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50Cal. 08-26-04 09:16 PM

intensify effect vs lil'drew
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Explain your votes well

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 09:16 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 08-26-04 10:02 PM

LIL'DREW has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 10:02 PM.

System 08-26-04 10:47 PM

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 10:47 PM.

LIL'DREW 08-26-04 11:15 PM

yo, serial killer/drug dealer/ here to murder u faster den u could BEAT IT
on thriller/ now das a fact, u and michael jackson kinda da same/ u both fuck lil boys and ya lyrics is both lame/ i aint tame/ i say wat i feel/ im like jesus a saint wit out da power to heal/ matta fact, yo ass, could call me da devil/ u front wit yo crew but then u claim u a rebel/ u say u tite/ u say u right/ but yo raps is still rags/ im just glad i aint gay and front a whole crew of fags/

LIL'DREW 08-28-04 08:19 PM

yo where the fuck u at man??? A no show is a loss....pussy

intensify effect 08-29-04 11:46 AM

im here waiting till the last min to drop a weak verse agenist someone lame as u....

intensify effect 08-29-04 12:17 PM

this should be the end of ya fucking shit talking plus ya crew respect plus ya crew exsistence...

here comes the pain...

lil'drew in B.A.M crew but that doesnt make u thug neither
cuz i aint just Mop'in, i'll put u through the floor-board like a fucking drug-dealer
my words can kill ya flithy-flow, N aint about soap
put a "crack-in-ya-mouth" N u still couldnt spit "dope"... *get it*
ya crew name B.A.M but never aimed a gun so dont compare us
cuz i'll put so many red-dots on ya face u'll look embarrassed *ha*
got all these fool from B.A.M scared when i drop N watch he's rank plumett
got u looking like a "care-bear" when i leave ya heart in ya stomach
So if u think u can end my streak, u must be trippin be
Cuz tha last guy to take I.E out, wuz da doc that delivered me BITCH!!!

BANG-BANG-EARLY MOTHER FUCKER!!!!

LIL'DREW 08-29-04 08:05 PM

man, i heard dem same lines used over again and again/ so it aint nutin i aint heard but if u win den u win/ but fo real dawg how u goin dis us and be right/ wit da same lines u used against da rest a da site/ ive heard it before.... crack in ya mouth....couldn't spit dope/ my words kill ya filthy flows.... blah blah it aint soap/
so yo shit aint really in contention wit me/ at least da shit i spit is original b/
so how da fuck u goin claim u a fuckin real m.c./ dawg even if u was f u couldnt sit next to a g/ so go ahead and yo shits tighter den wat i spew/ cause i aint here to start a second round (wink wink mutha fucka) dats just my review/

LIL'DREW 08-29-04 08:09 PM

man, i heard dem same lines used over again and again/ so it aint nutin i aint heard but if u win den u win/ but fo real dawg how u goin dis us and be right/ wit da same lines u used against da rest a da site/ ive heard it before.... crack in ya mouth....couldn't spit dope/ my words kill ya filthy flows.... blah blah it aint soap/
so yo shit aint really in contention wit me/ at least da shit i spits fuckin' original b/
so how da fuck u goin claim u a fuckin real m.c./ dawg even if u was f u couldnt sit next to a fuckin g/ so go ahead and think yo shits tighter den wat i spew/ cause i aint here to start a second round (wink wink mutha fucka) dats just my review/

LIL'DREW 08-29-04 08:10 PM

man, i heard dem same lines used over again and again/ so it aint nutin i aint heard but if u win den u win/ but fo real dawg how u goin dis us and be right/ wit da same lines u used against da rest a da site/ ive heard it before.... crack in ya mouth....couldn't spit dope/ my words kill ya filthy flows.... blah blah it aint soap/
so yo shit aint really in contention wit me/ at least da shit i spits fuckin' original b/
so how da fuck u goin claim u a fuckin real m.c./ dawg even if u was f u couldnt sit next to a fuckin g/ so go ahead and think yo shits tighter den wat i spew/ cause i aint here to start a second round (wink wink mutha fucka) dats just my review/ :shoot:

LIL'DREW 08-29-04 08:17 PM

read these I.E..... each one is a little different.......maybe after the third one it'll fuckin sink into yo brain.......fake ass muther fucker.........fuck u and yo crew wit
punk-bitch ass

Logic The Goonie 08-29-04 08:34 PM

Voted For: intensify effect

drew- no paragraph structure ever again. bad structure, bad flow, bad punches bad everything. expand your mind, get excited bout battling and then you can elevate and compete....2/10

i.e.-blah. i dont like all the gunplay and shit so stop that. fucked structure in some places, ok flow, ehhh punches. just elevate also.....5/10

RTF...links in my sig

intensify effect 08-30-04 05:09 AM

upp'in............................................ .....

intensify effect 08-30-04 04:28 PM

upp'in....

drop link

and i will return

da favor of a vote...

lilchubs 08-30-04 05:55 PM

Voted For: LIL'DREW

shit...i know i saw that shit intensify spit b4...Drew came harder anyways...intensifys bars were kinda stretched...

v/ LIL'DREW

LIL'DREW 08-30-04 09:03 PM

das cheatin u bitch..............tha only way u can win is to cheat and recycle shit...............ur a bitch

intensify effect 08-30-04 10:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by lilchubs
Voted For: LIL'DREW

shit...i know i saw that shit intensify spit b4...Drew came harder anyways...intensifys bars were kinda stretched...

v/ LIL'DREW



fuck outta here with ya dick ryding vote's or AKA ALIAS VOTE cuz why would someone with 21 vote just so happen to vote in this battle N never voted in none of my shit befor but yet said YEA HE SAW ME SPIT THAT BEFOR AND I NEVER EVER SAW THIS KID BEFOR????


U IS ABOUT TO GET BANND FOOL FOR TRYING TO VOTE FOR YA_SELF BITCH!!!! :nono:

LIL'DREW 08-31-04 01:31 AM

man fuck u!!!...it aint my fault its someone else on dis site who knos u recycled dat shit...

M-Eazy 08-31-04 02:13 AM

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 
Lil Drew...i thought you were aight...but you held the BAM name firmly...good drop I.E.

M-Eazy 08-31-04 02:13 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by lilchubs
Voted For: LIL'DREW

shit...i know i saw that shit intensify spit b4...Drew came harder anyways...intensifys bars were kinda stretched...

v/ LIL'DREW


THATS GUNNA BE DQ'd...it unexplained...dont trip I.E.

bLiNkZ 08-31-04 04:58 AM

Voted For: intensify effect

aiight ok battle....
opener - intensify
closer - drew
flow - intensify
punchez - intensify
v/ intensify, drew i think u a homophobe.......

intensify effect 08-31-04 04:49 PM

upp'in 4 some votes here..........................

Tanto 08-31-04 10:10 PM

This was feedback posted for LIL'DREW
 
yo that was terrible dawg... i know you can do a lil' better then that... pull all you lyrics out of your b/f's jimmy hat... and then spit it back/ well i alls i can say/ both of you ni***'s is wack...

intensify effect 08-31-04 10:48 PM

^^^^ 45 post and 0-0 but u know what skill's and a punchline is right???

fuck outta here noob.....

upp'in for votes FUCK A FEED BACK DAG.....

G_$peed 09-01-04 07:17 PM

Voted For: LIL'DREW

yo man work on your structure...

G_$peed 09-01-04 07:18 PM

sry this was supposed to be feedback... man i feel stupid... jus dq it...

intensify effect 09-01-04 07:45 PM

upp'in for more votes.......................................

KISI 09-01-04 07:52 PM

Voted For: intensify effect

props to both battlers on this one but here's the verdict.

lil drew-lacked structured, but i see potential already though. i feel the strength behind the words, but there just weren't nice lyrics to intensify it. This was a simple effort, but i know you will elevate.

ie-decent verse, i ain't mad atcha. You had a definate, "This win is mine" swagger about you. This can sometimes be bad, or near fatal in battles. Fortunately you brought it though.

So if u think u can end my streak, u must be trippin be
Cuz tha last guy to take I.E out, wuz da doc that delivered me

that was a nice line and closer.

although no where near one of your nicest verses, i think you figured it wouldn't take much effort to get this one. So with better lyrics, punch, and structure, you get this one.

DRON 09-03-04 12:39 AM

Voted For: intensify effect

your punches beat drew for sure
he had a couple of metas but your shit was funny and more easy to follow
my vote goes to intensify effekt

SoLe 09-03-04 12:42 AM

Voted For: intensify effect

I.E obviously took all categories in thos one he came with metaphores, multies. and everything was flowin his structure was good.......the other verse was just lackin everything pretty much......my vote goes to intensify effect


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