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Shabba Ranks vs world famous
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6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Damn, I got 62 credits :) Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-31-04 at 11:50 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
world famous has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 12:08 AM.
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Shabba Ranks has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 12:27 AM.
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You wack and battled Shabba cuz nobodies heard of you...
So this white boy ranks as high as his fuckin vertical... You the bad kid in the class, so of course Im gettin the upperhand... We can even have a rematch, Ill son you as many times as youve been banned*... Think this site's is wack, well its a damn shame... When i get in your league, the closest to the playoffs you'll get is punches off my name**... And you wonder why half this sites mad at you... Your the fag who brags about his wins....then battles newbs... And pulls bitchmade moves...You know what Im talkin about right? Lets just say, your not shuttin me down, your just gonna shutdown our site***... Plz, dont say shit, i kno ill have to explain so: * - He was banned from here like twice ** - He runs a league on original *** - If I'm correct, on original, he tried to shut down the site because he got de-smodded |
shabba said he'd beat me, but the rumor was he lied
u get no laughs.. but u could humorous and die.. you can't gain a rep, drop the luck & fame kid cuz cats cant even discern what ya fucking name is i hate u, wack bitch.. why is this man competing u could be a poetic expert & still not stanza beating .. fists to face - i'll leave ya dome checkered & dude even the system that checked in has a better record than u you suck - and battle wise you don't move kids so i show my wit thru the fact that i won't use it what mores he spittin? on the forum doors its written hardwood aint boners, its the fucking floor he's hitting.. you lose . |
Voted For: world famous
word dope ass battle that im prolly gunna bite off in the future.lol j.k. Shabba: structure was more than a lil bit fucked this time round, real nice punches tho. some of your punches were real blah tho. coulda used less personals, woulda helped prolly. nice metas blah blah blah you get the idea...nice verse......7.5/10 World famous: pure dopeness. real tight structure, and metas blah blah blah. punches were fuckin hilarious, i couldnt stop laughing coulda been more personal but real dope nonetheless. no wonder u undefeated.....8.25/10 shabba dont get down. ive seen you drop much better than this. world famous keep writin like that and you gunna take over the damn site.RTF(links in da sig) v//world famous |
This was feedback posted for world famous
you suck - and battle wise you don't move kids
so i show my wit thru the fact that i won't use it what mores he spittin? on the forum doors its written hardwood aint boners, its the fucking floor he's hitting.. ^that shit look familar. |
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Voted For: world famous
I cant vote but if I could I would vote for world famous shabba got destroyed |
^^oo shit I can vote I thought you had to have 5 wins anyways to explain more his verse was just betta dan shabba I like his opener anbd closer shabbas opener and closer wasnt that good and world had more punches and more person etc thats why he had my vote
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This was feedback posted for world famous
too lazy to vote so I'm jus peepin' polls. Tight battle. ....
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up....leave links.
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I hope you didnt say he had more personals....http://community.rapverse.com/images/icons/icon13.gif |
This was feedback posted for world famous
JUss checkin
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even the system that checked in has a better record than u
you suck - and battle wise you don't move kids so i show my wit thru the fact that i won't use it what mores he spittin? on the forum doors its written hardwood aint boners, its the fucking floor he's hitting.. ^ thats dopeness all those lnies |
Voted For: Shabba Ranks
You wack and battled Shabba cuz nobodies heard of you... So this white boy ranks as high as his fuckin vertical... You the bad kid in the class, so of course Im gettin the upperhand... We can even have a rematch, Ill son you as many times as youve been banned*... Think this site's is wack, well its a damn shame... When i get in your league, the closest to the playoffs you'll get is punches off my name**... ^^^liked this first half, then ya secound half was played and didn't hit hard. shabba said he'd beat me, but the rumor was he lied u get no laughs.. but u could humorous and die.. ^^^liked this, but thats it what mores he spittin? on the forum doors its written hardwood aint boners, its the fucking floor he's hitting.. ^^^this was ok, but didn't hit too hard. fists to face - i'll leave ya dome checkered & dude even the system that checked in has a better record than u ^^^ive seen this exact line, so nah, its played. world famous, u lose becuase of....... you suck - and battle wise you don't move kids so i show my wit thru the fact that i won't use it ^^^not a punch you can't gain a rep, drop the luck & fame kid cuz cats cant even discern what ya fucking name is ^^^on the right track, but u didnt' say why his name would effect that, cuz it wouldn't really. and that system one was played. so i gotta go wit shabba for more punches that hit. RETURN THE FUCKIN VOTE, ON ONE OF THE BATTLES IN MY SIG. I DONT VOTE FOR FUN. |
lol . im starting to see the difference between rb and rv .
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Voted For: world famous
V/ world He wasnt stretched...had witty punches...better wording...hit harder....and more overall complex verse....shabba didnt contend really =\ |
Voted For: Shabba Ranks
shabba came with better personals,structure was off but ya punches were better than wf...pretty straight punches from the both of you,was expecting alot more in terms of wordplay n content..world famous some of your rhyme scheme was really forced i don't like that in verses at all but you punches were good but for an overall solid verse with punches n flow ya verse jus was'nt good enough....srry shabba gotr this in my opinion... |
Voted For: world famous
my vote goes to world famous...he had sort of 'harder punches' than ranks...a nice structure...everything wasn't stretchy..and tha flow was pretty good too...shabba yo shit was a little ok..shit was stretchy~that is y didnt get my vote... |
Voted For: Shabba Ranks
shabba said he'd beat me, but the rumor was he lied u get no laughs.. but u could humorous and die.. ^first line not bad, but kinda lame.. second half made up for it.. so 6/10 you can't gain a rep, drop the luck & fame kid cuz cats cant even discern what ya fucking name is ^lame first half again seriously, other half even worse.. so 4/10 cuz at least it rhymed.. i hate u, wack bitch.. why is this man competing u could be a poetic expert & still not stanza beating .. ^u stepped it up, "i hate u" sounds like Baby Boy remake.. the more i think about it, *faints* other half, way better, 7/10 fists to face - i'll leave ya dome checkered & dude even the system that checked in has a better record than u ^first half, hell no.. don't repeat the "check" part, but lmao.. ha ha last segment brought it back to 8/10 lmfao you suck - and battle wise you don't move kids so i show my wit thru the fact that i won't use it ^very nice, world famous, u sproutin' nigga.. second half once again helpin' u out.. 8/10 what mores he spittin? on the forum doors its written hardwood aint boners, its the fucking floor he's hitting.. ^ i got this punch but it wasn't very effective, so i give it 7/10 cuz i liked the multis... good job, world famous.. 40/60 = 66.66% World famous You wack and battled Shabba cuz nobodies heard of you... So this white boy ranks as high as his fuckin vertical... ^the first line not bad at all.. the white boy and vertical part might go over people heads, but i got that.. lmfao plus u used ur name dissin' him.. creativity.. nice.. 8/10 You the bad kid in the class, so of course Im gettin the upperhand... We can even have a rematch, Ill son you as many times as youve been banned ^nice personal, very nice the banned part grabbed attention.. plus the upperhand, bad kid, part was very nice.. good job.. 7/10 Think this site's is wack, well its a damn shame... When i get in your league, the closest to the playoffs you'll get is punches off my name ^nice again, personal hit very well plus the punch.. it coulda been better but oh well, 6/10 And you wonder why half this sites mad at you... Your the fag who brags about his wins....then battles newbs... ^ha ha very good ha ha newbs part might not rhyme dependin' on the way u say it, but i got the point.. and funny.. lol 7/10 And pulls bitchmade moves...You know what Im talkin about right? Lets just say, your not shuttin me down, your just gonna shutdown our site ^better closer overall.. first half not well put but the second half makes up for it, therefore- 8/10 good job shabba ranks.. 36/50= 72% shabba ranks Shabba gets my vote, line by line break down proves it, both of y'all coulda worded some of y'all phrases a lil' better.. but it's over and done with.. nice punches both ways, and nice creativity from Shabba Ranks, the first bar.. personals lean more towards shabba side cuz he mentions world famous gettin' banned, lol, and tryna get the site shut down because he was removed from his mod position, lmfao, and it fell in the correct spot of your flow.. lmfao.. world famous yours flowed well but the material this time was off except one line was real tight.. anyways, take that advice and you'll be fine.. good luck with the battle y'all my vote's SHABBA RANKS.. ~*Lady Fiya*~ |
Voted For: world famous
famous's flow was easier to read, the punches were better an ther personals was aite ebuff to pull this one out....shabba ur flow was all over the place man i had trouble followin it good battle tho |
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