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Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 06:35 PM

sHoTTaBoY vs tha flash
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-31-04 at 06:35 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 06:38 PM

Yo FLASH, I'm Bout To Drop...
You Got 15 Mins My Nigguh, Make It Hot...
Good Luck

System 08-28-04 06:39 PM

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 06:39 PM.

System 08-28-04 06:40 PM

Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 06:40 PM.

Tha Flash 08-28-04 06:52 PM

Look Nigga....now What I Spit Is Crazy I'll Make Ya Ass Holla Boy,
And Leave Ya Ass With A Loss Cause I'm A Hotta Boy//
While I'm Spitting You'll Be On The Ground Like The 45 Shot Ya Boy,
U A Light Weight Nigga Just Look Under Ya Name//
Faggot Talk Shit To Me And I'll Rock Ya Frame,
I Ain't A Surgeon But I'll Still Take Out Ya Brain//
If U Ain't Realized Yet Nigga I'm Insane,
I'll Plant Ya Head In A Field Like It's A Sugar Cane//
But Nigga I'm Hot So Don't Test Me,
Cause I'll Leave Ya Blood Bottled Up Like A Jug Of Nestle//

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 06:58 PM

Check It....

...I Got Guns That'll Leave You 'HOLY' Like The Good Book../
I'ma One Man Mobb n Got Bitches Like You 'SHOOK'../
Theres A 'SLIM' Chance Of Jackin Me But If You Did ''I just Wouldnt Give A Fuck''../

Nigguh I Got The CRIS on ROCKS n You Runnin Low (on) CASH.../
I'ma Fuck You Up Worse Than The Effects Of A PLANE-CRASH.../
I Got Compensation 4 'Wreckin' You Sorta Like WHIPLASH../
I'm Bout To Open Up A Chain Of Stores In Dedication 4 You Called Stomp-n-Dash../
You Should Never Have Romped Cause It Was Over Too FAST../
You Passed Out From The Font n I Didnt Even Have To BLAST../

Yo Lil Man, Stop All The Small Talk I Could Have Done Wit'chu In The Same Way Kids Deal With ANTS../
This Boys Raps Are A Corny n Soundin Like A Remasterd Version Of 'SAVE THE LAST DANCE'

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 07:00 PM

Nigguh I Got The CRIS on ROCKS n You Runnin Low (on) CASH... <<< CB4, Chris Rock...Low Cash, Ya Know???
^^^
Juss Thought I'd Clear That Up Incase It Didnt Make Sense To people

Uppppppppppppin 4 Votes Yall!!

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 07:37 PM

Upppppppppppppin 4 Votes On My Battles Ya'll!!!

I'll Return The Favor With Honest Votes, As Will Tha Flash I'm Sure...

Tha Flash 08-28-04 07:45 PM

yeah, i know this nigga smoked me, i need to elevate, it was a lopsided battle, but i'll give him his props, uppin for votes

M&rk 08-28-04 07:45 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY



Look Nigga....now What I Spit Is Crazy I'll Make Ya Ass Holla Boy,
And Leave Ya Ass With A Loss Cause I'm A Hotta Boy//
^^^personal, but not hard punch, only thing of yours i liked at all though

____
shotta-
...I Got Guns That'll Leave You 'HOLY' Like The Good Book../
I'ma One Man Mobb n Got Bitches Like You 'SHOOK'../
Theres A 'SLIM' Chance Of Jackin Me But If You Did ''I just Wouldnt Give A Fuck''../
^^^not too hot but decent wordplay, i dont like name play of famous people but its better than what the other cat did.

SHOTTA had more punches i liked.... try makin every line a decent punch and less fillers like.
You Should Never Have Romped Cause It Was Over Too FAST../
You Passed Out From The Font n I Didnt Even Have To BLAST../

still enough to win this one, but elevate both of you.

RETURN THE FAVOR ON MY marvolous battle. links in my sig. or if u got 5 wins, check out my e-dubz link. ite peace

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 10:23 PM

Uppppppin 4 More Votes Ya'll, Propps FLASH! Good Lookin My Nigguh!

Vote On My Battles Ya'll...All The Ones That Currently Open

Dirty Nigga 08-29-04 09:20 AM

Upppppin 4 More Votes Ya'll!!

Vote On My Battles n I'll Return The Favor With Honest Unbiased Well Explained Votes

P E A C E

Reflect 08-29-04 03:20 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

nice verse here by shottaboy, used some nice punches. n personals, and i felt he had a better structure and flow.

no hate flash, but i thought your verse was just too simple on the vocab part.

v/shottaboy

Dirty Nigga 08-31-04 07:51 AM

Thanx Ya'll, Much Appreciated, Holla Wit More Votes Ya'll

Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppin

Dirty Nigga 09-01-04 06:43 AM

Uppppppppppppin 4 More Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sik Wit It 09-02-04 09:32 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

sHoTTaBoY gets my vote hea..he came in hea did his thing..he had harder punches that landed n' shit..tha flow was 'aight'..structure was 'ok'...(dont space 'em out not unless you switchin styles)...but all 2gether he did his thing..basically gets my vote...

Dirty Nigga 09-03-04 08:41 AM

Uppppppppppin 4 More Votes

SoLe 09-03-04 09:39 AM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Flash......

your verse was ok....it was good solid....flowed well as i read it structured well.....it was original though....it lacked multies and complexity to it but other then that it had some solid attempts at a punch and i think there was one metaphore....(brain surgeon) or somethin like that but ne way....you had a good verse.....
on the other hand shotty's verse was more complex and it flowed better.....he had stronger vocab and more hard-hitting punches then you did.....his verse was structured well.....
and he used a creative style which was also what seperated this battle....my vote:Shotty

keen2B 09-03-04 09:47 AM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

oh shit that was tight nite
hands down shout'n at my boy
the flash needs a rain check hes inferior
ur check is torn


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