Rapula vs Ice Pick
 

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Rapula has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 08:59 PM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 09:00 PM.

Rapula Son listen
You can only dream of beating me, now I'll make you quite scared
bitch! Freddy's dead! so now I'll just be Rapula's New Nightmare
I don't fight fair, so just use defense like the Baltimore Ravens
this is a deathmatch, well at least that's what we'll call it for Rapula mis behavin
before you're killed beware, you need to learn how to get in the game
You'll never be top on this board, you're not in the picture and can't even fit in the frame
you've had your fun, now don't post whatever you were about to write
I would say that your verse is going to be good, but I know your gonna bite
Everybodys knows I murder shit.. .no doubt that this place should
Even yo’ bitch knows I’m a leader...she said my dictate good

thunderous-ways, will be how i *kill this faggot* cuz i *plunder-gays*
my flows produce heat and im quick to *melt ice* like *summer-days*//
this chicken-confesses, its like *pirates sharin treasures* the way im *splittin-ya-chest-kid*
rap spittin-the-best-shit, plus ill *lose I.P* faster than *switchin-addresses*//
ima raw-fuck, i brawl-bucks, call you a *leprechaun* cuz you winnin is *all-luck*
leave ya balls-stuck, to the floor so ppl need to help *pick-up* like *small-trucks*//
slice-pricks, kill you, take you out ya grave, kill you again just to do it twice-bitch
ya lifes-shit, so its guaranteed ill leave ya *status frozen* witta name like *ice*-pick//
*roll* on you like *dice*-quick, bruise-till-you-seizure, do-it-for-leisure
as for ya grave ill have *ice-boxed* faster than the *cubes-in-my-freezer*//

thunderous-ways, will be how i *kill this faggot* cuz i *plunder-gays*
my flows produce heat and im quick to *melt ice* like *summer-days*//
this chicken-confesses, its like *pirates sharin treasures* the way im *splittin-ya-chest-kid*
rap spittin-the-best-shit, plus ill *lose I.P* faster than *switchin-addresses*//
ima raw-fuck, i brawl-bucks, call you a *leprechaun* cuz you winnin is *all-luck*
leave ya balls-stuck, to the floor so ppl need to help *pick-up* like *small-trucks*//
slice-pricks, kill you, take you out ya grave, kill you again just to do it twice-bitch
ya lifes-shit, so its guaranteed ill leave ya *status frozen* witta name like *ice*-pick//
*roll* on you like *dice*-quick, bruise-till-you-seizure, do-it-for-leisure
as for ya grave ill have *ice-boxed* faster than the *cubes-in-my-freezer*// !!!!

sorry about that....i dont know why it posted twice..

Voted For: Rapula

my vote goes to rapula his verse was very good had betta wordplay, multis, punchlines...... ice ya verse was nice too but i think u could have came harder.

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thanks for voting i really appreciate it....good battle ice...much respect

aight.......can we get some more votes please.....upp

Voted For: Ice Pick

haha nice battle.

rapula-real nice verse. structure was a lil iffy tho. punches connected, decent wordplay and personals. i think ur a "newb" but you sure dont rap like one. but yeah overall nice...8.25/10

Ice Pick- after i read rap's verse, i thought you had lost. but your verse was tight with the punches structure just eveything but personals was on point but since im pretty sure hes new, you couldnt really use them. but yea, overall, if you step up your personals, you will become recognized more widely.....9.5/10

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iight...thanxs 4 tha votes...uppin-------------lplpl

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This was feedback posted for Rapula
 

well i think you got this one... but i cant vote until i have 20 post... but hellz yea homie

only if i could get up on this... i'll get some winnings... and get my props too... i wish i could battle some one... but not you guys... just kidding... (notice this) im trying to get my post # up

Voted For: Rapula

you so won this man he got frost bite nice style man quick and deadly

Voted For: Ice Pick

good battle ya real good but i got so mad every time i say a ** that i had to give it to ice
ya'll was + on flow punches personal so it was a real good battle but one shinned

ayo ice holla at the link in the sig cause it look like you wit out a crew

Voted For: Ice Pick

ice pick had better structure...nice punches...likin' da reference to nightmare on elm street...

rapula...was tite too...but his shit was hard to follow in some places...

gave it to icepick...

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Voted For: Rapula

Rapula took this by a mile...ice you didnt have tha punches in ur verse like u usually have...Rapula came hard with all those punchlines and wordplay...flow was there too...

Voted For: Ice Pick

rapula crushed ice pick no comp his flow ryhme scheme was betetr....hit with way more multis just a better verse it was like 2 different levels here but keep it up

what the fuck no i didnt lol ice pick lost shit man im sorry fuck my bad they changed the voting system around on me my bad man this should be closed now cause rapula took it

Voted For: Ice Pick

im votin for ice cause he had puches and personals and rapula said the same whack shit over and over again