Malefic vs DangerousMyndLunatic
 

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Malefic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 03:06 PM.

DangerousMyndLunatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 03:07 PM.

Ima fuck u bitch. leave your hips displaced...
Merk'd wit haste...left like ur avi..Chalk Traced
Competition...Open faced...like thansgiving re-occured..
I type wit verbs to make your carpal syndrome slur...
And thats word....
Take the space in my lyrics, an smak u wit my space bar...
Verbaly scarr'd,Hoe tried to step up wit skill level'd sub-par
Ripp'd apart...my key's hit in unit's to say u aint smart...
Dangerouse mynd's the kind that trie's.But doesn't make the part...
Scrape up the remain's...Adam's booty, left in Cellulite strand's
Face the facts....your a girl...That's why u have Rapverse fans....

Fuck It Here Goes: ....

The bells ring lets fight i guarantee you a bruiser,
You got as much chance of winning as 'Kobe Bryants acuser',
It's time to blow out your candles as i grant your deathwish,
Like a broken bulb, its lights out for this skeptic,
My words so intense you'll wish your ass was dyslexic,
Cuase then you wouldn't understand only then would i be ineffective,
Your getting buried alive faggot im your undertaker,
Between u and pam anderson tits bitch i can't tell which is faker,
I chopped your faggot ass and bumped heads in the series
But ur fucking whack and hard 2 believe like 2pac coming back theories,

LmfaoO .. * Fucked my shit up!

Voted For: Malefic

yea, this was a tight battle. But I think Malefic got this.

DML, yea you had the vocab. But you didn't have many good punches that were hard hittin'. The Bryant one was nice though. But yo flow was a lil off too. Vocab was nice though. Try addin' personals wit punches nect time though Tney can be deadly combo.

Mal,
tight stuff. Nice flow in this. It was straight and to the point. You had some nice punches and stuff. Like the closer, was a hot one. Good shit, man. I think you edged out this victory.

Props to both though.

v/Mal

Uppin.

Voted For: Malefic

v/ Mal

Mal-came harder....good punches and perosnal....nice flow....some made me laugh

DML-blah your punches were played (kobe, pam anderson) dont use sex lines either..........other punches were ok...none hit hard...ok flow.......

o v/ Mal

Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

damn yo lunatic came hard the flow was hot n tha rhymes was tight to the punchlines were iight vocab need jus a lil werk but its all good
vote=dangerouse

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Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

dml took this...his punches were more clever...they made more sense...had good flow...it was more fun to read...

gave it to dml...

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check this out

Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

yo this niggas lines was nuts mayn that tupac thang he said pam anderson and tha kobe bryant thang he killed that other nigga plus i aint understand where that other nigga was gettin at feel me

retun the favor
peep my open mic
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147094

Uppin

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Voted For: Malefic

first off..
DML- you don't start off a battle sayin' let's fight.. it's a no-brainer concept.. first bar- weak.. last bar maybe the the best or the Pamela Anderson one.. which wasn't too bad.. you didn't deliver anything hard hittin'.. it's like u stated how he's wack use allusions but didn't pin-point anything specific, it was like you were hypin' yourself, no real punches.. just self-compliments.. but it did rhyme, not bad flow but still.. no personals, punches, structure, and that bright color didn't help much.. so yea, 4/10..

malefic-
creative with the second half of the first bar.. but started off kinda weak.. terrible interruption- "and that's word.." you coulda put sumthin' different there but what the heck.. ya multis were better, seein' you had some.. in there.. vocab is equal amongst you two.. you last bar took the battle easily.. andthe part about the space bar.. that shit was hella funny.
6/10

But stickin' to adequate feedback concepts.. both verses were missin' hard hittin' punches, however, malefic delivered a couple towards the end.. which helped out a lot.. vocab both tied.. personals more on malefic's side... every other category seemed equal at the least.. not a bad battle from you two.. take the critism constructively, good luck with this battle..
~wun~

my vote.. malefic

Voted For: Malefic

DML-
The bells ring lets fight i guarantee you a bruiser,
You got as much chance of winning as 'Kobe Bryants acuser',

^^Her best

Mel-
Ima fuck u bitch. leave your hips displaced...
Merk'd wit haste...left like ur avi..Chalk Traced

^^Personal....nice start

Scrape up the remain's...Adam's booty, left in Cellulite strand's
Face the facts....your a girl...That's why u have Rapverse fans....

^^Umm i was feelin the punch she does have alot of fans cuz of the pics.


V/mel

why?: Mel was direct with his punches and personals some hit some didnt but DML couldnt find any personal in yo shit work on it. Overall boring battle..lol

Voted For: Malefic

ok:
DML~your verse was good, but i've seen better from you, some punches were kinda played, but effective nonetheless,but you had good flow and structure though...
Malefic~your verse was strong, you came harder then your opponent here, and your punches were good, liked your opener, and your closer was good as well, funny too, i just think you had better vocab and harder punches,, so ima vote you malefic.........