ruff_tuff_thug vs Da Jokah
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 30 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
due 1 hour
u drop first :nono:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 02:47 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Da Jokah has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 02:17 AM.

ruff_tuff_thug has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 02:22 AM.

yo you again this time i'll realy kill yoou faggot ass da jokah...
stand back and cry bitch and watch how and i fuckin smoke ya...
you aint a rapper or a poet you a little wannab...
your gay and helpless thats why you stand next to me...
your interrests are basketball i dont see rap...
its prolly cuz you cant rap and you suck that bad...
your a yung bitch with old ass skillz...
i give fuckas like you hits abd bitches thrillz...
yo ur crew is the bloodz funny cuz all i see is blood...
stand back and fuck off before you get cut...
i'll kill yo family yo mutha and take yo fuckin gut...
i'll kill you and rape you mutha fuckin slut...

Round 2
ayo chek

~Welcome Back...Welcome Back...Welcome Back..To Round 2 muh fuckah u ready to be murked once again haha wun~

ayo i take a puff of tha droh..load up and iam ready to ride,
grab ma stuff and i go...enter tha room u all ready to hide//
your open micz should be closed...and same wit cha mouth,
nigga u aint dirrty u jus west..stop thinkin u from da south//
Iam from tha city of Queenz..were we kill niggas by all meenz,
were we got crime scenes...and blast niggas who be feenz//
yo nigga u a feen to ma lyricz..matta fact u jus ugly,
ruff tuff thug haha u hear-in-this..tell me wat a thug be//
i put fear in bitches like u...i can see tha fear commiin,
iam a nasty nigga..i bust in ya ear..so u can Hear me commin'//
haha ya lyrics aint feelin u ..u got betraid like a snitch,
and nigga its ova iam surious iam a have u laid like yo bitch//

wun nigga nuff said e.z

uppin this vote ppl vote quick...

haha uppin this e.z\

huh...

Voted For: ruff_tuff_thug

give it 2 Ruff his flow
was better
Jokah u had a punch but it was played
n yo flow wasn't all dat good pretty much same
structure everything else was close Ruff's flow
was better so he got my vote
v/RUFF
give a honest vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

thanx homie uppin this shit...

hahaha ok anyways uppin

Voted For: Da Jokah

yo nice battle jokah won me ova his punches and flowz and nice wordplays//

ruff

u had good flow nice mayne but yo punches was out of reach mayne u need to hit hard and dis is an 2nd round u came with lack punches// but yo flow was good but use flow and harder punches next time mayne

jokah gots my vote cuz of punches//wordplays

~peace~

thanx for the feed back mayne...

uppin this shit

uppin this

Voted For: Da Jokah

harda punchez plus that dirty south line killed itso u got my vote

uppin...

uppin this shit

its thug bitch... and uppin...

Voted For: ruff_tuff_thug

to be honest ruff took it with punches man the other guy was weak on that but he had stucture and wordplay but ruff had way better punches and metas peace

Voted For: Da Jokah

ayo i take a puff of tha droh..load up and iam ready to ride,
grab ma stuff and i go...enter tha room u all ready to hide//
^un unh, no not tight.
your open micz should be closed...and same wit cha mouth,
nigga u aint dirrty u jus west..stop thinkin u from da south//
^funny but wordage could have been maneuvered more cleverly
Iam from tha city of Queenz..were we kill niggas by all meenz,
were we got crime scenes...and blast niggas who be feenz//
^shut the hell up.
yo nigga u a feen to ma lyricz..matta fact u jus ugly,
ruff tuff thug haha u hear-in-this..tell me wat a thug be//
^damn this verse sucks so far...
i put fear in bitches like u...i can see tha fear commiin,
iam a nasty nigga..i bust in ya ear..so u can Hear me commin'//
^this other verse tonna have to be terrible for you to win this battle...
haha ya lyrics aint feelin u ..u got betraid like a snitch,
and nigga its ova iam surious iam a have u laid like yo bitch//
^best lines, but still sub-par

rufftuffthug

yo you again this time i'll realy kill yoou faggot ass da jokah...
stand back and cry bitch and watch how and i fuckin smoke
ya...
^not clever...
you aint a rapper or a poet you a little wannab...
your gay and helpless thats why you stand next to me...
^damn Jokah got a chance...
your interrests are basketball i dont see rap...
its prolly cuz you cant rap and you suck that bad...
^OMG come on that was terrible!
your a yung bitch with old ass skillz...
i give fuckas like you hits abd bitches thrillz...
^Don't know about all this...
yo ur crew is the bloodz funny cuz all i see is blood...
stand back and fuck off before you get cut...
^
i'll kill yo family yo mutha and take yo fuckin gut...
i'll kill you and rape you mutha fuckin slut...

Both these verses were terrible. Both need to work on wordplay,metas,flow and whatever other element of good freestyle there is cause yall need work on them all. Both was terrible but it's a tight battle...Jokah's was least terrible so he wins. He was consistent at least and THUG started gettin real horrible in the middle and stayed so through the end of his verse. Couldn't even finish critiquin bar by bar. Work on it, and DON'T FORGET TO VOTE ON MY BATTLES!!! Check the signature...\/

Voted For: Da Jokah

DA. had ok flow, punches were SLIGHTLY better, The intro needs some work, structure was better i could follow u on it!

Ruff. Your intro was weak, u had some alright punches, flow was ok. U got me lost on ya verses... structure was very weak

both of u was pretty much shit talk'n eachother.. nothing special u need to play with ya WORDS man, Make urselves laugh and us when u put yo shit down

-vote goes to DA

Voted For: Da Jokah

both verses were pretty much equal except for some aspects.......jokah showed some metaphores and a better rhyme scheme then thug did.....and thug showed 1 personal throughout his whole verse....the rest of thugs verse was pretty much basic it didnt even rhyme at some points.......but none the less it's voting time and i'd have to give this battle to Da Jokah simply because he came wit some metaphores his verse flowed all the way through....jokah also structured his verse well it was easy to read and he basically just came harder then his opponent in this battle so my vote goes to........

Vote: Da Jokah