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Status 08-28-04 03:44 AM

WORDPLAYA vs creaTivitie
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 04:34 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 08-28-04 03:58 AM

WORDPLAYA has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 03:58 AM.

WORDPLAYA 08-28-04 04:04 AM

cum on 'Sacramento is his hometown team
so in are 'suits' ima ten he couldn't beat me wit his 'KINGS' *
ya 'Class sic' wut da fuck u do play ya lyrics bitch
if we was runnin 4 'Vice' Pres u couldn't 'hold on wit 'Grips' **
6 lines u kno u garbage so i got da last laugh
n i'll just 'kill u wit MULTIplication' so dey get da 'Aftermath'

his krew Class Sic
*Sacramento Kings in cards dey have suits
**Vice Grips hold on 2 things tight

System 08-28-04 04:14 AM

creaTivitie has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 04:14 AM.

Status 08-28-04 04:15 AM

Wow im killing this kid…you don’t even no how fun it is

As I’m applying this…I manifest and scar the mad scientist`
…this herbish pussy keeps on posting his vagina spits……`
1 of da best on da site & still haven’t took time to fully elevate`
fake ass fly weight, u cant even leave da ground, watch me levitate`
…….I stay timid as you try and mimick my gimmick………`
ur just a blemish while I diminish and surpass my normal limit`


aight this was another weak freestye but im pretty sure thatw as all I needed….

Logic The Goonie 08-28-04 04:24 AM

Voted For: creaTivitie

yo this wasnt even close.

wordplaya-
first bar: i get it but you didnt use the wordplay right...5/10
second bar: i get this also but again you didnt use the wordplay right...5/10
third bar: okay maybe its me, but maybe its you, incorrect use of wordplay....5/10
total=15/30

Create-
first bar: ehh not that good but ok meta...6/10
second bar: lol funny nice personal....8/10
third bar: blah...self glorification.....5/10
total=19/30

based on just this battle..i say you both need to elevate. but create i know you can do waaaaaaay better. RTF (links in da sig)

v//creaTivitie

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

Status 08-28-04 04:28 AM

uppin for votes....................................

Status 08-28-04 11:40 AM

uppin f or votes...........can we get some or wat.

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 11:43 AM

Voted For: creaTivitie

Creative...Hands Down!
WORDPLAYA, Do As Ya Name Says Dogg n Play Around With Words, Experiment On Diffrent Styles, Use Harder Punches n Add Humour, Improve On Ya Strucutre Too...

Creative, Ya Verse Was Okay, U Had A Few Nice Metas n Punches, The Same As Wordplaya Tho, Step Ya Game Up..

No Disrespect, Much Propps, Keep Holdin It Down......

Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles
!!1!!

Status 08-28-04 11:44 AM

ididnt even try........i just spit it out of my mouth and put it on the cpu...those vereseonly took like 5 mins to do...lol

Turnheads 08-28-04 06:28 PM

Voted For: creaTivitie

This battle was close the verses.. short as hell but to the point, creativ got the better of this battle.. my vote

Status 08-28-04 07:08 PM

uppin for votes....all inneed is 2 more votes.......were they at

Status 08-29-04 01:01 AM

uppoin for votes........................................

Logic The Goonie 08-29-04 07:18 AM

since when did i start d/r him?! w/e ill let it slide this time but next time im pimp slapping strobe..lol

Status 08-29-04 01:13 PM

uppin for votrs........can we just edn this............plz

Status 08-29-04 07:36 PM

uppin for votes.........................................

WORDPLAYA 08-30-04 12:23 AM

we still uppin 4 votes so please
cum n give a honest vote ya

Status 08-30-04 03:56 PM

uppin for votes./..........plze vote ..........

Skippa 08-30-04 04:01 PM

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

nice wordplay n punches...espacially ur first bar, that was jus took mah vote

Status 08-30-04 07:14 PM

why is this gettin slept on can i get some votes or wat......some one plze vote...

Turnheads 08-30-04 11:04 PM

I'll up it for ya..

Hey could ya drop a line in my battle in tha sig.. No disrespect.. just vote the truth.

50Cal. 08-30-04 11:32 PM

Voted For: creaTivitie

ok wordplay opener had potential but was worded wrong here other punches aint really hit and ender was weak flow was a little off also a ok verse 4/10
creative good flow and wordplay here ok opener second bar was slick i liked that ender good wordplay again nice vocab and structure throughout a 7/10

Status 08-31-04 02:11 AM

uppin for votes.......uppin for votes............,.,

Status 08-31-04 09:08 PM

uppin al i need is for oyu people to stop viewing it and vote.........

Sik Wit It 08-31-04 10:42 PM

Voted For: creaTivitie

creaTivite won this..punches were harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

WORDPLAYA yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok..

Status 09-01-04 06:12 PM

uppin for votes........uppin for votes/./.......uppin for votes

WORDPLAYA 09-02-04 10:33 AM

thanx 4 ya votes can we get sum more honest votes ya

Status 09-02-04 06:11 PM

upppiiinnn for votees.................................

Abraxas 09-02-04 06:15 PM

Voted For: creaTivitie

damn both are wack as fuck but it was iight i though creativite could have came harder but o well
Word: yours was basic not any striong punches or personals at all you need to work on that... also you had ok flow and strucutre

Creativite: yours was not the best i've seen but its iight yours was good anyways you had some ok personals and good punches you had some lines that made me laugh

Vote: creativeit


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