Empire vs Elusiv G
 

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Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 09:12 AM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 09:14 AM.

1and 2 you not ''gifted'' ya record ''twisted''like 'retarded hands'(1
'herb to me' whack in the '1st degree' somebody 'charge this man'(2
Under his 'name' tell this 'lame' is outta of his 'weight class'(3)
Like 'black' strippers the 'whack shit he deliver' is 'straight ass'
From the 'UK' no i think 'you gay' like 'Ru Paul'(4)
Cant 'see me' could never 'beat me' like a rap with 'blue balls'
(5)

1)retarded people always keep the hands twisted up
2)he should be charged with a crime for being so trash
3)it says flyweight under his name
4)hes from the uk and ru paul is a famous homo cross dresser
5)you get blue balls from never 'beating nothing' getting no pussy or masturbating will give you it

You been placin posts all day, in relation to cool edit
Ur dumbass cant figure out how to work it, r u dyslexic?

MC's like Empire, need to go home and retire
1000 plus posts..... a vet?......nope jus plump roast

rise, strive, elevate to reach or comprehend ma size
U cud neva top this, cos tha pussy u came out of belonged to a bitch

yo 1st line he placed 5 posts today askin every 1 how to download kazaa, sayin his mic dnt work etc.

hes made a 100posts but no wind=s or losses

and quite simply his mams a ho, all of y'all know Empires mama dnt lie!!!lol

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Voted For: Empire

Aight, Not The Best Battle In The World Ya'll...An EMPIRE I Dont Like The Way You Had Too Explain Everyrhtin, But In A Way I'm Glad You Did Cause It Made Your Verse Hot...

You Had Better Punches, Better Vocab, Better Structure, Better Metas An Better Wordplay...

Hands Down You Got My Vote...!!


Yo Elusiv, Ya Rhymes Was Okay, Elevate, Express Better Wordplay n Boroaden Yur Vocab, The Things You Say Are oo Common n Didnt Really Make Me Take Note...

Keep Up The Rhymes Ya'll...

Good Lookin


Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles

Broaden** Your** Too** ...Sory Bout The Typos Ya'll, I Try n Type Too Fast n Basically I Fail..

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This was feedback posted for Empire
 

Us A Bitch Made Nigga Battling These Noods To Try And Make Ya Record Good Or Look Better Hahahahahah Lame Ass Clown.............

?face Me Bitch!!!!!

plus u'r record is 15-6................

with 12 noods win......

6 vets loses hahahahahaha

Voted For: Empire

Elusiv G
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was decent.. none of ur punches connected.. u attempted personals, but they didnt hit hard at all..

Empire
structure is good.. flow is on target.. you had a few multis.. wordplay was dope.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. both had a few multis.. neither had good personals.. Empire had better wordplay, as well as more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Empire gets my vote..

VOTE - EMPIRE

Please return the favor with an honest vote here..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172
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Voted For: Empire

BREAKDOWN

Elusiv's Verse

You been placin posts all day, in relation to cool edit
Ur dumbass cant figure out how to work it, r u dyslexic?
good line......7/10
MC's like Empire, need to go home and retire
1000 plus posts..... a vet?......nope jus plump roast
Made me laugh.......8/10
rise, strive, elevate to reach or comprehend ma size
U cud neva top this, cos tha pussy u came out of belonged to a bitch.......weak finisher 6/10

Overall=21/30

Empires Verse

1and 2 you not ''gifted'' ya record ''twisted''like 'retarded hands' 'herb to me' whack in the '1st degree' somebody charge this man'
nice metaphores flowed well.....8/10
Under his 'name' tell this 'lame' is outta of his 'weight class'
Like 'black' strippers the 'whack shit he deliver' is 'straight ass'
best of the 3 lines......9/10 sikness
From the 'UK' no i think 'you gay' like 'Ru Paul'
Cant 'see me' could never 'beat me' like a rap with 'blue balls'
kina played.....7/10

Overall=24/30

Both verses were kinda short which made it harder to judge but empire came with more multies...and had a personal too.....elusiv had some funny lines.....both verses were original, and were structured well but i just felt Empires more so my vote goes to empire.....

Vote: Empire

return the favor vote honest......peace n wun

Voted For: Empire

aight this was on the level of average, empire took the flow and the structur, the G's shit was good but it didnt have the flow at all.
Empire also got most the punches in my opnion.

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Voted For: Empire

aight i would say empire took this one because he had harder punches and a better flow...

Elusiv G~you tried to throw a couple punches but they fell short and ur structure didnt help out either...you should read a tutorial to help you elevate~3/10

Empire~you had some ok punches and a personal... your structure is ok but could use some work in my opinion~7/10

v/empire