qbsmasher vs ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
 

Battle Rules:

3 bars....15 minutes 2 post
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no beef


good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 02:30 PM

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QBsmasher has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 02:01 PM.

~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 02:05 PM.

good luck mayne and no already written 1 month shit....lol u kno what i mean lmao rofl

Im like steven speilberg give me an idea and I "deliver the film"
He couldnt catch the picture if he was in harry potters realm

I get so much in in one breath youll be like prodigy breathe
I cut his lines off and watch him fall like shirts with no sleeves

I drop shit and its instant classics like super mario original
Your just taken off the shelves like the atari 64 visional

qb couldnt beat me in text if he was a graduate of ''havard''...| after i murk him he will chang his name like ''s. carter''...| b/c this one punch will knock u out faster than roy jones vs ''tarvar''....| 1

all he is , is ''jive-n-talk''...| your no harder than a ''dried-old-cock''...|ill have this kid like the stock market the way he'll be closed at ''5-0' clock''...| 2 hahaha

quik finisher..... switched style

this niggas bars are mor eplan than a ''cleaned-fridge''
u could nt be a *qbsmasher* if u flew a plane into ''queens-bridge''.............over

uppin for votes nice drop........ good luck..........

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

lol lol lol dayum kustum if i knew u going to merk him dis bad i would gave u da spot to battle in da 1st time

qb u got yo ass fucked up u battled me got yo ass whopped and battle kustum dats what i call murder!

qb u had good punches but dayum mayne it didnt reall hit hard but nice though

qb keep doing yo thang mayne
kustum u keep doing yo thang shit mayne 5-0 its just roun da corner lol

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lol whyd you do that you pre-written bitch...you just got both of your votes DQed. PLus with what your buddy PMed to me...you got your battle DQed ha ha...make it less obvious.

damn thats mean.....and fucked up 1-0 still uppin

nah its str8 i hate nas i dont like hima t all...but its cool if thats how u saw it...1-1 still uppin

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

Kustum Hands Down.....
Dope Punches, Nice Wordplay n He Went Hard From Start To Finish....

QB, Your Verse Was OKAY....I Used Steven Speilberg In One Of My Verses Tho, I Know Ya Not Bite'n, I'm Juss Sayin....

But Yea, Up Ya Game QB, Go Harder n Use Humour In Your Punches, An Up Your Vocab Too..

Hands Down KUSTUM Wins..

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

Kustum: The opener was ok, filled wit meh punches, and multis made it better...The second bar was ass...The closer was nice tho...nice play off the name...and the structure for it was good...the structure for the other ones was ass.

QB: Wack verse son...I wasnt feelin the punches dog...second one made no sense...and the third was weak too...one of your other drops was better than this...

v/Kustum

there is jabba the hut again...lol get off my posts cuz. I dont care if you did vote for me on the other one. You dont make any sense, and your 8-13 your wack and fuck to be callin someone wack.

3-1 still uppin keep votes coming

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

ok dope kustom most your shit is that i saw so far good flow structure still needs help vocab good punches hard as fuck second bar was dope too good ass ender also good opener this was dope your best so far a 9.2/10
qb good drop but your punches were overshadowed here nice closer opener was ok also vocab was good as well as stucture and flow and i liked your verse nice drop a 7/10

4-1 still uppin 1 vote....lets go....................

drastic didnt have enough feedback so 3-1 still uppin

3-1 still uppin..........................................

Voted For: QBsmasher

Dis cat QBsmasher just come with some funny stuff. I liked the punches about the deliver the film. I get he was using that in conjunction with kustom image. The wordplay was sikk too thru the whole battle I like that. It helps to hype up ya punchline and makes it sound better. The last bar was funny as shit too, about the atari 64.

Kustom aint really throwin any punches to connect with. Played stuff that had been used, I seen some other battles with dis cat and queens bridge was used. Like some shit he put in there after he wrote the other part of the battle somewhere else. Need to work on ya flow and structure kid it just aint workin, no feelin it it sorry.

3-2 still uppin...........................................

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

i voted for kustum he was all around betta:

punches: kustum
wordplay: kustum
strucure: kustum
flow: both
multis: kustum

he took dis battle wit ease

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thanks for vote s-s..... still uppi n its 4-2

yo that vote is broken down just cuz u aint get a catagory doesnt mean anything.................. wow ur a herb 3-2 still uppin [5-2]

Voted For: QBsmasher

QBsmasher..yo shit was good..nice structure..ncie flow..and yo punches were~pretty hard enuff...
Ku$tUm..yo shit was good too..tha structure suck'd..& yo punches were hard too...

This was feedback posted for QBsmasher
 

just feedback, qb- style was simple and had a few hard-hittin' punches.. ku$tum image- ur structure can be a lil' annoyin' but it would sound better if you say it, so i think u won plus ur punches did hit harder but y'all both seem like y'all were missin' complexity (kustum u don't have to put quotations around rhymin' words, better if u used it for metaphors and wordplay), that's feedback.. good luck to the two..

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

ok:
kustum~nice verse,very creative punches, liked your flow, but structure was off a bit,nice name diss, liked your second and third bars the best, boxing lines are played a little, but delivered nice strong punches here, good job
QB~nice verse as well, liked your last bar,but i just dont think your verse was as strong or creative as kustum's, no hate, because i respect you both, good job both ...1

Voted For: QBsmasher

Not a whole lot of content to judge, so you needed to come just right to the point with it here.

QBsmasher you were nice with starting out with a personal(im not sure many people can get it though) that I felt was really nice. Starting off the battle is a strong point to have. Your wordplay also is a strong point I notice of yours.

NIce flow and punches were hittin really hard. You dont seem to use multies in your battle for some reason it helps to add to complexity and as well flow, you should consider them.

Kustom Image: You need to work on your wordplay, you dont use any at all in your battles. This helps to hype up your punches and makes them hit harder. I felt QB had harder punches becaus he started right off with a personal that was pretty complex. I noticed the last one you had was a personal but it didnt connect well (as I already heard it from nas)

The flow was also a lil off, your structure just needed some work to clear that up. Some of the multies you were attempting as well, really werent good rhymes. You get a few points for trying them though...but you still get my props just elevate.

Voted For: QBsmasher

okay, Kustum...good drop, I was feeling your shit, but those dashes gotta go son.lol and that dried ole cock shit was fuckiin whack if your ask me. but overall that was a pretty decent drop, coulda increased wordplay though i thought.

QBsmsher your structure was better, and that one bar was the highlight of the battle, the umm...1st bar. Neither attempted to get that personal, or atleast i didn't see any personalt hat really stood out in my personal opinion, but this was atight battle very very close, i give this to qbsmaher though, becuase his flowed better, and was an easier read, to be honest i feel that ya'll were pretty even in punchlines.

GL to both of you.