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Decree Wun vs for$aken
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6 - 12 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting good luck Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 08-26-04 at 11:14 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 10:56 PM.
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Decree Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 11:00 PM.
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Alias: Killah Bwoy,State Capitol, Decree Wun...F.Y.I.
*let's get it started* spin the bottle I see Killah, State & Decree no longer a twin has to use his alias to get a vote for his fuckin' crew to win kids trapped in four walls, can't collapse there's nowhere to fall "State" not city,cuz he forget to make the name in "Cap-It-alls" rhymez not addictive check his lungs that's his secret cigarettes his feelings are hurt...he's blue....and that's the hardest it gets got this foo sad because of the text in my sig wanted a rematch but he needs to pay up...buy the lottery and "win and scratch" fuck you kid...oh sorry you are one literally just go offline .......because your lines aren't connected get the design!!!! old life bad shit it's like he made it over again freshly renewed your ex username did something...killah bwoy murdered your crew! *bar 2* Cap-It-Alls=Capitol *bar 3* "the hardest it gets it" says that in his sig.... |
Detective? please, only thing you've found is your dick after 4 years of searchin Merk This Foo Blind Folded, May not be able to see but my Nine still learkin Ya I admit You beat me, but how many days of prostitution did it take to get those votes merk this "kid" (baby goat) easily still no hair on his nuts, your far from "Goat" (greatest of all time) My "Sick" Shit Dominatin'.."flippin" this hoe...Like The chinese in the Olympics Your out of place..like the dollar sign in your name, Your Legs is what im rippin This personal is personal Dont you forget im the one that made you who you are Put the mic down kid you wack..sakens dyin quickly like his "rapperz" status bar Huntin you down like violent animals, spittin cannon-balls..rip open your brain like hannibal Remove Your main frame..check the main frame..im lyrically insane call me the cannibal Like a retard in university you beatin me is difficult, better yet impossible You losin...probable, saken failed to succeed..now he gettin rushed to da hospital personals he told me his rapperz pet died yo i culdnt really think LOL dont mind dis |
oh and that personal u did that wasnt me at da time cuz i told ya'll before this was my bros aaccount first..
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ooooo I never knew that at all.....damn.... |
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forsaken how come you got soo good and why did you erase your record lol
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i don't know...I elevate quickly when I have determination and confidence and I wanted to start over with a clean record fam! |
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well, this was really close. both of you came pretty good. I dont really have time so i'll cut to the chase.. in a pretty close battle, i think Forsaken won. he has some nice shiut. good job both of u. hit this up
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Voted For: For$akeN
decree it was aight some lines seemed like fillers n was'nt feeling the goat line to much got kinda confusing ta tell ya the truth but the rest flowed fairly well....4saken nice personals n some punches were connecting well..pretty creative verse good flow nice structure n a overall more solid verse in my opinion...nice battle both did well..... |
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Voted For: For$akeN
decree-fucked up flow, structure was off. punches were basically blah, nothing special really. never say your verse sux cuz that just makes it look worse. decent try tho. oh yeah, never admit a loss....6/10 For$aken-good flo and structure. nice personals and punches just basically slaughtered this time around. maybe step up on metas a lil bit but nothing else needs work really....8.5/10 v//for$aken RTF! links in da sig.:thumbup: |
^i'll vote on one of your battles and whoever blah........................^up
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This was feedback posted for For$akeN
oooooo o nice oooooooooo hahaha just tryin to see who oted lol
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^ummmm......ok fam! thanks for the up for no apparent reason:)^
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Voted For: For$akeN
A'ight...this was a very tite battle... Decree...you had some nice punches...some of ya lines I wanst feelin tho...some, ta me, seemed to be more filler than anythin. Nice structure, had that one personal...nice flow...not ya best shit, but still nice... 7.5/10 For$aken...nice structure and flow...easier to read than Decree's...you had some fuckin' ill personals...ya punches was tite...some hot shit. 9/10 Vote- For$aken No hate...plz hit this up... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146122 |
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Voted For: For$akeN
forsaken- that opener LMAO damn cant believe that shit good punch but the rest of ya verse was average to me not much complexity or anything mostly straight to the point punchs but maintained a bunch of personals i think most of the lines were personals work on some creativitie with ya punchs help make people remeber ya shit but overall lil above average cause of all the personals decree wun-not really fealin ya shit here brah dont put past loses in ya battles that goat line that was sick fealin the wordplay in that shit the main frame shit coulda been nice but didnt like the end of it had personals this time though but didnt like how most of ya lines was worded in this battle vote forsaken |
Voted For: For$akeN
For$akeN gets my vote...tha punches were hard & landed...tha structure was in place and not strect'd~out..tha flow as pretty good..and tha vocab was good too... Decree Wun..yo shit was good punches could've been a little harder..and tha flow & structure was good.. |
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