upfront vs kahdaffi_black
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-31-04 at 01:19 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

kahdaffi_black has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 01:20 AM.

yo upfront check it....

upfront i think not i think ya new name should be (back down)
nigga i will reverse ya face give you a frown, you straight now
thought u had them gay tendencies like like smithers in the
simpsons my style is irecinsilible i got ninjas you got bycicles
cmmon dawg you aint the shit my girls come like pixistix in a straight line fo this dick so i came to hur ya feelings stick tack's in ya like you was a ceiling. got ya sista giving me sexual healing wait right there i caught ya stealing... a glimps
of the black republic now ya heart is beating.. nigga after this battle you will need a shower to get that fresh new feeling.

yo good looking out black republic the black house
this ya boi kadaffi_black a soon to be member of the OUTLAWS nigga... good luck upfront...

upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 01:56 AM.

yea thas riight kahdaffi u are black/
new to RnB nigga u stay wack/
ya rhymes need sum cleanin up like teeth plaque/
nigga taste but dont touch jus lean back/

and ill do da rocaway/
cuz im takin dis battle and runnin wit it like im on a break away/

nigga try n touch this and ya head gunna get clapped/
u a fresh peice a meat bloody and unwrapped/(rapped)

nigga new to dis game u only got 21 posts/
my shit aint ill its straight up gross/
and if ya think ya can beat me y0o ass is toast/
cuz boi ill give ya more than a knife n butta, ill cut y0o ass then diagnose/

cmon mayne like jada u should kiss da game goodbye/
u aint a real mc u jus livin a lie/
s0o wit dis all said im out 4 da 1st damn time/
im sumthin like jordan in his got damn prime/
and if beatin dis bitch nigga in a battle is a fuckin crime/
then im guilty and should be put away f0o 4 every fuckin rhyme//////////////////

[]Deace~ its ova

^^^^^^uppin fa votes where they at lol ill return da favor

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin ill return da favor

thanks fa da vote mayne ery 1 keep em comin thanks good lookin

y0o uppin less go less go this battle been up fa too long get at me wit votes thanks

~peace~

Voted For: upfront

upfront took this battle wit better punches...both of ure structures were off...flow was all over...and khadafi...u aint no outlaw...pst...u aint good enough G...so upfront takes this on better punches and personals...

This was feedback posted for upfront
 

yo all tha flows i seen u rap is WACK dey dont make sence dey corny as hell juss quit rappin

u SUCK*10

Voted For: upfront

UpFront took diss one
he had harder attempts at punches
his flow was good n his structure was
better

Kahdaffi fixed ya structure ur flo will turn out better
n try adding wordplay punches n vocab 2 ya flow
u tryed vocab but didn't spell much of it right
so keep workin on it alright drop dough
vote honestly on da battles in my sig

newkid jus sayin that cuz he wanna battle me boi ill set up ......sum one put a dick in dis kids mouth s0o he shuts tha fuck up ~peace~

im comin at cho ass hard

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^

y0o uppin dont fall asleep onme here lol jus close this battle ill return da fava

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Voted For: upfront

upfront had way better flow by big and he had alright vocab basicly no vocab compaird to mine but anyway he getss the vote:
punches: front
vocab: front
opener not realy anygood
closener front
metas no one
multi's front
v/upfront
return the favour in my battle verse anyone in my sig thanks peace

HAHA MAYN I ALREADI BEAT U,CHANGE YA LOCATION U MAKIN PHILLY LOOK BAD FUCKIN DICKHEAD

Voted For: upfront

kahdaffi_black
Yo Punches were hard and they landed (tha punches could've been a little hardr tho)..tha structure was a little stretchy...tha flow was aight..and tha wordplay was aight..

upfront
Yo punches were hard too and connected..tha flow was aight and almost fell a littler..structure was decent and didn't stretch out..and tha wordplay was aight..

Overall
My vote goes to upfront cause punches came a littler harder & landed..tha flow was good..and tha structure was good...