QBsmasher vs DrasticMeasureZ
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 01:54 PM

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yo how about 10 lines mayne is ya down with that

yeah 10 lines is ok...i meant to put 10 lines max that my bad

its all good lets go

word 10 line...you aight with that? Lets do it.

QBsmasher has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 01:27 PM.

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 01:30 PM.

When I drop the verse, Ill leave this DJ without a clue
Lets see if he can swizz beats and drag on with a bar or two
I dont even have to throw head shots, I just ribbed you homie
Your whole verse will probably sound like a tribute towards me
If this dude was raw, I just cooked him cause he got cracked on
He aint throwin punches, he blows more heads than a beauty salon
Wannabe Emcees use me as their guiding light like the north star
Thats why for years i been crashing them into reifs and sand bars
Allow me to "slide" in and dialte your "iris" with my lyrical fame
This "black balloon" is a "long way down" and noone knows his "name"*

*The quotations are 5 goo goo dolls songs.

Punches right n' left, disect your spine~n~neck, it's like 'poachers-against-humane-society' how I be 'killin~this~VET' // 1 (Rated R.I.P)
Ya knees shakin' nervous, I be feedin' on earth's surface, I'm on your 'girl' like 'gynecologist', Dr. drastic at your 'cervix'//2(service...haha)
My word's~purpose to serve this verse~perfect, to hit~wit~shit~viscous, so 'sick' that I got the nurse~workin//3
Verbs and wordplay, inflate murder-rates, de-face you wit words like 'cerebral adhesives' cuz they 'stick to ya brain' and decay//4
You might as well 'cuff~my~ventricles' to put me in 'cardiac~arrest', cuz at your rate... you battlin me like you 'missed~dracula', a 'mis~stake'//5(stake to kill dracula)
You'd need to 'ignite~carosine~vomit' just to 'spit~yaself~a~flame' and need to buy Hip Hop Edition Scrabble just to 'give~yourself~a~name'//6
Breakin' my 'paintings' the only way you bend my 'frame', you'd prob go as far as cuttin yaself in '16 bits' and claim ya 'in~the~game'//7(16 bit video game...Sega?)
You 'angered' my verbs and lines, so they swingin punches and red-faced, that's what I call mad rhymes//8
Your victory be denied, with these lines you'd need to put '___________' many times to get me closer to 'flatlines'//9(heart rate machine)
Call me the 'merk~doner', you lost bitch own~up, your rhymes so 'shit' I didn't really think that 'HTML' code could also submit such a bad 'aroma'//10

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

punches: dm
personals: none
multis: dm
metas:dm
vocab: dm
complexity: dm

vote: dm

hey no beef but he came really hard......an dit was kinda one sided

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damn cuz lol....you wrote that all last week huh. All kinda crazy lines and slashes and dashes and shit...ha ha here you go.

Take out the dashes, hacks, slashes and underlines your left with little content
You know QB smashes, hacks, bashes, and sends this Virgin vet to the convent

i kinda like that mayne i dont know theres somthin wrong with me by using different style ok i'll take da slahes and da bashes out mayne

~peace~

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

its ova drastic took it love da wordplay ya fuckin rhyme schemes were hott(the csrabble shit was bangin) u changin ya style and gettin better who eva givin u tips mayne give em props cuz its workin drastic got dis one

qb smasher u was iight but ya wrds were s0o simple u used the wrd two compared to his gynacologist and thas jus one wrd drastic won

vote=drastic

lol yeah cause i freestyled...he wrote that shit all last week...imma get this DQed...dude be cheatin too much.

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oh hot hot hot... damn... I was feelin' it Drastic... like whoa!

Ya knees shakin' nervous, I be feedin' on earth's surface, I'm on your 'girl' like 'gynecologist', Dr. drastic at your 'cervix'//2(service...haha)
I'm still laughing at that shit... ooh...

that was hot... killer...

QB... that's aight... you could have done alot better...
FAV LINE: He aint throwin punches, he blows more heads than a beauty salon
QB Smasher u need to elevate a lil' more...

pz

yo qb y u startin shit with him and me...he poste du posted....his was hot....just get over there is always next time pm me let me kno whats good?

2-0 uppin

GET ME DQ-ED BITCH U LOST ACCEPT YO FATE freestlye i do freestyle myself wheres da fuckin mic so i can shut him up damn it!

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

that shit was hot like fiya, u ate this nigga like Jeffery Domor and shit,better everything, open,metas,multis,vocab,wordplay, and close
so come on the v goes 2 DM aight -1-

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yo QB I'ont kno u and all that shit but yo the nigga got u ain't no reason ta hate the nigga cause his drop was lovely and 1 more thing my v is gonna get DQ'd cause I ain't kno we was in the same crew when I dropped the v my bad son but he did eat ur drop tho aight -1-

lol Infallable you had a worthless waste of a post...and then made yourself sound like an idiot. No worries im off this site...its poorly ran, and its not worth my time.

Fine Get Out Mayne We Dont Need U And We Dot Need Yo Wackness Go Get Da Fuck Out Bitch!

Voted For: QBsmasher

Them was some insane metas in there cuz, about the goo goo dolls and the opener was insane with the RR. You be comin up wit some creative stuff which keeps the reader tuned in I like that shit cuz. Your flow is pretty good for the most part, you can go wit it and shit. Your wordplay is always superb also which makes it a better overall verse. Good shit

Whoa drasticmeasurez that shit is all out of wack cuz, why you got all that other stuff in there. I cant really get what your doin wit it cat. You did throw some punches and shit, which was pretty nice, yo wordplay aint really that good tho cuz. Nice vocab that was a plus, and some metas an shit. I just aint really feel the whole style you came wit cuz. One

Voted For: QBsmasher

i give it to smasher by wordplay and the other guy had to many ~ n shit stucture was ok but ya punches to 2 smasher peace yall
v/smasher

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Voted For: QBsmasher

QBsmasher: Pretty good verse man, you have amazing wordplay and a nice way with metas nice man.

Your flow is always right on point and goes from bar to bar well. Wordplay and punchlines go together, a few multies would help you though.

Metas you are really nice on, the beauty salon and the goo good dolls stuff is nice good job man.

You didnt come with any personals though that would have helped you a lot.

Good verse though, it was consistent.

DrasticmeasureZ: You need to stop with all the dashes and so forth it really throws off what you are trying to do. Keep it basic and you sound a lot better.

Your flow wasnt really pickin up with me. I just didnt see how you were trying to word it sorry.

Punches you were pretty nice with, I liked the opening of your verse, got a lil wack in places but it was decent.

Metas I think is a place you can work on, as well as personals you didnt have any. As well as your multies were non-existant as well.

I thought QBsmasher was a lil more consistent and he just battled right with it. It doesnt take much effort to win, big big ups to both of you all though.

Voted For: QBsmasher

Drastic, get rid of tha stupid slash shit, you had some nice wordplay, aight disses, structure was fuckin in the asshole, and your flow was fucked to. mettas were off the chain though.

Advice to Drastic: work on your structure cuz..thats the main thing dont use slashes.

QbSmaher, you also had good wordplay and good disses, you structure was much better and easier to read, and it flowed bnetter to. OVerall QB gets my vote cuz he won more of the categories to me.. this was a damn good battle though.

advice to QbSmasher: try to get more personal and shit....

Ya'll return the favor...........

uppin for 1 more vote

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Drastic

Punches right n' left, disect your spine~n~neck, it's like 'poachers-against-humane-society' how I be 'killin~this~VET' // 1 (Rated R.I.P)
^ha nice
Ya knees shakin' nervous, I be feedin' on earth's surface, I'm on your 'girl' like 'gynecologist', Dr. drastic at your 'cervix'//2(service...haha)
^tight sh*t.
My word's~purpose to serve this verse~perfect, to hit~wit~shit~viscous, so 'sick' that I got the nurse~workin//3
^eh, ok I guess
Verbs and wordplay, inflate murder-rates, de-face you wit words like 'cerebral adhesives' cuz they 'stick to ya brain' and decay//4
^whoohoo! damn like that one a lot.
You might as well 'cuff~my~ventricles' to put me in 'cardiac~arrest', cuz at your rate... you battlin me like you 'missed~dracula', a 'mis~stake'//5(stake to kill dracula)
^stretched lines man. good play on words though.
You'd need to 'ignite~carosine~vomit' just to 'spit~yaself~a~flame' and need to buy Hip Hop Edition Scrabble just to 'give~yourself~a~name'//6
^okizzle
Breakin' my 'paintings' the only way you bend my 'frame', you'd prob go as far as cuttin yaself in '16 bits' and claim ya 'in~the~game'//7(16 bit video game...Sega?)
^cool,cool
You 'angered' my verbs and lines, so they swingin punches and red-faced, that's what I call mad rhymes//8
Your victory be denied, with these lines you'd need to put '___________' many times to get me closer to 'flatlines'//9(heart rate machine)
^average line
Call me the 'merk~doner', you lost bitch own~up, your rhymes so 'shit' I didn't really think that 'HTML' code could also submit such a bad 'aroma'//10
^phew, that's some funky sh*T.



QBsmasher

When I drop the verse, Ill leave this DJ without a clue
Lets see if he can swizz beats and drag on with a bar or two
^decent
I dont even have to throw head shots, I just ribbed you homie
Your whole verse will probably sound like a tribute towards me
^nope.
If this dude was raw, I just cooked him cause he got cracked on
He aint throwin punches, he blows more heads than a beauty salon
^this was cool but wasn't no hard hitting punch.
Wannabe Emcees use me as their guiding light like the north star
Thats why for years i been crashing them into reifs and sand bars
^hmm, intresting lines.
Allow me to "slide" in and dialte your "iris" with my lyrical fame
This "black balloon" is a "long way down" and noone knows his "name"*
^If I knew who the goo goo dolls were You'd get more credit for this, but you still get credit cause you snapped with the songs.

Damn this is tough. Liked both verses. Drastic had more than QB and his sh*t was good. QB just didn't have no punches and Drastic did. QB's wordplay was cool, but Drastic beats him in every category.

Don't forget to return the favor yalls mans dudes. 50 characters.

Voted For: QBsmasher

sTRUCTURE - QB, DRASTIC, NO OFFENSE, BUT YOURS WAS HORRIBLE..
pUNCHES - TIE, BOTH WERE REALLY GOOD, I LIKED THE REATIVITY IN QB'S FIRST BAR, AND DRASTIC HAD A SHIT LOAD OF STUFF, SO I CAN'T CALL IT..
PERSONALS - nONE, I DIDN'T SEE ANY THAT HIT..
VOCAB - TIE, NONE REALLY, NORMAL EVERYDAY WORDS THAT RHYMED..
MULTIES - AGAIN, JUST A BASIC RHYMES SCHEME FROM BOTH, PRETTY AVERAGE, CAN'T CALL IT..
OVERALL - ADDING UP THE CATEGORIES, OBVIOUSLY I COME TO THE CONCLUSION THAT QB SMASHER WON THIS, BUT BARLEY.. ONE OTHER CATEGORY, I WOULDN'T OF EVEN VOTED DRASTIC, BUT YO STRUCTURE WAS MAN, I DIDN'T LIKE IT AT ALL, EVERY THING ELSE AS YOU SEE WAS A TIE, SO v/QBSMASHER..

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