If You Don't Read This... Then Never Speak To Me Again
 

I ain’t tryin’ to become famous and shit…
I just think I should get the respect cuz I deserve it…
I don’t claim I’m the best… Theres only about a top 10 list…
The other MCs I can beat the rest…
My list goes Carson Jet, Slicky C, And that DV vet…
R Rated, Forsaken, Big Chase… Spul aka Reckless
Then comes enigma, DLG, J Poll, and village…
I don’t lie in my scripts I’m more of a realist…
Very few cats understand the facts…
That I was spittin’ raps befo’ I bout died because of a car crash…
I used to rip cats… Retired… but still spit sik raps…
How many of you have broke your skull on the car dash…
About a millimeter from severin’ an artery was glass…
hit by a semi went off a bridge in a flash…
Seatbelt believe it or not broke 3 ribs…
Wonderin’ how momma felt after she ‘bout lost one of her 3 kids…
Woke up looked left there was 3 Zigs…
passed out…woke up in a hospital with more than 3 pins…
Lodged in my nose… wonderin’ how I ever would return to my hoes…
Moments when time froze…
About 4 months pass… starin’ at my nurse’s ass…
Get the news that my friend died in a four wheeler crash…
As if it all couldn’t get worse… I burned every last verse…
Cuz my life was becoming a curse…
My friend Ronnie gets leukemia…
3 weeks later it’s Ronnie can you her me… uh…
doc… It’s getting more serious
Ronnie’s last words were Rob you’ll finally get what you deserve…
9 months later RV’s on my last nerve
Apothesis? Please… Heres my hypothesis… jeez…
Its really not that hard just go to vet of the month and post VP is this peace/
I don’t give a shit whether or not I win the award…
It’s more of a sense of feelin’ that VP is no more
I began… I elevated… I became a star…
I ran… I escalated… Then I wrecked my fucking car
I about died… that means shit to you… true…
Every night since I’ve cried… Ronnie is still with me when I spit on you… true
Carson will prolly come on and start some shit…
It’s cuz he’s mad cuz he’s not yet what I am… Legit
I don’t care about any of the wins I got… you can have them…
Cuz it’s not comparable to what I got… When It comes to rappin’
RIP Ronnie & Kirk forever we ride…
Lawson North West South East Side…
You can say what you want outside
But on the inside… you know it’s real rap…
say it’s wack… Cuz I don’t care… go snort some more crack

I just wanna know what you think... don't turn this into another VP hate thread... Carson... keep your beef comments to yourself

blah its 100% dope for mentoning me and my homies lol....good piece i guess how long it take?

if it is a diss who is it on man......

Its a diss on everyone who doesn't respect me...

lol thx big chase.. that means alot!!! about a half hour I about stopped after the 6th line cuz I thought it was wack...

well it wasnt wack man giood thing you didnt stop...

yo view my album review its funny...

thats good...real good....one of the dopest pieces I've read....I'll analyze this in a bit...but in the mean time...check my anti trust piece

yeah dopeness...

That was dope mayun good jubs :thumbup:

yea, tight, but I can't figure out if my name in there was as a diss or not? :huh: lol

nah... It was a list of cats that can beat me...

dog.this was the illest piece ive seen since i been a member.yo i can relate to the whole car wreck part.the way you told the story felt like da notorious was back.good piece.nah what am i sayin GREAT piece.

str8 dope i like this shit mayne yea haters u know who u are

nice drop village

~peace~

thx for the feedback...

flizzoat.... c'mon... feed back?

yo ill shit, what made it dope was that it was real and you could definitely feel that in your lyrics. dopeness, cept my name should have been in there. lol

lol....

thnx for the feed back Van... lol... I won't ever get used to your new name...lol

yo...shit was good...keep it up...as for a diss its there...but more about other shit to me...n e how...8/10

thanks pay day... u & drastic tore it up too...

Niiiiiiice Village, Real Nice.....Got Anythin Else U Wrote Like That???

Blaaaaah, I Could Beat Some Of Your List...
Lolol, But Im Not About To Complain Here...
Real Nice Piece Mayn, Can See You Were Going For Emotion...
But I Have Just A Few Suggestions...
You Were Tryna Be Deep Then Said Something About Getting Back To Your Hoes...
That Kinda Kills The Moment Of Sorrow And Shit...
Cuz Then You Just Look Like Another Ganstah Wannabe Pimp Type Deal...
But Ya Mayn, Overall Real Nice...
Pretty Tite Flow, Would Sound Nice On Audio...
9.3/10...
.One.

lol... abstrakt... I was tired as fuck I'll wind up revising it before I do the audio...

thx

i think you have some buddie's here.

because you were doing one sylable rhymin . . which is not impressive for example
real-rap
more-crack
shit & it?
vet & reckless?

this is not anything close to being the dopest piece.

i'll leave feedback when i'm not too tired
Can someone break this down in .. motion . . wordplay . multi's flow.. vocab..?
6.4/10. average . . please leave feed back not " this was hot , yo "
it's getting on my nerve's.

lol... nah...

I know it's not impressive... I'm not trying to impress anyone... I don't need to... my thing Is I want people to get my message... thats just how it came out of my head and on to the keyboard.

I wasn't on the list. :cussing: :D :hump:

there's a point to that... spul... hold on... yes you were!

ill shit.... otflmsao

it was tite as hell

thats good money yo im feeling it good lookin out yung 1 peace

thanks for the feedback... keep it comin'.

Aight Man, I'm Here, Check My Battles That Are Currently Open Vs. World Famous & Tha Flash n Get Back To Me

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whatup VP

iight yo kiddo you did ur thing fa sho...i gives it a 9/10 i got more into it as it went on by the end i was all up in it....so ya digg iz strait shit fa sho...

vote - ok .

not great but ok n do ya thying man

dope peice ull be a tight audio head as soon as u start watch out hes comin for u carson lol

wordizzle....

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flizzoat for feedback...

its cool

More than that kid.

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