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GangsStarShit 08-27-04 08:05 AM

GangsStarShit vs sHoTTaBoY
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dick Riding
U called out openly so u 1st

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-30-04 at 08:05 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 08-27-04 08:13 AM

GangsStarShit has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 08:13 AM.

System 08-27-04 08:14 AM

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 08:14 AM.

Dirty Nigga 08-27-04 08:26 AM

Bitch Take Note Cause This How a Tru GANGSTAR Do../
I'ma 'MAN ON FIRE' Similiar To DJ Clue../
Watch As I Draw Blood In My TEXAS Chainsaw Massacre n Leave YOU Sumwhere In The Heavens Above With DJ SCREW..

I'm Bout To 'Set It Off' Like JUVENILE../
I Called You Out An STATED Any Way Any STYLE../
This Kat Trynna Diss Me When He Luv Readin My Rhymes Like A Bibliophile../
He'll Tell You I'm Wack But Hes Juss IN-DENIAL../
Whut You Dont See Is Him In 'PM' Askin To Reconcile../

We On The Battlefield n I Got The 'MEDAL OF HONOUR' Takin This By Storm Like The US In The OLYMPICS../
Call Me Speilberg Cause Of The Way I 'BLOCKBUSS' n MAKE-HITS..!!!

GangsStarShit 08-27-04 08:45 AM

Unfortunate for you...you know this ain't ur sport,
U said it urself...
Quote:
Originally Posted by sHoTTaBoY


Started sum shit on vets are dickheads...ain't u looked @ urself,
Got sonned real bad but u admit...
Quote:
Originally Posted by sHoTTaBoY


Sick of makin the same thread this cat thinks he's cool,
Comin up here thinkin he knows it all...but he's still in school,

He got the wrong idea of biting like it's sum reverse psychology,
Sayin a verse he posted was already dun & was like THE GUY COPIED ME,

Sup u ain't tough this owning snapped ya like a broke twig,
I ShoTTA many bigger BoYs wit pieces smaller than in my Obie sig,

Dirty Nigga 08-27-04 08:52 AM

Aight, Nice VERSE....Thats The FIRST Time I've Been Dissed Personally By Anybody On This Site...
Much Propps n Good Lookin

UPPPPPPPPIN 4 VOTES YA'LL!!
Vote On This Battle With HONEST Votes n I'm Sure We'll BOTH Return The Favor

P E A C E

GangsStarShit 08-27-04 08:54 AM

yep /\. this mutha fuckin thread bumpin 4 votes fet them in here and i will return favours honestly

~Sonofisis~ 08-27-04 08:59 AM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

OK, Personals mod def goes to gangsta shit because he came nice but that's it.. this battle wasn't that good, no good punches from either, structure was okay, but flows was off, so it came down to content, shottaboy had more disses written down, so I vote for him, holla back..

PLZ, return the favor in my link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143643

Dirty Nigga 08-27-04 09:51 AM

Upppppppppppppppppppppin 4 More Votes n GANGSTAR Dont Be Mad Cause My Verse Was Better Than You Expected..............

GangsStarShit 08-27-04 11:29 AM

/\. i ain't jus a lil blind when it comes to talent sum of ya voters seem...i'll explain l8r

~Sonofisis~ 08-27-04 03:37 PM

My bad gangsta shit, i didn't know that you were in the crew, yeah, get my vote taken away, my bad.. still a close battle, i juss didn't really like the punchlines and i had to barley go with shottaboy, but i'm in your crew, you're right, take it away..

Removed

GangsStarShit 08-28-04 05:31 AM

k fair enough but i feel ya didn't understand where i was comin from i mean /\/\/\/\/\ a bit self glory blah blah blah see while i dissed...he didn't and for that u should've seen that but like i said it's cool...

...and shotta i wouldn't complain coz only me, u and whoever votes can see this so i ain't bumpin my shit...uppin

La Cosa Nostra 08-28-04 06:06 AM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

Ok, gangstar won this.. Even though quotes are played, the ones he did worked decently well. But the line that got it for me was...

He got the wrong idea of biting like it's sum reverse psychology,
Sayin a verse he posted was already dun & was like THE GUY COPIED ME,

how can he of copied you when u posted after him..

Appart from that though, shotta you do have potential, you just need a lil evevation on vocab, punchlines and conencting bars.

Keep elevating peeps.

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 06:09 AM

What The Fuck???????
Ya'll Cant Do That...
You Voted For The BETTER Verse, Juss Cause You Forgot He In Ya Crew You Cant Change Votes Like That......

Upppppppppppin 4 Some REAL Votes n Not Cheatin Ass Nigguhs Like These Fools...

GangsStarShit 08-28-04 06:15 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by GangsStarShit
Battle Rules:

6 - 14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dick Riding
U called out openly so u 1st

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-30-04 at 08:05 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


/\ sorry dawg it's in the rules...uppin this thread for some REAL votes too thanx Poet

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 11:08 AM

Well Watever Man, The Vote Stands...Its 1-1, Aint Nuthin Can Change....

Uppppppin 4 Votes Ya'll!

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 03:39 PM

Uppppppppin 4 Votes Ya'll!!!!!!

I'll Return The Favor...

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 10:28 PM

Yo Ya'll...This Battle Needs Votes

Upppppppppppppppppppppp The Votes n I'll Return The Favor

Please Vote With Complete Honesty On My Battles

Dont Leave This Battle @ 1-1

I Got A Battle With MC NAUGHTY BOYA Too, That Stands @ 3-3.....
uppppppppppppppppppppppp the votes

Dirty Nigga 08-29-04 09:24 AM

Yo Uppppppppin 4 Voyes Ya'll!!!!

Vote On My Battles n I'll Return The Favor

Dirty Nigga 08-30-04 07:34 AM

Yo!! Uppppppppppppin 4 Votes!!!

Vote On My Battles n I'll Return The Favor Wit HONEST Votes!!

Barburyin 08-30-04 06:13 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

i gotta give dis ta shottaboy his ryhmes were nice flow kicked ass n punchloines were good
vote-shottaboy

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Eclipsik 08-30-04 06:32 PM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

Gangstarshit

Unfortunate for you...you know this ain't ur sport,
U said it urself...when it come 2 rhymin, I'm comin up a lil Short
^ha you got sources...

Started sum shit on vets are dickheads...ain't u looked @ urself,
Got sonned real bad but u admit...I Aint Scared 2 Make An ASS Outta Myself
^eh, whateva whateva...

Sick of makin the same thread this cat thinks he's cool,
Comin up here thinkin he knows it all...but he's still in school,
^weak

He got the wrong idea of biting like it's sum reverse psychology,
Sayin a verse he posted was already dun & was like THE GUY COPIED ME,
^this fool confused?

Sup u ain't tough this owning snapped ya like a broke twig,
I ShoTTA many bigger BoYs wit pieces smaller than in my Obie sig,
^decent punch

shottaboy

Bitch Take Note Cause This How a Tru GANGSTAR Do../
I'ma 'MAN ON FIRE' Similiar To DJ Clue../
^Decent lines but weak in the punch.

Watch As I Draw Blood In My TEXAS Chainsaw Massacre n Leave YOU Sumwhere In The Heavens Above With DJ SCREW..
^weakness. Not hard hittin'

I'm Bout To 'Set It Off' Like JUVENILE../
I Called You Out An STATED Any Way Any STYLE../
^blah does nothing for me

This Kat Trynna Diss Me When He Luv Readin My Rhymes Like A Bibliophile../
He'll Tell You I'm Wack But Hes Juss IN-DENIAL../
^why the hell would some dude be likin' to read wack lines?

Whut You Dont See Is Him In 'PM' Askin To Reconcile../
^k.

We On The Battlefield n I Got The 'MEDAL OF HONOUR' Takin This By Storm Like The US In The OLYMPICS../
Call Me Speilberg Cause Of The Way I 'BLOCKBUSS' n MAKE-HITS..!!!
^like what you tried to do in the last line, but the structure is straight terrible man. Work on your flow for real man. This goes to GangStarish...

Eclipsik 08-30-04 06:34 PM

vote on my battles. Check the signature \/

Dirty Nigga 08-31-04 07:52 AM

Uppppppppppin 4 More Votes Ya';ll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GangsStarShit 08-31-04 10:09 AM

/\.

GangsStarShit 09-03-04 04:11 AM

/\.

Dirty Nigga 09-03-04 09:57 AM

This Gangstarr Bitch Is A CHEAT!
An A Faggot
Fuck This Dude........
His Flow Was Garbage An I Should Have 2 Vites But One Got Cancelled Out n The Other Gangstarr Complained About Cause His OWN Crew Member Voted AGAINST HIM....

This Battles Fucked n Should Be Scraped Cause This Bitch KNOWS He Lost But Cheats To Get Votes
Fuck Him

NoMercy 09-04-04 12:08 AM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

well this is a stucture battle lol to me i see that lol but ya gangstar took it with stucture and punches the other cat had alright punches but kinda wack no hate but still lol G: 7/10
Shottaboy lol whata name: 5/10 return the favour in my battle vs mookie in my sig thanks peace

Dirty Nigga 09-04-04 06:19 AM

Shut The Hell ''NOMERCY''
I Aint Returnin Shit
''WHATTA NAME'' Wtf?

GANGSTAR DICK RIDES TO GET VOTES
How Can Anybody Say His ELEMENTARY Rhymin Was Nice?

For God Sake He Rhymes School An Cool....

An The Quote Thing? Whut The Fuck Was That..

The Mutha'Fucker Rhymes Urself With Myself....

Hes COMPLETE GARBAGE..

An He Obviously PM's These Dumb Fucks To Get Votes...

GangsStarShit 09-04-04 07:18 AM

Eh FUCK YOU HERBY AIGHT...NOBODY SEES THIS AND UM...I think u'll find my words were better than yours fuckin OWNED U BWOY u can't win a verse when all u do is post self glory lines like the DJ Clue line...FUCK YOU...infact why am i buzzed at this boy? i got him fair and i aint dumb enough to PM for votes fool...u don't even know me i rhymed to ur level dawg i could've murdered you lyrically if i wanted to...but i went easy on yoself...and still came up 3-0 so lets sh ok lil boy...uppin

Ice Pick 09-04-04 09:52 AM

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 
SHOTTABOY

ELEVATE

YOUR SHIT WAS FUCKIN CORNY and WACK

Sik Wit It 09-05-04 04:23 AM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

GangStar has my vote...
He had some pretty-nice hard punches that landed...
Decent structure *wasn't stretched out*...
A nice flow..*i liked tha way u quoted tha shit he said & used that in ur rhymes*...
A sick vocab...

sHoTTa yo shit was good too...
Your punches weren't as hard as your other 1'z in ur otha battles...and tha flow was decent...

Dirty Nigga 09-05-04 06:58 AM

Ice Pick Is One Of The Many Reazons I Say VETS ARE DICKHEADS...

He Quick To Hate Prolly Cause Gangstar Ridin His Dick Too....

Fuck These Gay Ass Dick Ryders..
Gangstar Is Elementary As Fuck...

He Dosent Even Know The Meanin Of Vocabulary...
An He Had NO PUNCHES...
Hes Garbage, Fuck Ice Pick n GANGSTARSHIT, They Are Obviously Havin Gay Cyber Sex 2gether

GangsStarShit 09-06-04 04:29 AM

1 Word 4 u...sore loser...u got beat by "elementary rhymes" and fuck what ur sayin about dick riding...come up wit sum evidence...can ya find any...NO...coz there aint none...i'm winnin by honest votes bitch get it in ur head

GangsStarShit 09-06-04 10:51 AM

/\.

GangsStarShit 09-07-04 06:34 AM

/\.

GangsStarShit 09-08-04 10:54 AM

/\.

LEazy 09-08-04 11:02 AM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

damn...close battle. But I think u got this one from the last three bars you dropped. Yaw both was on each others asses. But I like this flow. I think Shottaboy's flow was abit off. Usually your flow is on point shottaboy but this verse was off abit. And it was nice how you quoted his rhymes too. Nice battle from both of you.

Return da favor and gimmie a honest vote on this battle.

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