAS VOTE cuz why would someone with 21 vote just so happen to vote in this battle N never voted in none of my shit befor but yet said YEA HE SAW ME SPIT THAT BEFOR AND I NEVER EVER SAW THIS KID BEFOR???? U IS ABOUT TO GET BANND FOOL FOR TRYING TO VOTE FOR YA_SELF BITCH!!!! :nono: |
man fuck u!!!...it aint my fault its someone else on dis site who knos u recycled dat shit...
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
Lil Drew...i thought you were aight...but you held the BAM name firmly...good drop I.E.
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THATS GUNNA BE DQ'd...it unexplained...dont trip I.E. |
Voted For: intensify effect
aiight ok battle.... opener - intensify closer - drew flow - intensify punchez - intensify v/ intensify, drew i think u a homophobe....... |
upp'in 4 some votes here..........................
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This was feedback posted for LIL'DREW
yo that was terrible dawg... i know you can do a lil' better then that... pull all you lyrics out of your b/f's jimmy hat... and then spit it back/ well i alls i can say/ both of you ni***'s is wack...
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^^^^ 45 post and 0-0 but u know what skill's and a punchline is right???
fuck outta here noob..... upp'in for votes FUCK A FEED BACK DAG..... |
Voted For: LIL'DREW
yo man work on your structure... |
sry this was supposed to be feedback... man i feel stupid... jus dq it...
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upp'in for more votes.......................................
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Voted For: intensify effect
props to both battlers on this one but here's the verdict. lil drew-lacked structured, but i see potential already though. i feel the strength behind the words, but there just weren't nice lyrics to intensify it. This was a simple effort, but i know you will elevate. ie-decent verse, i ain't mad atcha. You had a definate, "This win is mine" swagger about you. This can sometimes be bad, or near fatal in battles. Fortunately you brought it though. So if u think u can end my streak, u must be trippin be Cuz tha last guy to take I.E out, wuz da doc that delivered me that was a nice line and closer. although no where near one of your nicest verses, i think you figured it wouldn't take much effort to get this one. So with better lyrics, punch, and structure, you get this one. |
Voted For: intensify effect
your punches beat drew for sure he had a couple of metas but your shit was funny and more easy to follow my vote goes to intensify effekt |
Voted For: intensify effect
I.E obviously took all categories in thos one he came with metaphores, multies. and everything was flowin his structure was good.......the other verse was just lackin everything pretty much......my vote goes to intensify effect |
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