tha flash vs NoMercy
 

Battle Rules:

16 no higher no lower
No resicling
No Biting
And its a freestyle right now go!

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 03:41 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 03:41 AM.

Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 03:41 AM.

Now I Didn't Wanna Have To Put Ya Ass On Blast,
But My Shit Is Like Tear Gas You'll Need A Gas Mask//
It'll Take A Few Seconds For Me To Leave U Slumped In The Grass,
I Crack Ya Skull Open An Leave It Scattered On The Ground Like Glass//
I Roll With Pump But U Don't See Cause It's Stuffed In The Back,
An I Ain't An Athlete But I'll Be Running Ya Ass//
I'm A Carolina Native A Level 5 Tornado,
I'll Drop More Bombs On U Like Bush And N.a.t.o//
And I'll Rock U Nigga You'll Behind My Bars Just Like Yayo//
I'll Put U Where The Sun Don't Shyne,
And I Don't Mean The One In The Sky I Mean The One With The Nine//
Cause When U Step In My Hood They'll Be More Hands Pointing Then The Ones That Tell Time,
I'm Like A Train And U Ain't Gonna Disrail My Rail Line//
I Slaughter Ya Ass And Get Away With No Jail Time,
Ya Lyrics Should Be Destroyed Like A Failed Experiment//
And My Heater Will Leave U In The Dirt Like An Ancient Pyramid,
So Nigga Clean Ya Ears Out Cause I Hope Ya Hearing This//
Cause I Ain't Gonna Repeat Myself,
I'll Leave Ya Brain On The Ground Looking Like Chesse When It Melts//
And U Scheming For Help U Need A New Writer,
But It's To Late Cause I'll Have Ya Ass Retire Like J.r. Rider//
But While Fed Ex Packages Mail,
I'm Leaving Dots On Ya Ass As If U Was Practicing Brail//
So Nigga Don't Test My Skills,
I Ain't Next President But I Will Be On The Next Hundred Dollar Bill//
And Take This Like The Last Battle I Won't Show No Mercy,
Even An Ancient Voodoo Witch Couldn't Curse Me//
Nigga U Can't Be Serious,
I Thought After Losing The First Time You'd Realize Your Delerious//
And U Can't Handle My Rhymes,
So Go Back To Sleep Cause It's Almost Past Ya Nap Time//

i might of came outta the lockness/
but still in my verses some shit need to process/.
but maybe "Flash" needs to think, and take a geuss/
of who hes battlen cuz ill win cuz i got stonger finess/.
drop you off maybe, but im sure you wouldent/
win because im sure i would take you down and you couldent/.
and shouldent hafe to front me down dont need to make you frown/
yer a big fuckin blood hound, but ill just hafe to drop you on the ground/.
you askin me questions how i do it, i told you to shut up/
fuck you, you think your good fuck you aint the one rapin like kurupt/.
i just need some more time to prosess in the game/
shut up yer lame, just no theres to much stress here/.
now you got to leave to court and you askin for to much recess/
what you fat need to eat i aint impressed, man, i got more sucess/.
your less then me, now i feed you to many punches you done in two or three/
he ask who we be cant he see that im nockin you down in three/.

Uppin For Votes People, I'll Return The Favor And I Think No Mercy Will To

Just To Let Ya Know This Was A Rematch, So Vote Up On This

Uppin For Votes, Ya Need To Hop On This And Start Voting

ya vote on this ok but remember give me credit im young still learnin but ya hit us up

uppin for votes, vote up on this rematch and the original one to

Voted For: Tha Flash

ite
punches=flash
metas=flash
multis-=flash
/v/=flash

uppin for votes people, let's go, i'll return the favor

Voted For: Tha Flash

Tha Flash
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is decent.. flow falls off a little.. u had some multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. some of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

NoMercy
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is ok.. flow falls off.. no multis.. wordplay was decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. attempted personals, but they didnt connect..

Overall
Both had an ok structure.. both had an average flow.. neither had good personals.. Tha Flash had more multis.. better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Tha Flash gets my vote..

VOTE - THA FLASH

Voted For: NoMercy

nice man i like your flow u hit him with recess sucess

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Tha Flash

I looked over both of em and sorry cuz but flash is a better freestyler too. Not hatin just honest cuz.

thanks but i think this cat got me man

Voted For: NoMercy

iight cho this battle wasnt hott but i have ta vote fa sum 1 s0o im goin wit tha flash

u won cuz u came a lil harder and ya structure was betta

the otha boi used the same wrds to rhyme shit (three and three) lol mayb it was a mistake it happens but that lost ya tha battle since it was s0o close sry mann

vote=tha flash

nah THA FLASH WHAT UP I SAID THE FLASH CMON NOW

Voted For: Tha Flash

flash your shit is streched as fuck and worded bad them punches was ok but they couldve been dope worded a little bit diffrent still hard though vocab is good structure is off disses wasnt really there a 5/10
mercy no good punches or disses no hate but work on that stucture is good as well as vocab a ok verse but no good punches made you lose 3/10

up front you said you voted for lil flash but ya thanks then but ovealy you werent reading are songs if you look hard you will kno that i havent been righten good at my dads but ya ill write a song and ya ill be dope now but i didnt say three three it was three be see me i had a bunch in there

Voted For: NoMercy

yo dis goes to nemercy but not by far, this was a close battle as all fuck, but here it is, nomercy kept goin on wit his shit n kept to one topic n kept rippin n lsahin at da flash, flash yo shit was koo dawg but yo struc n vocab was kinda off but i got it it was kinda hard thats the only reason! but nice battle

v/nomercey

both yall return da favor links r at da bottom NO HATE!

Voted For: Tha Flash

tha flash came way harder in this battle, wicked rhymes and wordplay in some of your lines, good opener kinda weak closer but pretty dope verse, good multis in areas

nomercy, nice closer with rhyming the same word....weak...not bad i guess, semicore punches, you coulda came harder

tha flash gets my vote

drop an honest one on this shit
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...543354&posted=1