¿MyStErIoUs? vs creaTivitie
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 04:02 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

¿MyStErIoUs? has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 03:03 AM.

look at his name he thinks hes creative...
...he has no style, his shit is basic
lets face it,he should pace it..
...before he gets knocked out of this whole rap game
his record doesnt even show, he must be ashamed...
...its not us to blame, then he got no fame

lol srry that was pathetic im ina hurry heh

creaTivitie has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 03:20 AM.

Yup if you read down the side it says…wack mc becuz that is wat he is


Within the depths of my brain I hold your life or death`
A physical feature not none to man…that’s all that’s left`
Competion is wat you claimed to be…kid WTF happened`
Know your position in this game…you shouldn’t be rappin`
Me im the creator.da man who got more wins then u got post`
Could have stood a chance but failed in defeet…bitch ur toast`

Wow that was truly a wack eneding but most defently more than enuf for this kid….sorry I no you expected more from me but hay…wat more can I say


by the way he only got about 29 post and i got 33 wins

i win ...yeah yeah....thenks kid...i actually thought that you were an alias....lol i guess i was wrong

Voted For: creaTivitie

Creative got my vote
he did have a more unique style
n his flow was better pretty much everything
else was da same needed more wordplay n punches
but overall good verse n M u need 2 write more shit
v/Creative
vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

yeh ima herb...... but hey i need to get better i think if i wasnt in such a rush i would be a lot better but it was fun....

yup it was fun...you got alil potientail...thats always good

uppin for votes.....................................

votes comon............

were are the votes at ....come on it aint that hard to vote is it

Voted For: creaTivitie

give it 2 Creative his flow was
more original n it was a overall good flow
plus M yo shit was
real basic need original punches
need sum wordplay n metas etc..
overall good drops
give a honest vote on da battles in my sig

Voted For: ¿MyStErIoUs?

i give this one to M
i think that his verse was ok...
i like the fact that he wasnt afraid to
go up against you....
he could use a lil more word play though...
u got a lot of work to do tho...
My Vote :M

Voted For: ¿MyStErIoUs?

from experince..i agree
it was good verses u guy could both use some work...
more metas need more wordplay...nice intro M and both of you ...prctice makes perfect
<marquee>my vote Mysterious</marquee>

Voted For: creaTivitie

Creativitie got this because he had A punch, which is in the second bar..the other guy didnt have any punches at all...just ramblin on about nuthin...and it flowed bad...the structure was wierd too...thats probably what fucked up the flow...good thing creativitie aint drop first...he wouldve probably wasted something on this.....

v/creativitie

uppin comon

wow this is crazy kid why are you voting for your self...that is crazy....check the ip address it is the same...wow that is funny hahahahahahalol that is crazy........

Voted For: creaTivitie

i voted for creativitie because he had betta structure and personals the other guys wasnt good at all. and i like the wackmc thing u did i was thinkin bout doin the same thing in one of my battles a while ago but now if i use it they gon say im bitin or somtin lol fuck it i might do it anyways.

yall should return the favor on my battle and vote an honost opinion its only 1 bar so shouldnt take long to vote.

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wtf are u talking bout i only have one account ur on crack

Voted For: creaTivitie

CREATIVITIE: Great structure and flow, aight punches could've came a bit harder, good personal "Me im the creator.da man who got more wins then u got post"

MYSTERIOUS: aight structure, good flow, punches came off weak, not really any personals, room to improve

my vote: creativitie